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Description It was dark, rainy night in Sinnoh. The wind was blowing through the trees, leaves flying around in large masses. It was the end autumn, the time were the world lost its classic orange and red colors, shifting to a more gloomy shade of gray, turning white the instant it starts snowing. There was nobody outside of Hearthome, not even wild Pokémon. The place was very silent.

Maybe that was the reason why the young trainer had chills running down his spine the instant he left town. Probably wasn't the best time to leave, but promised his best friend that he was gonna get to his place in a few hours, so he had to hurry up.

"Can't be much longer now..." Peter muttered to himself as he started to run. He really didn't want to stay out too late, and he wanted to get to shelter just in case the weather got worse.

Seconds later he regretted thinking that, cause a few drops of rain started falling, and it got worse and worse in the following hour, until it was literally pouring with rain. The poor trainer started running, looking around for any kind of shelter. He eventually got out of the trees, and into an open area. Not far, there was a large circle of rocks, an in the middle a bigger rock with a rather interesting hole in it. Not the best shelter he could ask for...but better than anything.

Without hesitation he dashed for it as quickly as he could, not wishing to be soaked any further. Soon he was sitting in the archway that the rock had formed, looking on as the storm just seemed to get worse and worse.

"Damn it...how long is this going to last?" he asked himself, looking up at the clouds, seeing lighting shooting across the sky.

He sat there for around 30 minutes, the weather not showing any sign of improvement. What he didn't realise all this time...was the fact that he was not alone in that large hollow rock. Sleeping in the shadows, was a creature...and only now had noticed the trainer. The beast slowly got up and stepped out of the shadows, not looking very happy.

Peter had practically fallen asleep waiting for the storm to pass, his head bobbing from side to side, nearly hitting the wall on several occasions.

"Mmm...stop raining already..." He muttered in his sleep.

The creature slowly approached him, the trainer still unaware of its presence. It stopped right behind him, sniffing his neck.

"Mm...what is that..." He said, slowly roused back to consciousness as he felt the creatures breath against his neck. "How long have I been out for..." He let out a loud yawn as he stretched his back and arms.

The creature growled, and grabbed him from behind, tossing him outside into the mud.

"Agh, what the hell?!" He yelped, getting a face full of goopy mud as he landed back in the storm. "What in Arceus's name was that about?" He asked as he pushed himself back up to his feet.

He heard another growl. He had to wipe the mud off his face and turn around to finally see his attacker....and what he saw was beyond anything he would have ever expected to see.

Peter was a well informed trainer, he knew about pretty much all Pokemon species in Sinnoh...but that one he knew absolutely nothing about. From what he could see, it was a large, bipedal fox-like creature, roughly the same size as him. Its body was mostly covered in deep grey fur, with patches of black fur around its upper chest that protruded past its shoulders. Blood red claws lined its feet and hands, and streaks of red fur lined the edges of its lips and emerald green eyes. From the back of its head was a large mane which was roughly the size of its body, mostly red in colour with some black 'spikes' near the top of it, growing thinner towards the bottom, where a jade band was placed just a few inches away from the end of it. And from the looks of the creature, it was a female, which he could deduct from her shapely form, slender waist, and some details hidden under the dense fur on its chest.

"What... the..." He stammered, reaching for his Poké dex, seeing if it had any information on what he was looking at...and as expected, the Poké dex did not recognise the unknown Pokemon. He stared at the creature in confusion, not sure of what to do. The creature was doing the same, apparently relaxing a little now, noticing the intruderdidn't seem like a threat.

Many options flashed through Peter's mind. If that was really a Pokémon, he could catch her...it was probably one of a kind, or one of a few surviving individual in all Sinnoh. On the other hand, if he caught her, he would be probably killing off any possibility that creature had to find a mate, and maybe repopulate the region...after all, it was a rarePokémon.

"Who...or what...are you?" He asked, slowly approaching the creature. He was worried that if he tried going too fast, he'd be thrown back into the mud again, or thrown into something whichwouldn't grant him a soft landing.

She didn't look like she wanted to attack him, but she did keep a straight face, tilting her head a little to the side.

He sighed a little. He knew like everyone else that all these creatures could say was their name. He wasn't sure if that applied to ones that looked...special like this one, but a name at the least would help him out. "Your name? Your species?"

"Zor? Zoroark?" she said, looking confused.

