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BalumixBiffle — We're Gonna Be Okay
Published: 2010-09-18 02:25:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 1364; Favourites: 49; Downloads: 9
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WHEEEEEEEEEEEEEMy first attempt at as-lineless-as-I-can-manage art!
DO YOU GUYS LIKE IT? I DO.
IT TOOK FOR-EV-EEEEEEEEEEEEEER OTL
It's a PMD picture I can actually be proud of xD
Friendly critique requested. ESPECIALLY ON THE TAIL.
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Comments: 19
your welcome! Do you write stories about PMD?
I do!
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I do have a work-in-progress story called Pokemon Remix and a written version of PMD3's special episode Into the Future, but there's no telling when the Remix story will actually be updated, let alone completed xD
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i just red it. XD
I love how you got Kara perfectly! That is awesome!
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Oh thank you, but believe me, I could do much better now that I've learned more and become much less... spazzy by nature xD It really is an old piece.
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Bawwwww, this is totally adorable ;u; <3<3<3
especially the Sableye <3
You did very well at the lineless style too <3
The only thing I have to say about the tail is the color of the glowy-ness. For the Sableye's eyes, white works well because they're reflecting light instead of generating it. For the fire, try giving it more of a yellowy (as opposed to white) glow, or just using more yellows in general. <3
Otherwise, you did very well. I like how it lights up the whole cave. <3<3<3
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My critique on the tail...I LOVE IT. XD
But I love the way the shadows of the other Pokemon look. They all look so dark and spooky and mysterious. 83
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ok I will say one thing. you have REALLY dark lines around the eyes, which pop too much, seeing how none of the rest of this has lines on. well, two things, putting some shadow of the pokemon on the ground and/or walls would make this...either more realistic or more believable you pick. other than that, looks good for a first try. I like how you did the ones in front and their eyes.
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It looks good, Balu! I think the fire needs to look like it's coming off the tip a little more than you got it, though.
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Awesome one of my two favorite pokemon. I like it! Keep it up!
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Wow! It looks really good! Chikorita looks awesome. XP
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