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And they all lived happily ever after until the Shredder came and acted like a douche 8D
Splinter has grown from this experience, learnt some things about himself and has come to terms with who he is and what sort of life he is now living. And he's realised that he's actually fine with that change is hard, it always is, but sometimes it's a blessing in disguise.

I hope every-one enjoyed my little story. I thought it'd be interesting to write something to show Splinter's transition from orphaned rat into loving father.

I really want to thank every-one who left comments and feedback on these pages, you guys are the best
As I said on the first page, for a while I was going to abandon this story because I didn't think any-one would like it. I'm so happy that some of you enjoyed it as much as you did. You encouraged me to keep going and finish it. Perhaps one day I'll do another short story if I feel the urge to.
As for those who've come late I hope you've enjoyed the story as well
I've never done a comic like this, so I'm really grateful for every-one's support. thank you so much!

Raphie is safe, the family is together again, and Splinter has made peace within himself. It's time for some well deserved sleep in the warm nest

TMNT (c) Mirage
TMNT font (c) Mirage or Lionsgate or Maple
fonts downloaded from [link]


The end!
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Comments: 191

Free-live In reply to ??? [2015-06-05 14:08:41 +0000 UTC]

Oh, that last panel for 11 page, made me quite happy tears β™₯

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C-Puff In reply to ??? [2009-07-19 20:07:42 +0000 UTC]

perhaps it was easier for me to play with the camera because this is another "passing of time" page like the one where Splinter's sunning around in a panic so I didn't need to be as sequential in the panels as some of the others (You can tell I'm an animator and not a comic-artist XD what do they normally care about how sequential their panels are?)

And yes, let's not go into the eyes again to each his own my friend.

I dunno about director material but heaven knows I wouldn't say no to the job here's hoping right?

XDDD and you love your Leonardo don't you? nah but he's awesome *clings to him* I don't know about completed short stories, but I have some ideas cooking for some "scenes" that are PART of larger stories I could put down into comic form. They may not big contained stories but they're scenes I feel are powerful enough to be enjoyable to see play out in sequence, but I see you're online, I'll elaborate elsewhere so as not to spoil the surprise for those who might read this.

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Tallithia [2016-12-28 10:30:42 +0000 UTC]

Awwww, this is so sweetΒ Β 
I really like stories exploring the first days of splinter and his four new sons, because there had to be so much emotion attached to it with the mutation and the sudden responsibility. I really like the transition you create from the instinctual animal to a more sentient being. And his battle with his overwhelming new emotions... and poor Raphie, it's so like him to deal with his emotions by running away all aloneΒ Β 

It was really difficult for me to dinstinguish between the four turtles first (except for Mikey ^^ he has the cutes poses ). Guess if it wasn't for the colors (and weapons) it would be difficult to tell who is who in the 2k3 series, too After the second run I think I now could identifie them all, maybe except from the all-sleeping panels (this is kinda hard... is it Raph on top of Splinter in the last panel? I bet, it seems like a way he would like to sleep ^^).
Amazing comic, great emotions and so so cute all the way! Love itΒ Β 
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PrincessMoonHeart [2016-12-13 16:22:17 +0000 UTC]

This comic was so beautiful. Β 

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C-Puff In reply to PrincessMoonHeart [2016-12-13 21:10:27 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much this was my first serious attempt at a comic.

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PrincessMoonHeart In reply to C-Puff [2016-12-14 16:34:37 +0000 UTC]

My advice. Make more TMNT comics. Especially ones with Splinter.

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Autogirl1851 [2016-03-22 03:04:51 +0000 UTC]

AWW!!!!!!!!!

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Autogirl1851 [2016-03-22 03:04:11 +0000 UTC]

Β Β Β Β Β Β 

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FFX2player [2015-08-27 00:26:32 +0000 UTC]

Dang it Shredder, if it weren't for you we could have had a show about family fluffy-ness ALL the time!

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C-Puff In reply to FFX2player [2015-08-27 08:21:46 +0000 UTC]

XD Shredder likes to ruin everyone's fun.

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FFX2player In reply to C-Puff [2015-08-27 12:04:03 +0000 UTC]

He's so mean!

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PrincessMoonHeart In reply to FFX2player [2016-12-13 16:23:18 +0000 UTC]

And yet, without the jerk, we wouldn't have the family fluffiness that we do have.Β 

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FFX2player In reply to PrincessMoonHeart [2016-12-14 19:40:02 +0000 UTC]

True, without dramatic tension, character development falls flat.

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gameguy199 [2015-01-11 01:29:16 +0000 UTC]

amazing.
simply perfect.

keep up the great work.

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MoonLuna18 [2015-01-11 00:49:37 +0000 UTC]

awwww

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Crystal-Violeta [2014-02-10 01:20:54 +0000 UTC]

This was so sweet and cute!

I love it.

Who is the turtle lost?

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C-Puff In reply to Crystal-Violeta [2014-02-10 16:17:47 +0000 UTC]

Thanks
It's Raphael.

