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ATrueNorseman — A Mental Life, Transversed

Published: 2008-11-25 06:11:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 109; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description A Sorry drifts through my sea,
a sea so transparent, so thick, so
ever changeable.

This movement it drifts within that gray
smokey sea, with no qualms of the
harm it takes among its dismal
landscape.

Black with gray wisps that crest large
waves of gloom, there rides that Sorry
further and further. In what direction,
only destiny shall choose.

Nothing guides it but it's intuition at
best. For the line of black ocean upon
black skies leaves no room for navigation,
just a real test of true merit and dedication.

And there lies the clue, to its zeal,
and it lies in the cause it has thus
drift, and no threat could pose
stronger than the will. It carries forth.

A will to change that dreary sea;
to make it blue and bright. Either dead
or alive, its Sorry-soul can rest, for a
real life well spent.

~MK
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Comments: 4

SchizoTigress [2009-08-05 09:33:48 +0000 UTC]

...very beautiful... very symbolic.

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ATrueNorseman In reply to SchizoTigress [2009-08-05 20:55:03 +0000 UTC]

thanks~
it's definitely been a long while ago since i wrote this 1

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hayleymariemix [2008-11-26 06:39:07 +0000 UTC]

you left too fast for me to reply..



i really like this,
and it does flow really well.

:]

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ATrueNorseman In reply to hayleymariemix [2008-11-26 09:49:00 +0000 UTC]

oh hohoho! Sorry, and thanks! As soon as I had a moment to spare and maybe talk about some pieces with anyone else on the chatroom, I found myself pulled into another circumstance. So I was quickly in and out--not very productive ><. But I'm glad even that split second got the eye of another enthusiast!

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