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BCRich40 β Improving Skills - Part 18
Published: 2012-12-30 19:28:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 51415; Favourites: 336; Downloads: 509
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And here's the next part!A bit shorter comic this time. Nothing too special.
Wait... That's not true at all!
I'm actually really satisfied with this part. There's only a few things wrong with it, but they are really minor things. I just wasn't able to fix them without drawing everything all over again. Three of the panels were really difficult ones to draw, but in the end they turned out okay. Expression still need more work, but they are looking a way better now.
If you didn't notice already, I tried a few new things with this part. So far, I have done speech bubbles with a program called Comic Life. It's a nice and easy program to use, but there's some major flaws with it. Now I finally started to make everything with Photoshop. It's a bit slower and more difficult way, but it gives me so much more freedom! Speech bubbles look a bit horrible, but that's just a minor thing to fix. By the way, I'm not going to use that font in the future. That's just a horrible font.
What else... Well, I did some fixing with my drawing technique! I just found a more comfortable way to draw comics, that's all. I also learned a few neat tricks with Photoshop.
Like I said, this part is a bit shorter than two previous ones, and it's not even that funny. The dialogue is pretty horrible too, but that's the best I was able to come up with. It's just so difficult to pack so many thoughts in a couple of speech bubbles. Part 19 will be a long one... and difficult to draw!
That's pretty much all I have to say. I pushed myself to the limit, and that's why I'm pretty satisfied with the end result.
And big thanks to my pre-reader, .
Happy new year, everyone!
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This is ironically the same way me and my mate were when we first met.
I wonder if you would have been different if i was a male?Β
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As someone who's been going through a similar situation I can say that's not how it works I'm still straight... Sort of. And it wasn't as sudden. Though the alcohol may have had something to do with it
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Very nice.
The internal monologue as a bit more structure and isn't as bland here, and I like that you were able to express so many attitudes Β of these characters from a single angle. You probably would have preferred to show more angles, but I think this way adds to the humor and the humanity of the piece.
On to 19!
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Way to snap her out of it and control yourself RD
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omg make pt 26!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!plz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!-but i understand if it takes a while so yea just make sure its in the next 3-5weeks?
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Aaaaaw Twi is confused but I still like her with Flash Sentry
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I don't know why she is so hung up on this. Considering mares vastly outnumber stallions in Equestria, same sex relationships and even polygamy would be a very common thing.
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ITs jsu tlike you humans. Women outnumber the men
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What happened to flash sentry? Ugh. The drawing is nice, despite the square snouts, but the story is getting iffy. R34 iffy. Me no like.
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This was made before Twilight became a princess. No Flash Sentry.
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not really dash has only been washing her back and its not like there's any "Nudity" involved in this.
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Yeah...but you can tell what's going on. What they're thinking. Its all in the context.
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yeah of course I never said there wasn't context its just not R34 material.
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Of course not, but it's essentially a giant innuendo at worst, a largely suggestive comic at best.
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being suggestive isn't a bad thing considering the younger users of this website wouldn't get the same joke us adults do without it being explained to them and before you start saying deviant art isn't suited for kids I shall remind you that parents do have the option to turn mature content off to keep them safe.
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*Facepalm* A lot of parents aren't quite savvy enough to figure out how to do that. I know this from experience. Not only that, but unless you're living in some ideal communist state, the kids are wise to adult thing by ages 9-10, and know when a joke is sexual by 12+.
And I don't like this suggestive business anyway. Part of the attraction to the show for me was the innocence. Through this "suggestiveness" nonsense, it's losing a good bit of attractiveness.
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Well the comicΒ was already pretty adult with (realistic) alcohol use and pony swears.
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But at this point its just barely shipping. Not even R34...yet.
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right so why start it, I certainly didn't.
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...What?
What are you answering?
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...nevermind I'll just end this comment stretch.
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Looks are getting better...also getting gayer.
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And what is wrong with gay relationships? That's what it sounds like to me...
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If you mean from Twilight daydreaming. shes not really saysing its bad she just doesnt feel comfortable with it.
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Oh, I see.
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Finally. a dashie rape-face
You're welcome fandom
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I'm glad to hear you won't be using that font in the future.
"Hey, Dash! I'm into mares now, even though I thought I was only into stallions yesterday. Let's make out!"
Sounds good to me. Although after Dash rescues you from drowning and gives you mouth-to-mouth, it might be more expedient to not bother with words at all.
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I wont d-drown.
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hah. that's quite a funny series. How it's possible I've never seen any part before?
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Mudpony o.o Dame, it really is a small world.
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Hello... I just wanted to say that you're work has improved so much in such a short time. I went back to read the first ones (after seeing this one) & i'm very impressed.... not too mention they were ALL quite entertaining 
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