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candymm [2014-02-07 18:12:02 +0000 UTC]

how was the one how diseperd?

leo don mikey raph

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C-Puff In reply to candymm [2014-02-10 16:22:30 +0000 UTC]

Raph

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Teranovia [2013-12-22 14:37:50 +0000 UTC]

It's so sweet :')

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MarmoraKeef [2013-10-20 23:34:00 +0000 UTC]

..."And they all lived happily ever after until the Shredder came and acted like a douche 8D"


xD

That just made my day right there...


I like this! Anything with lots of emotion.


Have you ever thought about coloring this?

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C-Puff In reply to MarmoraKeef [2013-10-21 20:43:37 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much I actually kept it black and white because I have a thing for Black and white comics to be honest. Most of my favourite comics are (or were) in Black and White

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BubbleGum-Bop [2013-08-09 08:03:03 +0000 UTC]

QuQ I want to hug them... -hugs cpu screen- the feeeeeeeeeeeeeelllllllllsssssssss!!!!

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WeIrDgIrL1412 [2013-06-20 16:09:13 +0000 UTC]

ThEiR aLl So CuTe!!

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InYuJi [2013-04-20 03:54:06 +0000 UTC]

I really REALLY adored this short little comic. Especially since it's Splinter still in rat form and on the verge of gaining newfound intelligence.

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C-Puff In reply to InYuJi [2013-04-21 16:52:09 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so very much and thanks for reading it all!

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EvergreenFeatherson [2013-04-09 08:29:00 +0000 UTC]

[link] aww thats so cute

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C-Puff In reply to EvergreenFeatherson [2013-04-09 15:54:44 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much

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EvergreenFeatherson In reply to C-Puff [2013-04-09 20:35:56 +0000 UTC]

your welcome

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Siiahh [2013-03-06 11:28:53 +0000 UTC]

and they lived happily... ever... after... the end

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C-Puff In reply to Siiahh [2013-03-29 12:32:27 +0000 UTC]

XDDDD

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Siiahh In reply to C-Puff [2013-03-29 12:49:43 +0000 UTC]

*ο½₯γ‚œοΎŸο½₯*:.q..q.:*ο½₯'(*οΎŸβ–½οΎŸ*)'ο½₯*:.q. .q.:*ο½₯γ‚œοΎŸο½₯*

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StarStorm16 [2012-12-22 14:51:19 +0000 UTC]

That was a really sweet and touching comic.

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C-Puff In reply to StarStorm16 [2012-12-23 14:37:58 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much

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GirlzRule312 [2012-12-13 06:07:56 +0000 UTC]

I've just finished reading it all. I found it was all PERFECT. I LOVED LOVED LOVED those eyes! Although it needed colour, without the skin tone I couldn't really tell whcih turtle is which. Besides that it was absoloutly PERFECT!!! XD

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C-Puff In reply to GirlzRule312 [2012-12-13 12:02:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so very much! and thanks for reading it all.
I drew this a while ago but I'm glad people are still liking it X3 personally, I prefer black and white comics, probably because those are just the comics I tend to read the most (with exceptions).

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retr0synthgiaX [2012-11-30 11:46:27 +0000 UTC]

*sniffle* That was so cute and touching story...

Realy awesome job.
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C-Puff In reply to retr0synthgiaX [2012-12-03 14:22:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! And thanks for reading all of it!

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Rufeline [2012-11-14 17:50:07 +0000 UTC]

awwwww this is sooo adorable. Ok this is not an expert speaking here but a fan who loves reading fanmade comics^^ so i just like to say I really love your work and hope you plan on making more comics like this maybe some minicomics about their time growing up^^ Thanks again for the cute story!!

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C-Puff In reply to Rufeline [2012-11-20 14:18:52 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much, and thank you so much for reading all of it

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Raquel3333 [2012-11-03 13:30:29 +0000 UTC]

What a touching story!!!!!

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C-Puff In reply to Raquel3333 [2012-11-03 15:45:53 +0000 UTC]

thank you for reading it!

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drtiffles [2012-09-03 19:29:30 +0000 UTC]

who was the one who ran away? was it leo? and why did he go?

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C-Puff In reply to drtiffles [2012-09-03 23:19:31 +0000 UTC]

It was Raph and of course it was because he heard Splinter.

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KyraStrong [2012-05-16 23:21:14 +0000 UTC]

so cute i figured it was mikey or raph who ran away

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writterartismangaka [2011-12-05 00:37:15 +0000 UTC]

Family snuggle! Adorable!

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C-Puff In reply to writterartismangaka [2011-12-05 00:40:41 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! and thanks for reading it all!

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writterartismangaka In reply to C-Puff [2011-12-05 00:55:41 +0000 UTC]

No problem.

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twzzlerz [2011-06-20 16:25:04 +0000 UTC]

this was an awesome story

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C-Puff In reply to twzzlerz [2011-06-20 17:29:07 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much

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