Comments: 58
BlackDragon-Assassin [2017-09-20 15:03:29 +0000 UTC]
Cute story. Thinking of doing a darkrai or arceus tf. ^.=.^
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Fraxtin-CrashKedu [2017-09-08 09:04:36 +0000 UTC]
Aww..
Such a nice story.... Applause...
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
shadowbro2 [2016-03-05 06:12:57 +0000 UTC]
WHAT POKEMON FROM ABOVE IN THE CLOUDS!?!?!? THUNDERUS, ARCEUS, MEW, WHOO!?!?!?!??!?
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
gundamfan2 [2014-01-20 22:58:16 +0000 UTC]
aww that is a great story
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Moxxitits [2013-08-14 05:16:14 +0000 UTC]
Ho-ly Arceus, that was awesome, i am jealous. I wanna be a pokemon! Oh well, i guess the internet will have to do.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Jellicent18231234 [2012-09-22 12:49:49 +0000 UTC]
Can you make a male Jellicent
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Jellicent18231234 [2012-09-09 09:16:15 +0000 UTC]
That certain Pokemon,is it Arceus?
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
chat12916 [2011-10-19 21:13:33 +0000 UTC]
you have writer's spirit
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
UmbraDragonX [2011-09-05 10:53:48 +0000 UTC]
Love pokemon!
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
zemablade [2011-08-12 03:27:03 +0000 UTC]
Wow I completely loved both versions! You should be named the TF Emperror!
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
SpartanGZ [2011-08-02 20:40:24 +0000 UTC]
OMG
Don't think I sound lame or anything but my friends and I do a pretend game with lots of stuff in it (pokemon, halo etc.) And our Zoroark can transform people into themselves with night slash and a bite! I loved the idea and I LOVE your story.
PS we had a scene almost exactly like this in part 12 (yes I wright it down)
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
SpartanGZ In reply to AuraGuardianHadou [2011-08-03 01:39:41 +0000 UTC]
Thx for not thinking that I'm a total loser about that game.
Ps can I use this story as a script for part of a play?
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Maxis-Op [2011-06-24 13:31:24 +0000 UTC]
I wonder what company supplies your Peter clones.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Charmeleon99 [2011-05-30 08:01:58 +0000 UTC]
best story ever it was soo totaly worth reading i thought it would be boring but it was AWSOME!!!
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Thebalrog6 [2011-04-30 17:44:43 +0000 UTC]
in a pokemon battle,i beat the stuffing out of my friend after i transformed into a sceptile.i used only one pokemon,my trusted grovyle(he was supposed to evolve into a sceptile but i evolved instead of it).my friend had all level 100 pokemon.he said"your going down."i yelled at him and said"i'll win this battle no matter what,even though you beat me 50 thousand times......"he said"well,good luck with that.NOT."i said"i heard that."i beat him and he said"what?WHAT?!how could you beat me?!i'm better than you at everything!i even turned you into a sceptile and your gf into a grovyle just to make you happy!"i was stunned and i said"you......you did this to me and my gf?!"he said"well,yeah!after all of my victories over you,i felt like you needed to need more joy in your life."i used bullet seed on him and grabbed his neck.i yelled"you are the most generous scientist a friend could have!and i love you for it."i was still feeling victorious after the battle and my gf came over.we double-battled against my friend and another pro pokemon trainer friend of mine.we beat them with only our grovyle and treecko.we are the best pokemon and pokemon trainers ever.we're planning to get married this summer.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Elicario [2011-02-16 22:51:05 +0000 UTC]
sweet !!!i love the setup!!
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Fireflash-Rainclaw [2010-08-24 02:14:33 +0000 UTC]
Nicely done, good description on the tf. ^.=.^
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
krourou2 [2010-06-11 14:13:46 +0000 UTC]
Region info I've dug up so far: Isshu Region
Mascots: Black- Reshiram: Dragon type. Color: white. Does not evolve. Legendary. Revealed on both English and Japanese websites simultaneously with Zekrom, making them the first two Pokemon simultaneously revealed worldwide. No other data available.
