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westonattor [2015-07-25 22:10:55 +0000 UTC]
Metaphorical and beautiful
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WillowingWeep [2014-01-24 19:06:18 +0000 UTC]
Hmm, Very good. I love the symbolism.
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ThePoeticDragon [2013-06-26 01:54:25 +0000 UTC]
Reciting a truth none should forget in such a beautiful manner.
Thank you for making this piece of literary gold.
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chancerox [2013-06-25 16:48:33 +0000 UTC]
just went through this. :/ this is a stunning way of portraying the loss we've all felt at some point. great work.
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blue-raindrop In reply to chancerox [2013-06-25 20:17:45 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. I've been losing a lot of friends lately so I thought it would be a good topic to create a poem for.
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KittyPleasance [2013-06-25 16:40:25 +0000 UTC]
Wow I love your use of symbolism! It's a very beautiful poem and also quite sad but true.
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