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Published: 2009-08-11 21:34:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 5277; Favourites: 70; Downloads: 197
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So here is the final Page, I hope you like, some of you ask me if DC see this pages, and yes they saw it, but look's like they don't like to much, but like I said I will not give up, right now I making another Sample for the big "M", I will let you know later, a clue RED vs GREENmy agent company DA
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I hope you enjoy this, cause I love doing it, if you like let me know, and you hate it, let me know to, Im open for all kind of comments, so here we are.
C&C are totally welcome
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This is fantastic. I'm at a con right now and a lot of the sample work I see isn't half this good.
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Thnaks men, hope to get to some Con some day
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hola, buenas, este dibujo esta tela de wapo al igual que los otros, jeje
queria pedirte si puedo coger este dibujo, para colorearlo??
un saludo y sigue asi
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muchas gracias, si no hay lio, solo muestrame como queda despues gracias
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e tardado, pero e terminado, no se a quedado tan bonito como queria pero bueno
mira como a quedado tu dibujo a color
ΒΏque tal?
un saludo y gracias por dejarme usar tu dibujo
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Dope!!!!... crap, I think I just wet my pants...
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gracias muchas gracias
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Como que no les gustΓ³? Si estΓ‘ genial la pΓ‘gina :S
Que pretenden?? jaja
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gracias, la verdad no es lo que buscaban.
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Bruta pagina‘‘‘...Mr.Biroons,va a fav de cabeza.
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I think you're doing a great job bro, DC will be tough to crack. So just keep working hard!
One thing though, and please take this as constructive, (it may not be relevant), but I noticed that there were a few English anomalies and mistakes (just a few) and thought that you might want a native to proof-read it first.
Hope this helps and I can't wait till you crack the bigtime, great stuff man.
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really thanks Im not good in english, sorry about that, and thanks again and I can't wait for that day to come
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Hey man,
of course. Great job - and hey, I'm sure my Spanish is a lot worse than your English, you're very talented.
I guess I mentioned it because, it's a subtle thing that, for me at least, changes the mood of a strip and I how I 'read' it.
When I read the text, it contributes to the artwork, mood and my feeling towards the action of the piece, so if the wording is a bit different, or phrased in a way that I am not used to, then it can distract slightly and change the way I experience the entire piece.
So maybe just get a native speaker - even just members from Deviantart - to read over something and help improve the words or phrases in the dialogue?
You're doing an amazing job, I love watching your new deviations, so keep it up!
All the best!!
DMH
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che, copado trabajo lastima q no les gusto a los de DC, pintaba buena la historia
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gracias sato, si lastima pero por lo menos ahi vamos probando algun dia se va llegar
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Me llega men, kien diria ke robin si podia tirar plante, jaja..
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jajajajajajajaja si es que la verdad detesto a robin, pero si me toco hacerlo debia hacerlo bien.. gracias men
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wow! estan para matar hermanito! Espero brinden una linda sorpresa en tu camino! keep em coming!
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muchas gracias, la verdad espero si sirvan para algo despues, pero bueno pa lante pa lanta, y pa tras ni pa coger impulso.
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asi mismo es senor!!! vamonos!!!!
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muy buenos encuadres biroons, deberias un dia colorear alguno a ver que tal se veria
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si deberia, pero la verdad ando medio oxidado en la pintada, pero ya lo voy a retomar solo que ahorita me mata el tiempo, gracias por la visita y el comentario
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Bueno bueno yo tambien estoy un poco ocupado pero haz los inks y yo pruebo colores a ver q tal!
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ah perfecto me parece esa idea
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pos dale prepara algo! claro no me vengas a preparar tipo la ilustracion de tierras infinitas de alex ross
algo un poco complicadito
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