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Kouri-n [2013-07-19 03:34:56 +0000 UTC]
HELLO THERE! //squeals// I'm excited you got in!
Jung: Why hello again~ //sent flying
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azuriin In reply to Kouri-n [2013-07-19 03:42:34 +0000 UTC]
YAY YOU'RE BACK <3 and yes I am too! c-could Karen be Jung's Vicius?
Karen: Oh, hello there. //waves
(//whispers// we still doing the clockhearts RP?)
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Kouri-n In reply to azuriin [2013-07-19 03:59:07 +0000 UTC]
I'm back~ I'll be gone next week though OTL darn my schedule
Jung: Wait there's something on your face //peers closer//
(lol thank you for all the reminders I've been really forgetful lately OTL)
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azuriin In reply to Kouri-n [2013-07-19 04:03:31 +0000 UTC]
aww ok ; A ;
(sorry if I don't bold, it's so hard to html/format on iPad)
Karen: Is there? //wipes face like a little kid// Is it gone now?
(lol it's fine xD and it's prolly because you're so busy ; w ; so I understand <3)
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Kouri-n In reply to azuriin [2013-07-19 15:55:05 +0000 UTC]
(Oh man I understand ;;u;; it's so difficult moving through all of the keyboards)
Jung: //flicks nose and grins// nope not really~ [[this troll OTL]]
(I'm not insanely busy, I just forget to do things when I try to get everything done in a really random order OTL but thank you so much for being patient with idiot me ;;u;; )
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azuriin In reply to Kouri-n [2013-07-19 22:08:51 +0000 UTC]
Karen: Is there even something there?! //pouts// [LOL i can see that orz]
(LOL it's fine xD and it's no problem at all c
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Kouri-n In reply to azuriin [2013-07-20 15:01:59 +0000 UTC]
Jung: I dunno. //starts to walk away//
((//slapped for having this rude child))
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azuriin In reply to Kouri-n [2013-07-20 15:16:48 +0000 UTC]
Karen: Hey! Don't walk away! //grabs on to Jung's arm//
((psh, it's fine ^^ it's funny xD well to me anyways))
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Kouri-n In reply to azuriin [2013-07-20 16:25:38 +0000 UTC]
Jung: What?!? //hisses// This is my arm! //tries to pull away//
((that's good >//u//<))
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azuriin In reply to Kouri-n [2013-07-21 22:21:04 +0000 UTC]
Karen: Jeez, someone's sassy today. //grips tighter on his arm//
((amg, you read her history right //sass queen// xD)
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Kouri-n In reply to azuriin [2013-07-22 01:40:49 +0000 UTC]
Jung: I'm not sure you can be lecturing me about sass... //narrows eyes but then sighs// Is there something you want? //moves arm slightly//
((of course I did xD))
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azuriin In reply to Kouri-n [2013-07-22 02:00:47 +0000 UTC]
Karen: //dumbfoundly stares at Jung// Jeez, weren't you the one who started talking to me?
((LOL i need to redraw her akldsfjaskfld i messed up the body xD))
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Kouri-n In reply to azuriin [2013-07-22 04:16:06 +0000 UTC]
Jung: Ha!? (Oh shit she's right!) //turns away, pouting slightly// Would you... please let go? By the way, don't you feel silly with just one glove on? //glares back//
aw~ look who's starting to feel small~ I abuse him OTL
((Aww ;;u;; She's really pretty now, but I'm sure she'll look even more beautiful when you redraw it. //cheers on))
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azuriin In reply to Kouri-n [2013-07-22 14:02:28 +0000 UTC]
Karen: Um, ok...//lets go of Jung's arm// And why would I feel silly, I could care less about what others think of me you know?
LOL
(Thanks ; w ; but i have other apps to revamp aksjfakdfkalsf))
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Kouri-n In reply to azuriin [2013-07-22 15:08:31 +0000 UTC]
Jung: //sighs// Thanks... //wiggles arm around// So...hm... have you been well recently?...
(Oh get those done then! xD)
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azuriin In reply to Kouri-n [2013-07-22 20:59:24 +0000 UTC]
Karen: Uh, yeah I guess. Been by myself as usual.
(Haha, but i'm so lazy xD)
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Kouri-n In reply to azuriin [2013-07-23 02:46:43 +0000 UTC]
Jung: //sighs// You really should get better about that //mumbles// ...not that I'm any better....
(I fell ya there //pets)
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azuriin In reply to Kouri-n [2013-07-23 19:45:32 +0000 UTC]
Karen: It's kinda hard to you know...I've pretty much lived by myself my whole life. And, um what did you say? The last part I mean. I couldn't quite catch that.
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Kouri-n In reply to azuriin [2013-07-31 00:54:21 +0000 UTC]
Jung: Eh? Oh nothing~ //smirks// Well, while we're here... would you like to go do something?
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azuriin In reply to Kouri-n [2013-07-31 01:14:04 +0000 UTC]
Karen: Oh ok. //smiles// Something I want to do? Hmm...//stares off in space// I want to go and try different kinds of foods...//stomach growls// I'm kind of hungry...
