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Biali ā€” The Little Unknown Ch.3 Pg.20

Published: 2013-06-03 20:28:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 2654; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 5
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Decided to upload this a bit earlier since I got it done today :3
Well, the sneak peek probably already took away the surprise for you.... Welcome back, Jiana!
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Comments: 36

Isabel191 [2014-11-10 03:34:42 +0000 UTC]

I haven't seen this comic in forever. Start the next chapter already?

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Biali In reply to Isabel191 [2014-11-10 19:10:39 +0000 UTC]

Oh sorry! It seems like I forgot to put the link to the next page in the description. I can't do so now since I'm on mobile. But if you look into my gallery, you should be able to find the following pages in the "The Little Unkown" -folder. Thanks for reading!

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Isabel191 In reply to Biali [2014-11-11 03:46:27 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!
It's got a nice story to it. It isn't all 'vore, trample, bleh'. It uses tinies without doing the fetish stuff. Good job.

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Obsess-Confess [2013-09-11 20:30:21 +0000 UTC]

Your coloring and lighting has improved so much!Ā 

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Biali In reply to Obsess-Confess [2013-09-18 11:52:16 +0000 UTC]

Aww thank you! I'm glad you see it that way!

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UndefinedError [2013-08-04 17:43:00 +0000 UTC]

Love this story! Wonderful so far. Just sayin'!

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Biali In reply to UndefinedError [2013-08-04 18:27:36 +0000 UTC]

thank you. Ā I do my best ^^

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Bethelina [2013-06-10 05:21:43 +0000 UTC]

Ooooh shoot. See, this is where not studying your languages will get you, Pami....

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Biali In reply to Bethelina [2013-06-10 20:47:51 +0000 UTC]

yeah, now she's pretty screwed... on top of that, the border region has a strong dialect. And Jiana is probably saying some things here, that would never be taught in school XD

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Kindii [2013-06-05 18:19:23 +0000 UTC]

The two stories have crossed paths. o.o They've finally crossed paths!

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Biali In reply to Kindii [2013-06-05 23:13:52 +0000 UTC]

heh... finally. I originally had in mind that they'd meet in chapter 5 or something XD

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GoldGecko [2013-06-04 11:10:45 +0000 UTC]

I did not expect this

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Biali In reply to GoldGecko [2013-06-05 23:14:03 +0000 UTC]

yeah sure :I

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5UNNYR4Y3 [2013-06-04 01:02:42 +0000 UTC]

and....incorporation time! haha

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Biali In reply to 5UNNYR4Y3 [2013-06-05 23:19:11 +0000 UTC]

haha X3

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JawmesBetaBuild [2013-06-04 00:50:00 +0000 UTC]

Whaaaaaa? Classy.

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Biali In reply to JawmesBetaBuild [2013-06-05 23:19:41 +0000 UTC]

so the surprise still worked?

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Omyrah [2013-06-03 22:38:38 +0000 UTC]

Uh oh, bit of a situation you're in there, Pami!

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Biali In reply to Omyrah [2013-06-05 23:20:01 +0000 UTC]

quite the situation indeed!

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Filanwizard [2013-06-03 22:06:18 +0000 UTC]

Ooh. See she should have studied her tigoese better!!

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Biali In reply to Filanwizard [2013-06-05 23:20:28 +0000 UTC]

This is why you should always do your homework, kids XD

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Filanwizard In reply to Biali [2013-06-05 23:28:28 +0000 UTC]

That's okay I picture Tami and For learning Space Elvish!!

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AnonymousGX [2013-06-03 22:05:06 +0000 UTC]

Is this script based on a real language? It looks familiar. Whether or not it is real, is there an easy way for us readers to translate it?

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Biali In reply to AnonymousGX [2013-06-05 23:24:49 +0000 UTC]

It is a script I made up completely. However it might be inspired by Chinese characters. but even if you knew the meaning of the letters, it would be just gibberish to you. I've been developing this language a few years ago, but it's not extremely elaborated.

In this case it's mostly there to put the reader into Pami's shoes, so they feel as lost as she does.

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shu-no-kurohi In reply to Biali [2014-10-19 12:31:45 +0000 UTC]

Or lack thereof.

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Biali In reply to shu-no-kurohi [2014-10-20 12:38:21 +0000 UTC]

ha! clever! XD

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AnonymousGX In reply to Biali [2013-06-05 23:44:34 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. I had thought that a symbol or two looked like it came from a dradle.

Quite a few others bore heavy similarities to Disney's Atlantis script, but with a couple rotates and/or flips. The first bubble looks a little like Atlantean for Y_TII NSY MFU PYY.

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SteampunkShen [2013-06-03 21:47:43 +0000 UTC]

Woow, they finally met *w*

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Biali In reply to SteampunkShen [2013-06-05 23:25:59 +0000 UTC]

their meeting was originally planned for chapter five... but yeah, I'm happy that they meet now XD

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PL1 [2013-06-03 20:55:04 +0000 UTC]

Jiana must look so strangely little to Pami! XD

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Biali In reply to PL1 [2013-06-05 23:26:44 +0000 UTC]

It must be the weirdest thing ever XD

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Tuiteyfruity [2013-06-03 20:54:29 +0000 UTC]

Hm, so either Ji is speaking a native Tigo language, and is swearing like a sailor, or the city uses an IS (International Standard) that has not actually gone international yet, and Tami doesn't speak it.
I'm going with a native tigo language, since Tami was having a lot of trouble with it in chapter 1.
or even a broken tigo dialect, because of where Ji grew up, they might have interesting slang.

I am really curious about this language though, how you created it, formed the characters and stuff. It looks very well made. It takes a lot of courage and skill to do something like this for a comic and a story.

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Biali In reply to Tuiteyfruity [2013-06-05 23:33:32 +0000 UTC]

Yep, it's native Tigo language. Pami had quite a few difficulties in learning it. What's worse is that Grodan city has a very distinct local dialect and the Tigo sometimes have a strong accent, too. So even the stuff she learned in school could not really prepare her for this.

I've started to develop this language about 10 years ago. The characters have changed a lot over time. The ones I had developed first, did not look as natural. The ones used in the comic now, are heavily inspired by Chinese characters.
I also have created a little bit of vocabulary and grammar, but it's nothing too serious.

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Tuiteyfruity In reply to Biali [2013-06-09 16:11:56 +0000 UTC]

OMG you are so cool!

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blaumoond [2013-06-03 20:29:11 +0000 UTC]

Nice

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Biali In reply to blaumoond [2013-06-05 23:33:41 +0000 UTC]

thanks~

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