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FFFFFF this took me ages. But I had to do it. The world needs more leopard art :Y

I've been studying African trees to give my comic the right environment, and I've been trying hard to draw this kind of tree in particular: the Yellow Fever tree, a kind of acacia, very common in Ngorongoro Crater's Lerai Forest, where Africa lives and where the comic takes place. And guess what, this tree is ACTUALLY yellow! [link] its bark is covered with a powder-like substance that makes it yellow, isn't it lovely?
Africa took me around half an hour to make. The tree, it took FOREVER. I've drawn and coloured all the little leaves one by one, and studied hard to give depth to the picture What do you think of this way of colouring?
And what do you think of the overall picture?^^ Please let me know, I'd love to hear feedback on this piece

I hope you like it^^

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ARVEN92 In reply to ??? [2013-07-31 09:04:52 +0000 UTC]

FFF I'm really sorry for the very late reply! D8


My, thank you SO much for this fantastic critique, I loved reading it^^

And I think your English is great^^ But if you prefer, we can speak in French


I'm really happy you like the shading on this picture^^ It's true that I didn't use layers, and it was quite a challenge to get all those tones of green there without them erasing one another


Hehe, you're right about the white background, I should have definitely added something else to cover that white But it's true, once I finished the leaves, all I wanted was to post the picture XD That was my mistake :'D

And you're right about that too Africa does seem a bit unbalanced, like her rear is about to fall down I have to make more exercise on this pose XD

And thanks a lot for the final encouragement! I agree, next time I will work on a more interesting pose and perspective There will be plenty of tree scenes in the comic ^_^


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DarknessRequiems In reply to ARVEN92 [2013-08-27 19:57:46 +0000 UTC]

pfpfppfpfpfpf it's nothing really ^^


oh i'm glad you did enjoyed it ^^ <3 oh really it's a big compliment to me, i always wanted to speak very well engish, i love this language so i am glad when people congrats me on it no it's okay really, i don't want to speak french here, i want to practise english as much as i can~


i understand, it may have been difficult as long as you can't "erase" things when you fail at making them :/


ahahaha i know this situation xD when you're like "AAAAH FINISHED I AM GOING TO....NOOO I FORGOT SOMETHING" and in the end you don't add the missing thing or rush it


don't worry i'll be here to catch her if you make her fall again : P


i hope you will have fun making them ^^ i find it truely interesting to vary perspectives and poses


good luck for your nexts works!



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ARVEN92 In reply to DarknessRequiems [2013-09-13 19:21:15 +0000 UTC]

Aww that is lovely, and perfectly ok!


LOL I agree! That is very frustrating, hehe! XD

I sure will^^ I love varying perspectives and poses so much


Truly thank you so much^^

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PowerofAwesome [2013-07-10 21:35:16 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


im not sure if you were going for the realistic view but if you were, the animal would have probably already slid off by now. i like the bluish looking tail, but it doesnt really work with the other colors... i like how you used several shades of green for the eyes and the eyes themselves look amazing! the spots look really uniques and not just like circles with color. i like the pose but i would have made the branch a bit wider or her legs more on the branch. the branch and leaves look good but the spikier branches look like they would hurt her if she wasnt carefull enough. i like how you made it full view up close and the other branches fuzzy. i also like how you outlines everything neatly so the colors didnt run together with the sky. all in all, i like what you did!

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ARVEN92 In reply to PowerofAwesome [2013-07-16 12:56:32 +0000 UTC]

Oh my, thank you for this lovely critique!


Well, despite the cartoonish-looking leopard, for the tree, I wanted to attempt something rather realistic, so thank you a lot for pointing out my mistakes^^

Thank you for pointing out that her pose is off balance, I'll need to be careful with that when drawing the actual comic (I'll represent the leopard sitting in trees very often)

Truly thank you so much for your feedback, I truly appreciate it^^

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PowerofAwesome In reply to ARVEN92 [2013-07-23 23:26:45 +0000 UTC]

welcome! sorry for late response ill explain in my journal!

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ARVEN92 In reply to PowerofAwesome [2013-07-24 23:57:01 +0000 UTC]

Aww no worries at all

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ZoraTheTwilightDrake [2016-08-21 16:06:49 +0000 UTC]

Looks like a pain to draw XD
Then you'd definitely LOVE drawing THIS, right?Β www.travelchannel.com/content/…
Easy peasy! ^^

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ARVEN92 In reply to ZoraTheTwilightDrake [2016-08-27 12:44:16 +0000 UTC]

OOOOH gosh all that detail XD
Jokes aside, I may actually have to draw something like that soon...

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ZoraTheTwilightDrake In reply to ARVEN92 [2016-08-27 13:06:23 +0000 UTC]

Ohoh!

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SilkenWinds [2016-06-25 13:39:47 +0000 UTC]

This is beautiful! Your traditional art makes me drool.. πŸ’œ

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ARVEN92 In reply to SilkenWinds [2016-06-28 23:03:14 +0000 UTC]

Aww thank you! <3

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RebeccaTripp [2015-12-09 17:59:47 +0000 UTC]

I want to pet her.Β  :3

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ARVEN92 In reply to RebeccaTripp [2015-12-09 18:28:46 +0000 UTC]

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W-Prancis [2014-10-01 00:25:12 +0000 UTC]

Love that pose!! she looks as if she is daydreamingΒ 

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ARVEN92 In reply to W-Prancis [2014-10-01 10:27:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank you a lot^^

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W-Prancis In reply to ARVEN92 [2014-10-02 23:05:02 +0000 UTC]

no prob Β 

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ARVEN92 In reply to W-Prancis [2014-10-04 11:13:00 +0000 UTC]

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sisiouragan [2013-11-25 18:44:52 +0000 UTC]

direction les favoris *O*

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ARVEN92 In reply to sisiouragan [2013-11-25 18:48:57 +0000 UTC]

Yaaaap merci! <3

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Soob [2013-10-11 16:11:01 +0000 UTC]

This is stunning! The leaves are the exact opposite of generic - they look like what they are, but at the same time, not overwhelmingly convoluted - you've really captured the essence of the yellow fever tree. And I love how you've done the blue tinges to the shadows.

