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I'm thinking of submitting this (it's a rough out) for a street painting festival next month, I've gotten some feedback, and i'm not sure how I want to render it, but i wanted some otehr feedback on it. Should I draw and color it for the festival? Would the composition work well in a 6foot by 4foot section of pavement in chalk? Need commentsi know it's rough and unfinished. I'm looking for composition remarks.
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Great perspective here. . .this would look amazing on a sidewalk! Vivid colors used with real deep and dark would make a great contrast to go with the perspective. This will really catch eyes at the festival should you plan to do this.
I see that it is a sketch, and the left hand (left for the man), the fingers, I guess you were trying different positions. It does look a little distorted, but being that it is a sketch, I can understand that. So, when it is cleaned up, I'm sure you will have the finger situation all figured out. hehehe
Maybe add another point of interest as well, the upper left corner looks a little empty. I know that you will add some kind of interesting sky colors and whatnot, but something solid, I don't know - a bird or two. . .But it does seem like it is missing something. Just a thought.
I do like this, I would love to see this finished.
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Amazing work - I'd go for lots of blacks on a white background. Charcoal and chalk - expressive lines.
Great drawing so far my friend. I would also consider altering his right forearm to match the strength of his left.
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i actually think i might like the sketchy version better (that is if i'd ever seen the finished one) i dunno, i just like the transparent feeling of it.
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i think the perspective is great, and in my opinion it would work really well on the pavement. the hand almost seems to leap out and it could startle people. (a good thing)
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well, the perspective is really interesting. i think that this would be a cool piece!
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I think its rad, I dont neccessarily think its needs work with the neck or anything because it looks to me as if maybe hes in pain and scrunching and letting his head hang down, its just a skecth and as a sketch I think its rad. I love the sketchy lines all around, good proportions. It would look good in chalk, dunno how colored in tho.
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That would work well for pastels, really enable you to do something eye catching. The far hand needs some work...
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Would gravity not pull him further down? Should his neck be a little longer?
Don't get me wrong, I love the work, feels really pro, but those were my thoughts.
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I like it alot... Ya i think it would work well with chalk. Nice sketch!
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