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glarionac [2010-03-07 06:11:31 +0000 UTC]

Hello there ^_^ I'm glarionac, one of the critics from #the-OC-maniac
Here comes the critic.

I think the pose is pretty nice. It's not an easy pose to do, and you even have to draw the characters with wings. But as I said, it came out nice. You did a good job on the coloring too. I like how you do the shading on their skin...especially on the male's skin because the shading is clearer on him. And I also like how you color everything, including the background, the trees, the beads circling their feet, their fingernails, and even their tattoos. I personally love detailed drawings ^_^

But, as a traditional artist myself, I understand how hard it is to make things appear pretty much realistic. The wings can use a bit more shading here and there, preferably a much darker shading to give them more volume. And there's something that bothers me a bit about their body anatomies. It doesn't mean that you did the bodies wrong. They just need a little fixing. Probably you can make the torso longer and adjust the size of the arms? That would make the proportions better than they already are.

Other than that, this is already nicely done. I'm sure your friend who commissioned you was happy with the result

Have a nice day!~

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InuLvr333 [2010-01-17 01:43:08 +0000 UTC]

very cool

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jamie017 [2010-01-16 00:37:34 +0000 UTC]

So colorful, it almost jumps right off the screen at you. Very nice...

jamie

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