"Zoroark...now that really is a new one on me..." He said, slowly approaching her. He was thoroughly soaked now, and it was hard to move in his drenched clothes.

She took a step back into the cave, still staring at him. She had one paw ready to strike now.

He stopped moving, standing his ground as he looked at her. He was at a loss what to do here, if he set one foot out of place, he really dreaded to think of the outcome.

And just as expected, as he took one tiny little step towards her...she dashed forward and swung her paw at him, scratching his chest. The cutwasn't deep...but it burned!

"Agh, what was that about?!" He felt like yelling at it, but he was able to keep his cool, looking at the three slashes left on his body. Small trickles of blood dripped from the wounds.

It was still burning, as if her claws were made of fire when they cut through his skin and flesh. He tried keeping a straight face, but it was no use, as he started to feel dizzy, his legs barely able to keep him from falling back in the mud. She seemed confused as well, surprised at the effect of her attack.

"What did you do..." He stammered a little, looking at her. "Was that some sort of poison move?" He was about to say something else, but then he noticed something that made the both of them jump a little. From his wrists, thick grey fur started to sprout around his hands, the palms swelling out into thick pads, covered by the growing pelt as his fingers grew a little longer, large blood-red claws growing from his fingertips.

He watched in horror the fur grow up his arm, and on his chest, where it seemed to grow considerably longer than on his arms, kind of like a mane, a darker shade of gray as well.

"I..I didn't know this would happen...I was just meant to give you a warning slash..." She said, stammering a little.

Peter just stared at her for a moment, jaw hanging low at what he heard. "You...you can talk?" He said, just as puzzled as she was, but for a different reason. "How are you talking?"

She seemed even more confused now. "You can...understand me now? But how..."

The answer to that question became pretty evident the more his body was covered in that gray fur, his hairs turning a bright orange at the same time. He looked down, noticing his legs growing rather large, his trouser being torn apart...and damn he was glad then fur there was long enough to keep everything covered.

"Maybe this is the reason." He looked over himself, his shoes tearing apart as his feet grew out from them, the toes having fused into three digits, large crimson claws growing from them as pads formed under the thick fur. "Well what WERE you trying to do when you scratched me?"

"Just...scare you off" she was staring at her claws, wondering what kind of magic she had casted on him. To her knowledge, no Pokemon could do something like that: going as far as transforming a human being like that.

"Well I should let you know, I don't scare easily." He chuckled a little, the slashes on his chest were all but gone, hidden beneath the fur but leaving some small scars. His orange-tinted hair started to grow longer now, growing down past his back as his ears grew longer and larger, moving up near the top of his head as they grew to points, the changes now spreading to his face.

His whole face started cracking and popping, the bones pushing outward, forming a muzzle. He grit his teeth, feeling them sharpen, becoming deadly fangs. His tongue grew into a point, and so did his ears, doubling in size. His eyes seemed to glow for a split second, just before turning green.

She observed in shock the human now almost completely transformed into a Zoroark.

His hair finally stopped growing, sitting now past his legs, looking almost like a substitute for his tail-less body. A thick jade band appeared several inches from the base of it, the fur on the bottom half spreading out to be large and bushy, almost giving it a tail-like appearance as his changes ended.

"Well..." He said, looking at himself and his new form. "I REALLY don't know what to say here..."

"Neither do I...." she said, approaching him a little, and resting a hand on his chest, wondering if that was even real. Her suspicions were cast aside when her hand was covered by the thick fur of his chest, heaving in and out with each breath that he took.

"Furthermore, I don't know what I'm going to do now. I need to make my way to see a friend, but with how I look now..."

She looked around, noticing the shredded clothes, but most importantly...his backpack. She picked it up, giving it to him. "Maybe this will help?"

He looked at it, the straps had given way due to the growth, but they were easily fixable. "Maybe I have something in here..." He pulled a few things out, drinks, books, sparePok é balls and a phone. He picked up his broken belt from the ground, the balls that contained his team still attached, and placed it in his bag.

She observed in silence. "All good then? Are you gonna be fine after this?" she asked, even though she knew he was not gonna be fine.

"I really don't know..." He sighed, holding his phone in his hands, then looking at her again. "I mean I could try to see him and see what his reaction to me is..."

"If you say so human" she said. She seemed uneasy around him...was that the first time she had met someone like her?

