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thelordhimself [2015-09-08 19:23:14 +0000 UTC]
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what, so many comments yet no critique? then I will answer your request
ok, so first about what we see: Sunset Shimmer as some kind of Warrior/Fairy. The clothes are done really well, both in design and shading. Her fairy-like wings made from "light and fairy dust" are subtle, yet still recognizable, and give her some kind of magic aura, strenghten by her left hand bursting with sparks and her veins being filled with magic. Looks like she is casting some sort of spell that increases her agility
Her hair is well done, but i must say, the look on her face, although in an emotional sense perfectly carrying the message, looks a little bit masculine, don't know if that was what you were going for.
the plants overall fit quite good in the scenario.
two more things: her right foot seems kinda twisted, and I think a medieval european longsword with straight blade would fit her better
originality: well it is unusual to see mlp cast portrayed in this way, as warrior with a darker atmosphere, I like that
technique: ok sorry I'm not very experienced with digital art, so my opinion might seem worthless here, but I think it's really fitting. the smooth edges, the lighteffects, it all works really good together
impact: it's sunset, who doesn't love her? as i said, it's an unusual depiction of her, so it catches the eye, also, the good contrast between her magic and the dark forrest is pretty good
overall, I like it e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>
just one more thing you could improve, in my point of view, but I like your style anyway
in the first equestrian girls movie, she turned into this raging she-demon. maybe you could give her more demon-like wings instead of fairywings? I know it's just my taste, but I would love to see you try that, like she is in some kind of distress, and unleashes her dark power to be able to fight against a strong foe or sth like that, that would be awesome
but, as i said, that point is only an opinion, not a real critique
P.S.: english isn't my mothertongue, so if my grammar sucks forgive me and if I have failed to deliver the message, feel free to ask me
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Beef--Wellington [2015-09-06 16:35:13 +0000 UTC]
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Wow! I have got to say, I was NOT expecting this. Looking at your other works, I know you're an Applejack fan, so this was definitely an eye opener from the get-go. And you're right, creating a human face from scratch is a real challenge, but you delivered.
Excellent spin on the title you chose. I also love the phoenix emblem on her armor. From those, I can deduce that you've seen the short "My Past Is Not Today". I mean, let's be honest, who hasn't?
I also like that you kept her original colors instead of the new blue she's started wearing. An interesting choice to go with the saber, excellent. All in all, you have astounded me.
Oh, and if you DO plan on making more of these with the rest of the Mane Six, let me be the first of hopefully many to say good luck to you, and I patiently await the next one.
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Talanlirr [2019-10-08 01:31:05 +0000 UTC]
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bruiser128 [2018-01-21 18:45:31 +0000 UTC]
I enjoy her story for being a cautionary tale in how one can get in over their head when blinded by resentment
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JetPowerFIE [2015-10-09 03:31:52 +0000 UTC]
I am by no means trying to belittle it, but I'm getting a "Friendship is Manly" vibe, mostly from here facial expression. I love it though, and (maybe its just me) but I love how you made her look much older than AJ, like she should, (but doesn't because of times loops or whatever)
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Fixap [2015-10-04 15:45:38 +0000 UTC]
NICE!
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Draxulaura [2015-09-16 21:09:35 +0000 UTC]
Love it
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N3sTlyPhaNtoM [2015-09-10 04:53:08 +0000 UTC]
Wow. These are pretty nice
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Konrax [2015-09-08 05:50:54 +0000 UTC]
Those wings and magic in her hands gives her a images of a Paladin kinda thing.
Redemption is a path all paladins end up going through to gain their holy spells.
I like this art alot.
Now I can only see her like a Tirion fordring or Uther lightbringer or better, Arthas(All warcraft characters xD)
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Bioshock140 [2015-09-08 03:20:23 +0000 UTC]
Cool!
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SeriousJupiter [2015-09-08 00:16:42 +0000 UTC]
She looks mostly great, but let me just say that her hair REALLY doesn't look good in this particular style. It's more like a terrible dye than her natural hair color. Anyway, everything else about this picture is awesome.
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coolclaytony [2015-09-07 16:26:04 +0000 UTC]
Sunset Shimmer, Redeemed (1)(R)(W)
Planeswalker- Sunset
+1: Prevent the next 2 damage that would be dealt to you and each creature you control each turn until your next upkeep.
-1: Sunset Shimmer, Redeemed deals 2 damage to target creature or player.
-8: Place an emblem that says "As long as it's your turn, creatures you control have indestructible."
Loyalty: 3
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IBAIPshow [2015-09-07 12:29:30 +0000 UTC]
So very sweet. Glad I was there to see this piece come to life in the stream. Thanks again for sharing AM /)
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J-TestMan [2015-09-07 03:07:49 +0000 UTC]
Praise the sun!
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DarkstarWolf53 [2015-09-06 22:46:02 +0000 UTC]
This is amazing!
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A3Kitsune [2015-09-06 21:48:33 +0000 UTC]
I like.
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Disneybrony [2015-09-06 20:52:06 +0000 UTC]
You should draw Sunset more. You make her look awesome!
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Yay295 [2015-09-06 18:57:00 +0000 UTC]
I think it looks like she's crushing a lifegem from Dark Souls 2.
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AgentTasmania [2015-09-06 14:17:24 +0000 UTC]
Gone for a pike form armour like the IS-3 heavy tank, eh?
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kingdragon7 [2015-09-06 13:47:54 +0000 UTC]
kinda looks like a pyromancer from dark souls
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MustLoveFrogs [2015-09-06 12:54:24 +0000 UTC]
Go Sunset!!
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K4nK4n [2015-09-06 12:46:20 +0000 UTC]
Though I don't like seeing ponies being turned into humans, this image is rather cool.
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Pirill-Poveniy [2015-09-06 12:39:46 +0000 UTC]
Aw yiss. More Sunset is always appreciated!
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Drakenhof [2015-09-06 12:31:02 +0000 UTC]
At first, I thought that was an Estus Flask xD
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MetalAmethyst [2015-09-06 12:12:35 +0000 UTC]
AssasinMonkey drew Sunset Shimmer, with a sword and fire powers... YOU'RE THE BEST EVAH!!!
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TheOtterPony [2015-09-06 11:21:55 +0000 UTC]
With that sword, I am having pirate vibes for this. And I can imagine her leaving her crew and ship ashore while venturing into jungle to find the lost treasure.
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0Alfa [2015-09-06 10:41:39 +0000 UTC]
Aha! A Spellsword, eh?
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Krazylec [2015-09-06 10:02:58 +0000 UTC]
By the power of the sun!
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