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ARVEN92 In reply to Soob [2013-10-15 21:57:09 +0000 UTC]

My, thank you SO much for this lovely comment!

I'm glad you think the leaves give a nice effect I was afraid they might look too confusing and flat.

This picture was great fun to make, mixing cold tones with warm ones!

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UnicornCat [2013-09-28 12:19:49 +0000 UTC]

WOW! Je suis très impressionée de ton image! Je l´adore - et je pense aussi que le monde a besoin de plus d´images des leopards ^^
Mais il y a quelque chose je pense que tu peux faire plus bon: lΒ΄arbre. la transition de couleur des feuilles prΓ¨s et de loin nΒ΄est pas parfait maintenant, je trouve. Je pense que tu devrais impliquer des franges des feuilles de loin avec un marquer aussi, peut-Γͺtre un vert foncΓ©.
Mais le leopard est parfait - comme toujours xD
(pfew... now IΒ΄m proud of me xD so much French o.O)

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ARVEN92 In reply to UnicornCat [2013-10-09 21:25:00 +0000 UTC]

Aww mais merciiii! ^^

Ah, je vois ce que tu veux dire, je suis d'accord! Merci pour ton conseil^^

Et merci encore! XD

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Babou-Shka [2013-09-04 17:51:03 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful.

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ARVEN92 In reply to Babou-Shka [2013-09-05 08:51:58 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Babou-Shka In reply to ARVEN92 [2013-09-05 10:30:59 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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ARVEN92 In reply to Babou-Shka [2013-09-05 10:41:00 +0000 UTC]

^^

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Sally-Ce [2013-08-21 20:07:04 +0000 UTC]

OMGOMGOMGOMG!!! *O*
This is stunning! Drawing all those leaves must have taken forever! O.O The tree looks so realistic, and Africa is beautiful! Grrrrreat job!
Go Arvy!

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ARVEN92 In reply to Sally-Ce [2013-08-23 23:03:51 +0000 UTC]

Hoho, thank you so much my friend^^

it's true, those leaves did take a while indeed O.O

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Sally-Ce In reply to ARVEN92 [2013-08-24 18:05:51 +0000 UTC]

No problems!

I can see that!

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ARVEN92 In reply to Sally-Ce [2013-08-24 22:41:43 +0000 UTC]

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paws245 [2013-07-31 14:28:00 +0000 UTC]

I love it, Especially the tree and background! But I have to say, I feel like Africa's legs need to be a bit longer, and her paws much bigger. Overall, great job!

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ARVEN92 In reply to paws245 [2013-08-02 09:26:56 +0000 UTC]

Aww thank you^^

And you're right, I too think her rear is a little off balance Thanks for pointing that out, I'll watch out for it on upcoming tree scenes

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SuperSaiya-jinwolf [2013-07-24 19:55:06 +0000 UTC]

It's amazing how much detail you added in this. Africa looks so cute! X3

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ARVEN92 In reply to SuperSaiya-jinwolf [2013-07-24 21:38:40 +0000 UTC]

Aww thank you so much <3

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SuperSaiya-jinwolf In reply to ARVEN92 [2013-07-27 21:26:16 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome ^.^

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ARVEN92 In reply to SuperSaiya-jinwolf [2013-07-27 22:03:15 +0000 UTC]

^^

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Itrakat [2013-07-20 14:20:24 +0000 UTC]

It takes a lot of effort drawing these trees.I mean,if it takes lots of patience drawing just THIS DRAWING,won't you get impatient drawing AFRICA?

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ARVEN92 In reply to Itrakat [2013-07-24 17:07:40 +0000 UTC]

You're right, this was just a test to see how much it took

The actual pages will have a quicker and perhaps less detailed technique for trees

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umnokorito [2013-07-20 11:30:15 +0000 UTC]

O.OΒ 

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ARVEN92 In reply to umnokorito [2013-07-24 17:06:59 +0000 UTC]

O.O

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umnokorito In reply to ARVEN92 [2013-07-26 10:16:06 +0000 UTC]

Mother of God....This thing is AMAZING!

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ARVEN92 In reply to umnokorito [2013-07-29 23:51:18 +0000 UTC]

Aww thanks^^

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umnokorito In reply to ARVEN92 [2013-08-01 20:28:33 +0000 UTC]

This thing..amaziiiing!You should make tutorial for drawing trees!

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ARVEN92 In reply to umnokorito [2013-08-02 10:19:10 +0000 UTC]

Naww I such at trees XD

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umnokorito In reply to ARVEN92 [2013-08-08 22:35:19 +0000 UTC]

Wat?But youre one of best tree artists i evr saw!

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ARVEN92 In reply to umnokorito [2013-08-15 23:03:05 +0000 UTC]

Who, me? D8

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Alkraas [2013-07-17 00:04:59 +0000 UTC]

Hi!
I featured your deviation here
Have a nice day!

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ARVEN92 In reply to Alkraas [2013-07-18 23:23:52 +0000 UTC]

Oh my, thank you SO much for the feature, I truly appreciate it <3

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