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BlackKusanagi — Rewrite : Keiri

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Well Keiri’s an old character that I recently redrew…and decided to add her in story somewhat. Heres her original look. This is actually the woman whos Aliana’s master. - [link]


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Name : Keiri Aeon Kajisen

Alias : Master Kei, Keiri, Ka San, (formerly Darth Aeon)

Age : 270 years old, but looks 25

Hair Color : Black.

Eye Color : One Green, One Blue.

Race : Neo Athenian (hyper strong, agile, athletic and force sensitive amazon specie)

Skin Color : Caucasian yet lightly tanned.

Height : 6’ 2”

Weight : 290 lbs

Family : Sinai (mother, missing), Yyvana (mother, missing), Terista (sister), Aliana (student), Rayne (student)

Occupation : Former Order Member, Former Sith Lord, Current Wanderer and oddjobber.

Build : Extremely well built for a woman.

Personality : Keiri is an odd woman at best. Truly Aliana‘s personality stemmed off of this woman. Keiri can be very gleeful, fun loving, and comical when the times are right. Then she can also be a cold, calculating figure, who wont feel at ease until every last, single figure is at her feet, broken, bloodied or dead. Truly she is one not to take too lightly, or too seriously.

Likes : Learning, Proving a point, respect, ways of advancing her form.

Dislikes : People who underestimate her, Disrespect, lack of a will to learn.

Danger Level : Neo Athenians are already impressive warriors, with incredible backgrounds, and will never step down for anything. Keiri herself is much more than an Neo Athenian… and is far stronger, and much better trained. With her force ablities she is a threat of the highest level. And even without force ability, she has somewhat of a grasp on ki manipulation, and is recently getting more into it thanks to current training with Aliana, making her even more dangerous. Making her an extreme threat. She is considered a XXX rank fighter, with XX rank physical endurance and focus. Her mind ablities are considered as N / A Class 2 rank, and her physical strength is considered X rank. Her spiritual energy is considered a N / A Class 1 rank due to learning of ki manipulation, and deep knowledge of the force. Taking these into account, her overall danger rank is at N/A Class 2.

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A relatively long life isn’t something you should always be happy about. Or be proud of. Something Keiri doesn’t really try to take to heart, but its something that repetitively haunts her day to day. She was a young girl in the Neo Athenian province of Yagura when she was spotted by a Jedi master by the name of Lucien while he traveled with a republic Envoy. He had noticed the child’s odd force sensitivity as compared to other children her age, and quickly took the 4 year old girl to be considered for joining the Order. Although her mothers and older sister eventually had decided that Keiri was in fact offered with a better opportunity, they sent her off with deep sadness, but pride.

Keiri had a slow start in the order while learning under Lucian as his padawan but it didn’t take until her early teens before she took to things much faster. By the time she was 17, she was ready for knighthood, and became a Jedi knight. She had been a major help to many missions with her master, and usually delivered great solutions when Lucien himself could not think of any. The two had somewhat developed a brother / sister relationship. Lucien despite being an accomplished master, had asked Keiri to stay behind on a mission which would take him to Korriban. Fearing for her master…and having her very first premonition, seeing him stand alone in a valley, which quickly turns dark, she wanted to go so badly.

Another master at the time against her wishes, sent her on another mission, and accompanied her to prevent her going with him. When they had returned weeks later, she constantly asked for information on Lucien. It was later on found that all that remained of the man, was his double handled cyan light saber. Keiri had taken this incident to heart, and had become oddly distant…with disdain, she followed the will of the order. Successful job constantly, until when she reached the age of 31, she was finally accepted as a Jedi Master. She was soon a member of the council, being one of the younger members. She always remained quiet, and only spoke when she was spoken to.

Soon after becoming a Master, she would usually find herself in the archives, reading on past Jedi Masters, and their feats. The stories usually piqued her interest, and helped her remain focused and more vigilant in her training. Fed up with being left in the dark, the woman left the Temple and under the guise of “meeting with a republic commander” headed to Korriban, to investigate her masters death on her own. It was the least that she could do to preserve his memory.

Shortly after landing on the planet, she had thoroughly explored the somewhat desolate reigon. She had spotted the academy ruins and decided if anywhere, that would be where Lucian would start. He was a chronicler, and was always trying to learn the most he could about anything. Finding nothing but few old holocrons, she watched footage dating back to the times of Revan. Keiri not letting it bother her that much left the old holocrons and began exploring the valley. She felt her body freeze almost instantly, when she spotted a blue silhouetted figure, of what appeared to be Lucien, standing ontop of her ship. He turned and quickly ran twards Ragnos’s Temple, phasing through the doors. Keiri cut the doors open and walked inside, into the main, silent area. Where Lucien’s spirit awaited her. His arm slowly revealed his saber, as he spoke, “If you truly cared for me…if you truly loved me…would you be willing to go further inside?”

