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BrattyBen — Enter the Hero 4
Published: 2008-03-19 07:25:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 984; Favourites: 28; Downloads: 19
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Here is another update. I added some more elements to help sell the environment, and changed some of the shadows.Related content
Comments: 27
I like this one a lot! The contrast is balanced and I love the composition.
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Thanks, man. You know what they say, "third time's a charm!"
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yeh, this one works great man. dont get the scary batman intimidation thing on his entry, but he seems more neutral and approachable, so whether thats good in this scene is the thing. I noticed the layout had him kinda in shadow, just like a silhouette as he was at the desk...so really they darker image with bats head blacked out worked better. this could still work though, because it kinda re-establishes batman as being a dark character in that panel.
But really, if I was reading this in a comic, i wouldnt give it a second thought, so dont worry too much.
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Thanks for the comments. I really tried hard to get that 'classic' look, and then in the next panel I went for the mysterious.
I appreciate all the help.
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holy CRAP of an improvement.
really solid movement/pose dude
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Thanks so much, man! I really was happy with the final result. It looks classic, but, still seems a bit modern.
I'm glad I had so many supportive people helping me out
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Thanks for all your suggestions man. It really helped me out alot!!
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"nailed it!!"
lol. Thanks man!
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Looking good man...This is a very good angle for what you are trying to achieve.
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Like this shot- the added shadows really help it out. I was thinking last night, it might even be cool to have him in the corner of the room and just step out of the shadow- he had been there the whole time! Great work, love your style on the bat!
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Plus I like the cape in the wind out the window. Gives alot of movement!
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Thanks. I had many comments about getting that cape right.
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Commisioner grodon's office looks really rundown...
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Well, my feeling is that since the GCPD is full of graft and cops on the take, they probably wouldn't be putting too much money into the department. And since Gordon probably doesn't have alot of friends there, they gave him the crappy office.
I think it fits his character, because he's a little worse for wear himself.
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