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ARVEN92 In reply to ??? [2023-09-10 22:54:03 +0000 UTC]
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dreammeadowss [2017-07-06 19:23:38 +0000 UTC]
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Hello! Here again with another critique! I will say that you inspire me so much with your outstanding works and comic pages! Here, we're rushed into some very obvious heat, and it's very easy to see that not only are they exhausted, they need water, yet there's none around for miles, which adds to the drama and excitement, and the drive to read more! Another thing crossing my mind is the fact that Africa can be rough with her cubs, however, in these pages, she is shading her cubs from the sun, which I find to be very motherly, and shows the instinct that mothers feel to protect their children. The expressions and postures on this particular page are important too. Panels 1 and 3 show how tired Africa is by her head held low and her open mouth with furrowed brows. I love your works, and am seriously looking forwards to the next pages! You're amazing!
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TwilightOreoAura [2019-06-23 21:50:24 +0000 UTC]
Sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo hot.
XD
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XSamuraiEdgeX [2018-05-23 19:01:48 +0000 UTC]
Binti sooo whiny~~~~
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spider123357 [2017-07-16 02:43:32 +0000 UTC]
How every South Carolinanian feels.
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Ewarriorcat In reply to spider123357 [2017-07-25 05:06:16 +0000 UTC]
And all Virginians! We had temps up to 100 f
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spider123357 In reply to Ewarriorcat [2017-07-30 01:59:42 +0000 UTC]
O no! You should've gone up to the northern states!!
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justanotherangrybird [2017-07-13 08:08:24 +0000 UTC]
And then by the subtle jab at comic logic, we brought forth rain of water and meat for them to enjoy. jkjk.
I love the shading effect you did on the cubs! So cute.
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CallmeBACON [2017-07-11 16:26:24 +0000 UTC]
PLEASE< dont let the little sister die!!! :"{
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FoalFire [2017-07-11 00:43:47 +0000 UTC]
Omg the artwork for these continue to amaze me.
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ARVEN92 In reply to FoalFire [2017-08-03 19:31:37 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much!
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xXSpiritXx3 [2017-07-09 10:12:46 +0000 UTC]
is binti supposed to be an arabic name?
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CobaltCrows In reply to aishi1nightworrior12 [2017-07-17 02:34:52 +0000 UTC]
I don't know what it means in Arabic, it might be 'daughter' too, but it is daughter in Swahili
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catdogduck12 [2017-07-09 08:32:31 +0000 UTC]
I'm waiting for next page <3
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animationhero44 [2017-07-08 17:52:24 +0000 UTC]
If Africa was smart she move at night or the evening .
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DraconicVortex In reply to animationhero44 [2017-07-08 18:04:44 +0000 UTC]
I was thinking the same but its probably dangerous. There could be lions in the area, they hunt at dusk or Chui might be flanking them 😨
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animationhero44 In reply to DraconicVortex [2017-07-08 18:09:22 +0000 UTC]
Actually a lot predators do hunt at dark so you're right. But I don't think lazy ass chui is going to chase after them. Someone would steal his hard stolen land.
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Altraion100 [2017-07-08 12:13:49 +0000 UTC]
Great drawings. The twins are so cute.
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Zalay02 [2017-07-08 11:51:35 +0000 UTC]
This is Australia in the summer... it can get up to 40 degrees celcius! (approx 104 Fahrenheit). It's winter now, though, so I can't relate XD
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CobaltCrows In reply to Zalay02 [2017-07-14 22:32:55 +0000 UTC]
Yes! my fellow Australian!
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GibbyBree [2017-07-07 23:36:56 +0000 UTC]
Another jaw-dropping work of art!
One question: Mosi is an itty bitty kitty with ze muzclez. Do leopards have muscles like that when they're as young as he is?
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ARVEN92 In reply to GibbyBree [2017-08-04 14:57:13 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! Haha well, I imagined that he must have lost a few liquids recently and his muscles are showing through more at the moment. That's not necessarily a healthy sign for a cub though D:
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MipMipDead [2017-07-07 23:35:40 +0000 UTC]
Hey, you know kids, mama is suffering worst. You two still have shade from Mama Africa xD
back to the real topic.. Hot you say? Is it, I dunno, hot like Death Valley? My hometown is only a couple of dreadful miles and a few hours away :'D
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Hiddenfaithy [2017-07-07 04:11:15 +0000 UTC]
The fact that they're using their mom as shade is a clever idea, but dear god I feel bad at how hot it is for them
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ARVEN92 In reply to Hiddenfaithy [2017-08-06 08:59:10 +0000 UTC]
True that poor babies ;;
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DaniBeez [2017-07-06 23:14:55 +0000 UTC]
The heat effect in the first panel is awesome!
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ARVEN92 In reply to DaniBeez [2017-08-06 08:59:16 +0000 UTC]
Thank you!
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Keyotea [2017-07-06 20:45:10 +0000 UTC]
I blame the hole in the ozone layer.
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ARVEN92 In reply to Keyotea [2017-08-06 08:59:22 +0000 UTC]
LOL
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aqdrobert [2017-07-06 20:20:34 +0000 UTC]
Need to find gas station....
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