Keiri didn’t understand what he said…she wanted to…but knew it was against her duty as a master. As she withdrew her own blades, and strangely was able to do battle with the ghost, they had begun a long struggle. Keiri had Lucien right in the sight of defeat…he smiled and said, “Child…you have one final lesson to learn from your master…if you think for a moment, that I have taught you everything I knew before you became a knight…you are surely mistaken…” He pointed to the room down the hall. “If you go through…that’s your decision…but if you want me to move on…FINISH ME!” He screamed. Keiri’s eyes closed as she stabbed her blades deep into the thick stone piece he was once laid against. She slowly pulled her blades out and quietly made her way to the tomb…

Hours later…she had left. Her eyes looking somewhat cold… a tiny vein visible on her lower cheek. She took a deep breath…a light mist came out as she muttered,
“So they hide that much…” She had came upon a stash of holocrons. All with info across the ages…time did scatter the data, but it did leave her with more than enough information she needed. Much like her master, she had never returned and much unrest had been spread throughout the order. Another master who left, ironically the mans apprentice had never returned. She was very much alive…but her emotional state despite her not so fragile outside apperance, was very fragile inside. Something the current Sith Lord at the time, Lord Ixion had spotted, and wanted to make use of it. Ixion was the one who quickly warped Lucien’s mind, and had spotted Keiri walking aimlessly among the grounds of the Temples of the Sith Lords. Ixion smiled with a light demonic grin as she walked up upon Keiri, Keiri lashed out, and attacked Ixion, quickly being defeated, despite Keiri’s obvious physical advantage. She had not mastered the force like Ixion did, and Ixion could see, although she was a master, there was great potential. She had taken Keiri under her wing…and granted her with the name Darth Aeon.

Keiri as Aeon bore a black and blue mask that covered her face, as the hood also did so. She was quickly learned about, and quickly feared amongst the few sith in existence, and Ixion knew she had Keiri wrapped around her finger. What she didn’t expect, was how much in power Keiri had grown, and how much she was holding back on Ixion. When she revealed how amusing yet twisted what Ixion did to Lucian was for her, Ixion smiled with pride, speaking, “He was nothing but a weak piece of Jedi trash. One who learned too much.” Aeon, quickly reminded Ixion…that he was her first love. And how much he meant to her. She wanted to usurp Ixion…and also get vengeance for her master. Easily, she broken, diced, and annihilated Ixion, taking her silver blade and putting it on her hilt, keeping it as a reminder. Now as the Dark Lord, Aeon felt she needed to establish herself as a true successor, one much more powerful than her predecessor. Something she proved on several different accounts, so now at 78, she felt she needed an apprentice. One who could have the longevity she herself had.

Luring a Neo Athenian child by the name of Rayne to her fold, she trained Rayne into the arts of the dark side. The girl growing in power, constantly challenged Keiri, and was always easily beaten. 33 years had passed…and Rayne saw an opportunity present itself. She had noticed how a few Jedi had disguised themselves, and attempted infiltration. Taking her forces and leaving, she left her master to fight many Jedi masters and knights, alone in the academy she was establishing in the desert of Tatooine. Despite how she was able to dispatch many, she had often wondered why her apprentice did not arrive, thinking she was awaiting the right moment to strike, she paid not much mind to it. Defeating many, partially injured, and left between her, and 3 other masters, lead by master Ye’keb Millennium, Aeon attempted a force storm maneuver which Millenium struggled to deflect, it had hit a reactor behind Aeon, and a large explosion ensued in the room. The masters got out…with a very injured, and somewhat comatose Aeon. Rayne used that chance to become Darth Arana before her time was cut short by Plagueus many years later.

While Aeon was in a comatose state, she was being healed…and was mind wiped…and was literally programmed with her original name… and made her believe she was a lowly captain within the republic army. This ruse lasted for quite some time, until her paths crossed with Millennium yet again. Over time being around the woman, her memory jumpstarted again, and she was eventually reminded of her whole past. Keiri remembering how Rayne never came, it had dawned to her, that her student, had in fact betrayed her. Using the time to return home, to her home planet, she felt lost, and empty. She was now 210, and didn’t know what else she could do. She could no longer return to the Order, for she knew she would be persecuted, ad she no longer desired to become a sith lord once again. She took the time to reconnect herself to the force, and hope she had the great power she once had. Once fully reconnected, she had noticed she was far stronger in the force now than when she was the Dark Lord. Using this time as hermitage, she had found a way to not only get back in touch with her sister, but to begin her new training. She avoided the public eye, and with her planet slightly past the outer rim, it made it easier to hide, although she had to suppress her force aura frequently.

