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blue-raindrop — Friendship
Published: 2013-06-25 15:14:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 611; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 0
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Description I found it one morning,
just sitting there,
its beautiful colors intrigued me,
I could only stop and stare.

When I finally grew used to it,
I brought it inside,
I watered and fed the flower,
I set everything aside.

It thrived for many years,
bringing it's color to my life,
its beauty like none other,
its thorns as sharp as a knife.

One day I found to my dismay,
my lovely treasure was dying,
I know it sounds silly, it's only a flower,
but I couldn't help crying.

I tried so hard to make it better,
I gave it all I could,
I tried to talk it into living,
but the flower never understood.

When the last petal fell,
I felt my hopes drop,
why I cried, I knew not,
but the pain didn't ever stop.

My treasure is gone now,
yet I still feel strangely dead,
I'm surrounded by other wonderful flowers,
but my heart is as heavy as lead.
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Comments: 10

westonattor [2015-07-25 22:10:55 +0000 UTC]

Metaphorical and beautiful

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WillowingWeep [2014-01-24 19:06:18 +0000 UTC]

Hmm, Very good. I love the symbolism.

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ThePoeticDragon [2013-06-26 01:54:25 +0000 UTC]

Reciting a truth none should forget in such a beautiful manner.
Thank you for making this piece of literary gold.

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blue-raindrop In reply to ThePoeticDragon [2013-06-26 20:08:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you I deal with us and downs with friednship a lot, so I thought I'd go ahead and write about it because I'm sure everyone feels this way at least once in their life.

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ThePoeticDragon In reply to blue-raindrop [2013-06-27 04:34:53 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, that truly is too true.

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chancerox [2013-06-25 16:48:33 +0000 UTC]

just went through this. :/ this is a stunning way of portraying the loss we've all felt at some point. great work.

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blue-raindrop In reply to chancerox [2013-06-25 20:17:45 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I've been losing a lot of friends lately so I thought it would be a good topic to create a poem for.

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KittyPleasance [2013-06-25 16:40:25 +0000 UTC]

Wow I love your use of symbolism! It's a very beautiful poem and also quite sad but true.

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blue-raindrop In reply to KittyPleasance [2013-06-25 20:18:10 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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KittyPleasance In reply to blue-raindrop [2013-06-26 05:41:22 +0000 UTC]

No problem!

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