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YEEESH PAGE
Hoho, and RIGHT when you were expecting some blood and guts and... gory scenes and... vampires... whatever, well, now you have a MEANWHILE
But I bet some of you will be happy, 'cause we get to see two old friends we had left behind for a while
Orca and Cheetah^^Oh my, what do my eyes see? 8D Is that true? Is Orca actually SMILING? 8D
OMG I can't believe it XD I literally had to try many times to draw that panel XD I'm totally not used to drawing Orca smiling, so she kept having a weird face XD
But I hope you like it^^ This is probably the only time you'll see her smiling in this chapter
Also, in this page I attempted adding brown shadows instead of the usual black
What do you think of them?Stay tuned for more! <3
Coloured Pencils on A4 Paper.
Several hours.
Characters and art (c)
I want to improve, I greatly appreciate feedback and constructive criticism regarding anatomy, page flow and overall composition. Thank you!
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FFFF I'm SO sorry for the extremely late answer ;_;
Hoho thank you a ton for liking this page XD Making Orca smile was really hard D8
And I'm so happy you think the story is evolving into something original <3 I was really afraid readers might have lost the interest at this point, but I'm so glad they didn't <3 I'd have never expected that
OHOHO thank you a ton once again, truly <3
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Firstly,I want to say:What an adorable page!
Full of OxC
First panel-Quite good,I like the golden outline around them.Or the parts that did not have cross hatching xD
Speaking of which,cross hatching does not seem to like sulphur so much xD
I mean,maybe you could try soft shading for the sulphur?:3 Just an opinion.
Panel Two-D'aaaaaw!Cheetah,you what?Aren't you ALWAYS happy?XD
Only tiny problem is that Orca's ear seems a little narrow and small.
Panel Three-Ohoho Orca!That face <3 But there is a typo-might of...might have might worked better...Please xD
4-Orca DERP xD
Should als
Anyway,Orca's right eye is a bit small and to the side...Other than that,sweet job!:3
5-Okay,Orca didyoucutyourlegoff?
Okay,joking!xD
But maybe you could shorten the line that separated the paw and leg...
And ORCA!That is no way to speak to your lover!D:<
6-Orca you smiiiiled!Right eye looks small but this panel is wonderful...: D
7-Orca's head looks small xDAlso right eye looks a bit weird but Cheetah is do cute xD!
Should alSo point out that I love the brown shadows but on the ground,brown looks a little unnatural,so you can use black there...?
Hope this helped Arvy!
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Oh my, I'm terribly sorry for the uber late reply ;_;
Thank you SO much for this awesome crit! <3
I agree with you about the cross hatching XD I'm thinking of using a smudger to make it more blended, I'll see what results I obtain
Hoho thanks for spotting the typo too XD I corrected now
And for that 'cut' paw, I see what you mean XD The perspective always gets me there, I'll need to work harder on that kind of angle
Ah, Orca's right eye looks small because it's closed and wounded^^
Ohoho thanks a lot for the tip on the shadows too
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You're welcome ^^
Ah yeah
Can't wait for the newest
Page
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Hoho, I'm uploading it this very moment
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He does not know how to talk to the girl he likes xD
poor xd
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Aw shieness she wolf. Admit it Orca you're Love him XD
(that was my first time saw, when i haven't got a account on dA)
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xD I seriously cant say it enough omg xD
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While I have characters that do the same, it's STILL facepalm.
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*throws a potato chip at cheetah*
OPEN YOUR EYES SHE LIKES YOU
((im eating potato chips XD))
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Orca: You know, I don't understand you sometimes. One minute, I feel like I'm talking to a wall, and the other...
Orca: I feel like no one could understand me better than you do.
Cheetah: My, my, you're smiling! What do I owe the big honour to?
Orca: See? That's exactly what I meant.
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OMG that was just perfect XD
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Wow, wowo, wowo, wowo,woooow.....
if if motyl was with them, couldn't she just... Heal orca?
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It's explained a few pages earlier. Check out page 115
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OH JUST DO THE WOLF EQUIVALENT OF A KISS ALREADY
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Cute :3
I think those brown shadows fits really well with the smokey background c:
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My, thanks so much! It was great fun to experiment with the shadows
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OOooh Shysh cheeta SHYSH!! 
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I love this relationship :'D
Now Motyl and that little dragon pup should get together and the world would be perfect
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Has it been so long since I've look at your art or did you change your coloring style a bit.. something looks off bout these last few pages I've seen. Still really good though
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Oh thanks for saying that
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maybe thats it lol idk or maybe I really have gone crazy
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