It wasn’t after shortly Sidious and Vader were gone, that Keiri had been once again, hitting a crossroads with her training. Feeling as if she couldn’t do much more, she had decided once again, to take in another student. She had lingering thoughts of what Rayne had done to her…and if she should really take in a student, for she was on no ones side. She finally made the choice, that she would indeed take in another, in hopes the child would make the right choice at the right time. Keiri left home once again, and began exploring, visiting planet after planet…until she had hit a planet named Niman, and saw a young silver and green haired girl named Aliana. Keiri closely watched Aliana, and saw there was great potential in her, and made the decision to train her. The night before she was to go talk to her and her parents, she had a premonition…something that she had noticed only happened when something of true importance happened. (ironically not when the force was coming to fight her, anyways) She had gained a vision of Aliana killing a figure, a look on insanity and contempt on the girls face. Keiri quickly realized, that she could infact be the one the girl kills. As a failsafe plan, Keiri had found a body of a Jedi who had not yet become one with the force, one not to be trifled with, she possessed the body, and decided to use it to train Aliana. Using the body, she quickly talked to Aliana and her parents, and the child went with her, to the forested areas of Niman, where she could begin her training.

Keiri would occasionally leave the body while the girl slept, so she could recover some… it was a way for Keiri to truly see how much her power had indeed grown. As she trained the girl, she had taught her both light, and dark principles, showing the very positive, and the very negative effects. Keiri could notice how eager Aliana was to learn, and how quickly the child picked up on the concepts. In shock of how much she had come along, she had told Aliana to avoid reading ancient readings, until Keiri believed she was ready for them. Aliana went behind Keiri’s back, thinking she was ready, and infact read all the sith readings…without touching the Jedi ones. Aliana confronted Keiri’s doll the following day, ordering if Keiri did not teach her more of the dark side, she would kill her, herself. Keiri said no, and for Aliana to have patience…the sayajin hybrid girl lashed out, and Keiri on purpose lost to the girl, the doll laying there, Aliana screamed one final time… she did not yield. Before the corpse was stabbed, Keiri unlinked herself to it…and quietly suppressed her force aura, and left for her home planet…where she would take 2 years of rest to recover.

Feeling her pupils decent, she couldn’t help but think that maybe she was probably not good enough for teaching, that her teachings wreaked of the dark side. Remembering on how she had to suppress herself to inhibit her pupil from finding her, she had began basic physical training for her specie, and quickly had gotten back into shape, and actually into much better shape than ever due to lack of sustenance in her constant suspended animation. Seeing how Aliana’s force aura seemed to be returning to the way it was when they last met, Keiri finally made the decision, that she had to give a few final lessons to her student. It was the least she could do…and that she would show her real self. And if Aliana tried anything, she would kill her, herself. Unleashing her force aura, she awaited Aliana…seeing Aliana and Tank about 4 months after fully revealing herself, the 270 year old woman prepares for another chapter that has yet to be written…

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BAM.

Lucien Vibrava, Keiri, Aliana, Rayne, Ixion © *BlackKusanagi

Tank © =M1A2Tanker
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Comments: 19

dapuretdiva [2008-01-06 16:45:36 +0000 UTC]

o.O What a long artist comment... Nice pic!

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BlackKusanagi In reply to dapuretdiva [2008-01-06 19:14:20 +0000 UTC]

Lol, its her bio. But thanks.

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freeza-frost [2007-07-14 00:17:57 +0000 UTC]

preety! is she was a darth, is she a jedi?

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BlackKusanagi In reply to freeza-frost [2007-07-14 08:28:10 +0000 UTC]

All explained in her bio. ^_^

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freeza-frost In reply to BlackKusanagi [2007-07-15 02:16:30 +0000 UTC]

i see her lightsabres.

u see she's in the SW universe.

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freeza-frost In reply to BlackKusanagi [2007-07-14 14:55:41 +0000 UTC]

ok.

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majinshirow [2007-07-13 23:25:36 +0000 UTC]

Wow, she's really beautiful!

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ghemja [2007-07-13 22:55:10 +0000 UTC]

wow ... just wow

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BlackKusanagi In reply to ghemja [2007-07-13 23:03:33 +0000 UTC]

Good wow or bad wow?

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ghemja In reply to BlackKusanagi [2007-07-14 01:34:34 +0000 UTC]

lol good wow ... very good wow

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BlackKusanagi In reply to ghemja [2007-07-14 08:27:42 +0000 UTC]

Thats all I needed to hear.

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VivaLaGorilla [2007-07-13 14:41:49 +0000 UTC]

The force is strong (and damn sexy) with her. Awesome job on this bio and pin up BK.

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BlackKusanagi In reply to VivaLaGorilla [2007-07-13 17:10:53 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. ^_^

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Debido-San [2007-07-13 13:37:12 +0000 UTC]

lol I noticed she's an Athenian, is she a different Keiri Kajisen than the one we used to play with?

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BlackKusanagi In reply to Debido-San [2007-07-13 16:28:43 +0000 UTC]

Exactly.

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Rudga [2007-07-13 12:39:06 +0000 UTC]

Wow, total kick ass, she looks deadly pretty

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RedHippy [2007-07-13 11:20:06 +0000 UTC]

Nice thats some fine ass work :Þ

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BlackKusanagi In reply to RedHippy [2007-07-13 17:12:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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Kaiju-Borru-Zetto [2007-07-13 09:30:23 +0000 UTC]

Hell yeah! Looks freaking sweet!

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