He dialed in the number for his friend and rang up. It was hard to operate the phone with those huge meat renders that lined his fingertips, but he was able to dial up.

"Anyone there?" He spoke into the phone.

"Hello? Who's there?" his friend's voice called out.

"It's me, Peter..." He said into the phone.

"Oh, hello there buddy...why the weird growly voice?" he asked.

"A long story..." He responded. "Lets just say this... do you believe there are ways to change a human into something else?"

"Not really, why do you ask?"

"Well...something like that happened...to me." He said, calmly.

"...explain yourself, cause if this is a joke it isn't funny" he responded, sounding slightly annoyed.

"It is very hard to explain...I'll do you one better, I'll be round in around five minutes, so just hold on." He said, hanging up the phone before turning to theZoroark.

She lowered her head. "So...all good then?"

"I won't know until I've gone to see him..." He sighed. "I don't know how he'd react...nor would I know how he'd react if I went without proof of what caused this."

She sighed. "I'll come with you, I guess I owe you...besides....I don't really have anywhere to go" she looked at him.

He looked at her solemnly for a moment. He didn't know if she was the only one of her kind or not, and if she was, then there was no chance of her finding a partner. He took a step towards her.

"Hey...if you want to, you can come with me...I don't want you to feel alone."

She smiled a little. "Thank you" she said, nodding.

He smiled back at her softly, and put an arm around her back. "Thank you too." He said with a nuzzle. "You won't have to feel alone anymore."

And he could finally go back to travelling, although this time he had a friend to spend time with.

Needless to say, when his friend saw him, he didn't believe that it was really him...but a few questions and he finally convinced himself, and boy was he shocked. Peter on the other hand...wasn't really shocked. Things had taken a weird turn, and while he was now being stared at by pretty much anyone he walked by, he was also stronger, more agile, more intimidating, and overall...a total badass in a sense.

And of course, there was the lady Zoroark. As time went on the two became great friends, and eventually...something more than that.

They were happy, and so was a certain Pokemon, looking at them from above the clouds, smiling at his wonderful work. Giving the Zoroark the ability to transform the human was a good move...that way she finally found the mate she was looking for, and eventually start the Zoroark reproduction.

Soon those creatures will be seen all around Sinnoh.
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Comments: 58

BlackDragon-Assassin [2017-09-20 15:03:29 +0000 UTC]

Cute story. Thinking of doing a darkrai or arceus tf. ^.=.^

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Fraxtin-CrashKedu [2017-09-08 09:04:36 +0000 UTC]

Aww..
Such a nice story....  Applause... 

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shadowbro2 [2016-03-05 06:12:57 +0000 UTC]

WHAT POKEMON FROM ABOVE IN THE CLOUDS!?!?!? THUNDERUS, ARCEUS, MEW, WHOO!?!?!?!??!?

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gundamfan2 [2014-01-20 22:58:16 +0000 UTC]

aww that is a great story

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Moxxitits [2013-08-14 05:16:14 +0000 UTC]

Ho-ly Arceus, that was awesome, i am jealous. I wanna be a pokemon! Oh well, i guess the internet will have to do.

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Jellicent18231234 [2012-09-22 12:49:49 +0000 UTC]

Can you make a male Jellicent

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Jellicent18231234 In reply to Jellicent18231234 [2012-09-22 12:50:20 +0000 UTC]

Oops, I forgot to say tf

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Jellicent18231234 [2012-09-09 09:16:15 +0000 UTC]

That certain Pokemon,is it Arceus?

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chat12916 [2011-10-19 21:13:33 +0000 UTC]

you have writer's spirit

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UmbraDragonX [2011-09-05 10:53:48 +0000 UTC]

Love pokemon!

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zemablade [2011-08-12 03:27:03 +0000 UTC]

Wow I completely loved both versions! You should be named the TF Emperror!

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SpartanGZ [2011-08-02 20:40:24 +0000 UTC]

OMG
Don't think I sound lame or anything but my friends and I do a pretend game with lots of stuff in it (pokemon, halo etc.) And our Zoroark can transform people into themselves with night slash and a bite! I loved the idea and I LOVE your story.
PS we had a scene almost exactly like this in part 12 (yes I wright it down)

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AuraGuardianHadou In reply to SpartanGZ [2011-08-03 00:11:26 +0000 UTC]

Sounds really interesting

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SpartanGZ In reply to AuraGuardianHadou [2011-08-03 01:39:41 +0000 UTC]

Thx for not thinking that I'm a total loser about that game.
Ps can I use this story as a script for part of a play?