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Kouri-n In reply to azuriin [2013-07-31 17:05:46 +0000 UTC]
Jung: Food? //glances at her stomach in response// Are you always this hungry? Oh well. //rolls eyes// If we walk a bit down the street, we should be able to find something. You wanna head out now?
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azuriin In reply to Kouri-n [2013-07-31 17:14:12 +0000 UTC]
Karen:U-um sure. Anything you want to recommend?
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Kouri-n In reply to azuriin [2013-08-01 19:52:15 +0000 UTC]
Jung: Nope. //keeps moving forward, looking straight ahead//
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azuriin In reply to Kouri-n [2013-08-01 19:55:46 +0000 UTC]
Karen: You don't get out much do you..//stumbles after Jung//
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Kouri-n In reply to azuriin [2013-08-03 15:05:27 +0000 UTC]
Jung: Haha you could say that. //looks over shoulder at her// Actually, I did hear about a waffle stand down the street. Maybe the guy is still there.
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azuriin In reply to Kouri-n [2013-08-03 15:08:38 +0000 UTC]
Karen:Waffles? Are they yummy? Do you even know where the stand is? //looks around//
btw could you help me proofread my zero-00 app ; A ; i finished the art and i'm typing up the history and stuff right now.
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Kouri-n In reply to azuriin [2013-08-05 16:34:09 +0000 UTC]
Jung: Do you not like waffles? //glares// A-and of course I know where it is... I think- Oh see! That's probably him over there. //rushes to food cart on the corner//
if it's not too late, I can try~ *u*
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azuriin In reply to Kouri-n [2013-08-05 17:00:27 +0000 UTC]
Karen: You sure it's him? //nudges//
fav.me/d6gd0ap i just mainly want to check the history section...and if you have another idea for the scythe, i would like to change it...cause i couldn't think of another idea and when i looked at yours it was almost the same D; and i don't want to be seen as a copier ; A ;
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Kouri-n In reply to azuriin [2013-08-07 13:34:35 +0000 UTC]
Jung: Hey, Ralph! //ignores Karen's last statement, jogs over, and begins to order a waffle// Ah, Karen, do you like fruit? //turns back to look at her//
Ah ok I see what you mean about the scythe. You don't have to, but if you wanted to simply change the kind of weapon she has, I think it'd be humorous to make them scissors. You could keep the same abilities and be able to break it into two, one half for each hand. Of course that would mean redrawing the weapon, but it shouldn't affect your character drawing much based on the way it's laid out right now.
I thought the story was interesting and that there wasn't much that needed fixing. Although I'm still curious about her stepmother's motive in trying to kill her. Normally I would guess it was because part of her father's fortune would have gone to Aurora, and the stepmother was just getting greedy, but the doctor later states that the stepmother was going to inherit everything anyways. Although from what you have, I'm assuming that she simply didn't like the idea of a daughter getting in her way all the time. It would make it harder to control the father if he also needed to take Aurora into consideration. I'd find it a little odd if she was trying to kill her simply because she didn't like her as a person. That's a little extreme, even for a crazy lady like that.
I'm sorry for getting back to you kind of late. ;;u;; Forgive me "orz
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azuriin In reply to Kouri-n [2013-08-07 15:18:38 +0000 UTC]
Karen: U-uh sure. What about syrup? I love sweet things.
[[I-i fixed it to scissors LOL yesh, i loved the idea, and i can use it in the story LOL it would make more sense now >< and yea i got an app check so i'mma go and fix up the story ; w ; and it's finee]]
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Kouri-n In reply to azuriin [2013-08-08 00:52:21 +0000 UTC]
Jung: Mk. //nods to waffle guy and receives waffle in paper cone with syrup and fruit on top// Here you go. //shoves waffle bundle at her//
((best of luck! ))
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azuriin In reply to Kouri-n [2013-08-08 02:23:33 +0000 UTC]
Karen: Thanks~! //takes a bite// This is really good! //looks over// Aren't you going to get one?
((thanks and school starts tomorrow for me D; I'M GONNA GET LOST IN THE HIGH SCHOOL LOL))
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Kouri-n In reply to azuriin [2013-08-08 04:15:46 +0000 UTC]
Jung: Naw, I don't think I really want one that badly //secretely glances back to the waffle stand// //whispers// Hey, Ralph! //holds up one finger for another waffle//
((HIGH SCHOOL!!! My sister is starting next week as a freshman too~ I'm going to be a senior xD I HOPE YOU DON'T GET LOST! High school isn't actually scary like people say. My freshman year was essentially just like 8th grade but in a different building.))
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azuriin In reply to Kouri-n [2013-08-09 02:05:12 +0000 UTC]
Karen: //nibbles on waffle// What's that you're getting?
((Oh nicee~! LOL you're so lucky xD just like Fulton and Gwinnett county >< I didn't know where was what LOL like i thought the hallway numbers were going down, but nooo, they were going up xDD and our school is two stories D)
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ijuraru [2013-07-06 20:42:53 +0000 UTC]
For you and my oc, Awkward social link go! XD
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azuriin In reply to ijuraru [2013-07-06 21:34:35 +0000 UTC]
lol yea xD
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