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Published: 2006-06-10 20:40:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 9523; Favourites: 328; Downloads: 38
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But i love youWill you be there when i die
kiss me one final time
catch me when i fall and bleed
would you even wanna cry
while you watch me slowly die
watching as my blooddrips
rolling off my finger tips
drips onto the floor
making puddles
more and more
hearing all my bloody cries
watch tears roll from my eyes
gasping for one final breath
pain swells up in my chest
spreading through my arms and legs
numb
but i can still feel pain
i try to regret nothing
but that is so hard to do
when all i hear is
"but i love you"
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I like this very much but can see it was written with a hand extended....
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I really like this! its really pretty and I can relate to it. well im new here and I'm trying to see if I'm any good at poetry. well, you guys seem to know what you are doing. I wouldn't mind it if I could get some advice or critics on my work. Thanks!
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I really enjoyed reading this poem. Your friend really put her heart in writing. For a sec there Β I really thought it was one of my poems.
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I write some poetry to...like my poems Die, Summer Haze, and Love Me After Death...
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It makes me think .... Makes me feel. The poem is really good, very thoughtful...
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The terror is "But... I love you" Saddens me. Nice dark poetry though.
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pmg this is amazing!!!! i really love this poem , almost cried 
-post more i love ur work!
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wow, just wow. this poem really made me think and feel. my heart broke reading this poem. BRAVO, simply BRAVO!!!
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this is beautiful. Tell your friend i said this is a job well done.
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LOVE IT ! I wish I had enough confindence to show my poetry
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I liked the poem. Does your friend have anymore poems?
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It remembered me of my lover, ah if my last wish would be asked this would be it. I told him so but he still left! And I agree with ehern008 sad poetry is more than often so beautiful like yours ^_^
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I don't know why, but sometimes I think sad songs/lyrics/poems are some of the most beautiful ones out there. I think it's because of the power of the emotions behind the work. I mean it can get depressing hearing that style all the time, but I think once in a while it makes for a good experience. Very nice =]
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Absolutely beaustiful It is the ec=xacte essence of raw, but hurtful love. Thought provoking.
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Beautiful Poetry(:
your friend should make more..
And you. 
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i would like to feature this in my group. join if you would like
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This was actually a very moving and amazing poem. You should tell your friend she has a talent
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This is pure amazement. tell your friend she has talent. and lots of it.
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i love this. This was amazing give ur friend kudos for me
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Beautiful... it makes me think of the one person that I loved more than anything; whom I lost last year on the 11th September. Can I post it on facebook? But I'm going to write by beautifulxchaos' friend?
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Great emotion. 
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wow this is truly touching
very talented
youve got a great heart
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This is a really great poem. I write poetry too and I thought this was written wonderfully. Kind of makes me want to cry because it is a very sad poem but I love how it flows and the topic. Beautiful. Tell your friend to keep up the good work!
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Wow, I really liked this, I think it's very good.
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i love this so much forget brandon i love this!
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This is amazing!! Your friend is really good and has talent. Don't let your friend waste it.
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not bad! i tried writing gothic poetry [link]
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gothic?
you call this gothic.
This is the ramlings of some poser that thinks they know what love is. FAGGOT!
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such big talk from some random person who has nothing in his gallery
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