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AuraGuardianHadou In reply to SpartanGZ [2011-08-08 23:16:02 +0000 UTC]

sure

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JBMdreams [2011-06-27 05:29:29 +0000 UTC]

Heh, this was the first story I read on this site, and it's still one of my favorites. You did a really good job with it

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AuraGuardianHadou In reply to JBMdreams [2011-08-03 00:11:35 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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Maxis-Op [2011-06-24 13:31:24 +0000 UTC]

I wonder what company supplies your Peter clones.

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AuraGuardianHadou In reply to Maxis-Op [2011-06-26 14:02:56 +0000 UTC]

XD I don't know myself, i just like subjecting myself to these changes

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Charmeleon99 [2011-05-30 08:01:58 +0000 UTC]

best story ever it was soo totaly worth reading i thought it would be boring but it was AWSOME!!!

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Saiyan-Valor [2011-05-11 23:04:51 +0000 UTC]

Not bad, not bad at all! the setting, how you described things! Im guess that Zoroark(being a wereFox) had the same affect on Peter as a werewolf would on a normal person...epic story, Im not a fan of reading, but this story caught my attetion, and I read it,out of all the storys people put on here, this one was the best!

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Thebalrog6 [2011-04-30 17:44:43 +0000 UTC]

in a pokemon battle,i beat the stuffing out of my friend after i transformed into a sceptile.i used only one pokemon,my trusted grovyle(he was supposed to evolve into a sceptile but i evolved instead of it).my friend had all level 100 pokemon.he said"your going down."i yelled at him and said"i'll win this battle no matter what,even though you beat me 50 thousand times......"he said"well,good luck with that.NOT."i said"i heard that."i beat him and he said"what?WHAT?!how could you beat me?!i'm better than you at everything!i even turned you into a sceptile and your gf into a grovyle just to make you happy!"i was stunned and i said"you......you did this to me and my gf?!"he said"well,yeah!after all of my victories over you,i felt like you needed to need more joy in your life."i used bullet seed on him and grabbed his neck.i yelled"you are the most generous scientist a friend could have!and i love you for it."i was still feeling victorious after the battle and my gf came over.we double-battled against my friend and another pro pokemon trainer friend of mine.we beat them with only our grovyle and treecko.we are the best pokemon and pokemon trainers ever.we're planning to get married this summer.

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Lucariofan843 [2011-04-15 15:04:38 +0000 UTC]

i like it.

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Elicario [2011-02-16 22:51:05 +0000 UTC]

sweet !!!i love the setup!!

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r3stl3ss-orange [2010-10-20 02:09:13 +0000 UTC]

aww thats sweet!

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Fireflash-Rainclaw [2010-08-24 02:14:33 +0000 UTC]

Nicely done, good description on the tf. ^.=.^

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krourou2 [2010-06-11 14:13:46 +0000 UTC]

Region info I've dug up so far: Isshu Region
Mascots: Black- Reshiram: Dragon type. Color: white. Does not evolve. Legendary. Revealed on both English and Japanese websites simultaneously with Zekrom, making them the first two Pokemon simultaneously revealed worldwide. No other data available.
White- Zekrom: Dragon type. Color: black. Does not evolve. Legendary. Revealed on both English and Japanese websites simultaneously with Reshiram, making them the first two Pokemon simultaneously revealed worldwide. No other data available.

Starter Pokemon: Grass- Tsutarja
Fire- Pokabu
Water- Mijumaru

Other info: Pokemon Black and Pokemon White are still in the very early stages, but their release dates, aside from in Korea and Australia, have been confirmed: Japan will release it this fall, while the U.S.A will release the games next spring (2011). As we all know, the difference in release dates is due to the fact that NoA (Nintendo of America) has to translate all the Japanese into English. And makes a few changes, I suspect, though to what I'm not sure.

For more info, go here:
[link]

I do not claim the Pokemon series as my own, because I'm not a member of Nintendo or Game Freak. Geez, Game Freak has been working with Nintendo on the Pokemon series for a LONG time. When I say long, I mean all the way back to the first generation games!

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davidspyro [2010-04-20 02:22:14 +0000 UTC]

Great TF story on Zoroark bro!