White- Zekrom: Dragon type. Color: black. Does not evolve. Legendary. Revealed on both English and Japanese websites simultaneously with Reshiram, making them the first two Pokemon simultaneously revealed worldwide. No other data available.
Starter Pokemon: Grass- Tsutarja
Fire- Pokabu
Water- Mijumaru
Other info: Pokemon Black and Pokemon White are still in the very early stages, but their release dates, aside from in Korea and Australia, have been confirmed: Japan will release it this fall, while the U.S.A will release the games next spring (2011). As we all know, the difference in release dates is due to the fact that NoA (Nintendo of America) has to translate all the Japanese into English. And makes a few changes, I suspect, though to what I'm not sure.
For more info, go here:
[link]
I do not claim the Pokemon series as my own, because I'm not a member of Nintendo or Game Freak. Geez, Game Freak has been working with Nintendo on the Pokemon series for a LONG time. When I say long, I mean all the way back to the first generation games!
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
tfcknukles [2010-04-07 10:05:56 +0000 UTC]
nice work mate just saw the trailer. i hope the voice of zoroark is better than arceus.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Nitrinoxus [2010-03-07 08:13:25 +0000 UTC]
That Pokémon watching all of this... That wouldn't by any chance be Arceus, would it?
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Nitrinoxus In reply to AuraGuardianHadou [2010-03-09 16:26:16 +0000 UTC]
Well, there was the early mention of the Alpha Pokémon, and the depiction of the Pokémon watching unseen from on high sounded like a divine being.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Nitrinoxus In reply to AuraGuardianHadou [2010-03-09 22:08:27 +0000 UTC]
It makes sense, seeing as how Arceus was the creator of that universe.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
AuraGuardianHadou In reply to Nitrinoxus [2010-03-10 00:52:49 +0000 UTC]
Plus it's a fun way to make some things sound less rude XD (Arceus-damn it)
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Nitrinoxus In reply to AuraGuardianHadou [2010-03-10 03:18:18 +0000 UTC]
Not as catchy as some other phrases, like "with Arceus as my witness" or going to battle with "the Alpha's blessing". Something like that.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
SamPD2 [2010-03-06 22:30:08 +0000 UTC]
I had a sneaking suspision that when I heard the word Zoroark, I thought it would be a reference to the new generation of Pokemon. Mind you, I actually never even heard of the names of them before.
My other aussumption would have been that it would be a pokemon from the fake pokemon games, which actually wouldn't have been a bad idea.
Really, with the transformation, nothing is really special about it, with your average slash a human, then turn him or her into their respective attacker.
But that isn't nessecary a bad thing.
Overall, a transformation by the book was well executed.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
RevivedDragon [2010-02-18 12:45:40 +0000 UTC]
Absolutely brilliant! The structure of the story is very well presented, and I could definitely imagine the situation clearly in my mind with all those great descriptions.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
AuraGuardianHadou In reply to darkpidgeot10 [2010-02-23 00:36:27 +0000 UTC]
cool.
Speaking of TF, how is my comic coming along, i haven't heard from you in quite some time (note me it if its done)
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
godzilla99 [2010-02-15 13:52:03 +0000 UTC]
awesome story
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
TheLupineOne [2010-02-15 09:18:11 +0000 UTC]
Darn you! I was wanting to do the first Zoroark TF Fan Fiction!
It was going to be so awesome as well!
I don't think I'll actually do it now someone has beaten me...
You don't get a trophy.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
SuperGokuV [2010-02-15 08:40:06 +0000 UTC]
Congrats to the both you and Ben. Good job of making a TF on a pokémon who was unheard of a week ago and the first TF on Zoroark.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
golferdude666 [2010-02-14 23:36:21 +0000 UTC]
Pretty good job! I have read better, but I do like the story!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
| Next =>