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Published: 2017-01-22 19:28:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 291; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 0
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I think I fucked something up with the colouring, but I'm not sure what...Commissioned by Alexg47 back in August
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A thing that I would do with the coloring is add little highlights sparingly to the edges of your piece(in the shading) to make the character seem a little more 3-d.
There is a video on youtube that explains a trick on the edge lighting if you need reference :33
I would be a bit more gentle with the shading, and not blurring it as much. For shading, move the shades along the color wheel, like for the skin, instead of using the same color for the lighting and the shade, you would move down or up the wheel, and saturate it slightly to be adding different shades of oranges, and reds. :33
Hope that helps!(btw this is my first review, I tried to get it to make sense as much as I could!) c:
But the does character look very cute!
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The knees look kinda odd. The coloring is okay though, and the line art is pretty clean. The whole thing though is nice!
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Thank you!
I'm having trouble with drawing knees, and this was kind of my way of simplifying them, the best I could do so far... Do you have any suggestions as for how to fix that?
Edit: I think I saw what you mean. The knee on the left, right? I can tell what I did wrong, but I don't know how to fix that...
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I suggest that you look up some references and tutorials for knees. I also suggest that you use lines or the circle tool to measure proportions for the knee.
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Wow, this is really neat! To be honest, I think it's more her face that's odd than the colouring, but this is really good regardless.
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Yeah, I saw that too, but this is the first time I managed to shade a face properly (and by that I mean it doesn't look flat)
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