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tfcknukles [2010-04-07 10:05:56 +0000 UTC]

nice work mate just saw the trailer. i hope the voice of zoroark is better than arceus.

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AuraGuardianHadou In reply to tfcknukles [2010-04-07 19:32:20 +0000 UTC]

lets hope XD

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Nitrinoxus [2010-03-07 08:13:25 +0000 UTC]

That Pokémon watching all of this... That wouldn't by any chance be Arceus, would it?

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AuraGuardianHadou In reply to Nitrinoxus [2010-03-07 15:32:35 +0000 UTC]

How did ya ever guess ;3

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Nitrinoxus In reply to AuraGuardianHadou [2010-03-07 21:15:26 +0000 UTC]

I take it that was sarcasm.

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AuraGuardianHadou In reply to Nitrinoxus [2010-03-09 13:41:09 +0000 UTC]

wasn't trying to be

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Nitrinoxus In reply to AuraGuardianHadou [2010-03-09 16:26:16 +0000 UTC]

Well, there was the early mention of the Alpha Pokémon, and the depiction of the Pokémon watching unseen from on high sounded like a divine being.

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AuraGuardianHadou In reply to Nitrinoxus [2010-03-09 22:05:03 +0000 UTC]

XD I picked that up from a friend. Just funny to use it in place of God

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Nitrinoxus In reply to AuraGuardianHadou [2010-03-09 22:08:27 +0000 UTC]

It makes sense, seeing as how Arceus was the creator of that universe.

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AuraGuardianHadou In reply to Nitrinoxus [2010-03-10 00:52:49 +0000 UTC]

Plus it's a fun way to make some things sound less rude XD (Arceus-damn it)

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Nitrinoxus In reply to AuraGuardianHadou [2010-03-10 03:18:18 +0000 UTC]

Not as catchy as some other phrases, like "with Arceus as my witness" or going to battle with "the Alpha's blessing". Something like that.

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SamPD2 [2010-03-06 22:30:08 +0000 UTC]

I had a sneaking suspision that when I heard the word Zoroark, I thought it would be a reference to the new generation of Pokemon. Mind you, I actually never even heard of the names of them before.

My other aussumption would have been that it would be a pokemon from the fake pokemon games, which actually wouldn't have been a bad idea.

Really, with the transformation, nothing is really special about it, with your average slash a human, then turn him or her into their respective attacker.

But that isn't nessecary a bad thing.
Overall, a transformation by the book was well executed.

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RevivedDragon [2010-02-18 12:45:40 +0000 UTC]

Absolutely brilliant! The structure of the story is very well presented, and I could definitely imagine the situation clearly in my mind with all those great descriptions.

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darkpidgeot10 [2010-02-15 16:06:58 +0000 UTC]

I kinda wanted to do the first Zoroark tf...
but I guess I'll make that a visual one.
anyway, really nice story, had great transitions and stuff. :3 the plot was interesting too, hope to expect more TFs from you!

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AuraGuardianHadou In reply to darkpidgeot10 [2010-02-23 00:36:27 +0000 UTC]

cool.

Speaking of TF, how is my comic coming along, i haven't heard from you in quite some time (note me it if its done)

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godzilla99 [2010-02-15 13:52:03 +0000 UTC]

awesome story

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TheLupineOne [2010-02-15 09:18:11 +0000 UTC]

Darn you! I was wanting to do the first Zoroark TF Fan Fiction!

It was going to be so awesome as well!

I don't think I'll actually do it now someone has beaten me...

You don't get a trophy.

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AuraGuardianHadou In reply to TheLupineOne [2010-02-23 00:34:01 +0000 UTC]

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SuperGokuV [2010-02-15 08:40:06 +0000 UTC]

Congrats to the both you and Ben. Good job of making a TF on a pokémon who was unheard of a week ago and the first TF on Zoroark.

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SesakaTH [2010-02-14 23:54:44 +0000 UTC]

Very neat change story about this Pokemon. Since I'm into fox like creatures, he/she has to be my newest favorite.

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AuraGuardianHadou In reply to SesakaTH [2010-02-15 01:00:24 +0000 UTC]

hehe, thanks Next to come up should be your TF story

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golferdude666 [2010-02-14 23:36:21 +0000 UTC]

Pretty good job! I have read better, but I do like the story!

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