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RaikachanCrafts [2013-07-04 13:31:29 +0000 UTC]

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I'm gonna try myself on a critique here X3 I'll focus on the colouring for you Ama and on the sketch/lineart for Nath ~

First, I like the chibi style that is used here, Mane and Ama look adorable x3 The poses of both are dynamic and show that they are in movement here ^^ Which makes sense since both are fighting and trying to get the other one either close or away from themselves xD The lineart is really clean and has - despite the simplified chibi style - many details that make the picture come to life ^^ the only thing bothering me personally is, that Mane seems to look up to Ama's ears or something... it's kinda unfocused and confusing me xD To make the lineart brown instead of black gives the picture a warm feeling in the end and I like that the eyes don't have the usual Sonic border :3 Really good job here Nath!

Now for the colouring... I think this is the best colouring and most detailed one I ever saw from you Ama! Honestly, when I saw the picture I was really amazed to see such sharp details in the hair and for example on the fluffy tail of Ama X3 The shadow and lights are done with rather blue/yellow colour and I think that makes the picture more realistic ^^ Especially since Ama and Mane have similiar main colours X3
The background is not too catchy but is a nice contrast to the warm colours of the characters and fits well ^^

So all together you both did an amazing job on this drawing, all the little details you both put in show how much effort it was nd it was worth it! More Collabs like these! xD

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Amalika [2013-07-11 14:48:38 +0000 UTC]

I should leave a comment as well now, shouldn't I?

Really, the sketch was already sooo adorable q___q The poses are really great ;u; And the expressions definitely fit that situation Even if Mane's confused me a bit when I was coloring it but good that we fixed that mistake easily ^^ Your lineart is really clean as well! o: I see that you get used to SAI after all and I can just repeat myself - I actually prefer your SAI lineart. But that's a matter of taste and however you make lines, it always turns out supercool!
And even though these are chibis you managed to put all their details into this. And yet the picture doesn't look stuffed! On top of that the details didn't make coloring harder at all, even if it looked like a lot at first glance o.o

Thanks to you making lineart like that I managed to learn a lot with coloring! If you had drawn her tail differently (=the way I usually do) I would have never colored it as fluffy as it is. The same goes for the hair and Mane's tail and trousers and well... somehow everything? xD That collab was an absolutely interesting experience with great lineart of amanezing characters 8D

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FOX-POP [2013-07-01 09:40:38 +0000 UTC]

you did a very good job! Both of you!

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1muti1 [2013-06-30 01:04:19 +0000 UTC]

What a great result did you guys got, it's simply amazing. It seems you got some sinergy and understanding of the art style of the anohther, that's something great of this collabs. Kepp going you two.

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ASB-Fan [2013-06-29 22:10:58 +0000 UTC]

soo now to your part nuath xD

Mane Croone and Ama Racoon ppfff xD

well the outlines are really good and the poses xD
ama looks like she´s going to kick in manes stomage >D xD
and manes ears ;A; i want to touch them
pfff xD why dont u let ama color every of your sketches?
i love your collabs ;M; wheterthey are traditional or digital ;A;

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