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lyssagal [2014-09-30 13:38:45 +0000 UTC]

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Vision: The overall vision of this image is spot on. Gives a great depiction of what the artist was going for. Gives a discrete understanding of the image, and there isn't any type of persuasion of what it might not be. Very clear display.

Originality: Think this image is the depiction of "Hand of Adam." Overall, I don't think it is a bad start to learn how to draw hands, and the anatomy of the hands. But originality wise, it is not the strongest point to pick. But it is a good start to learn how to draw.

Technique: The technique's are not bad. Only suggestions is the fingers need a little bit more shaded? Where the fingers are suppose to be faded into the background more--left hand fingers--, it is sticking out very prominently. Maybe using a tortillon, or smudge stick, would be a better option to give the hands as though they are there, but not sticking out as much. Also applies to the right hand as well. Shading and smudging would give the best aspect of realism.

Impact: The overall impact is quite impressive. Would like to see more from this artist. See the process of improvement from this artist. The concept, and idea's are great.

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spacekiid [2014-09-30 01:44:41 +0000 UTC]

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Hey :3 I just thought i'd say you maybe coulc add more shading like, reaallly dark around the dark sides. Charchol pencils are really good for this, and then you can use that special fix spray to make everything stay in place. And highlight the hands a little more with white, using a white pencil helps me a lot. To be honest, its pretty damn amazing as it is! Also try not to outline the entire hand, sometimes shading it into light makes a bigger effect than outlining everything (this is what my art teacher taught me..) You can see all this on my Marilyn Manson portrait. Sorry i'm quite terrible at explaining, but i hope this helped xx

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AlejoScattone [2014-09-26 21:40:24 +0000 UTC]

exelente dibujo

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manuvart [2014-09-26 21:13:04 +0000 UTC]

Very good work!!!

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Wubjubjub666 [2014-09-26 18:33:09 +0000 UTC]

Great work my friend 

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MarieRaine [2014-09-26 18:13:10 +0000 UTC]

Really amazing, as always!! You're becoming better and better!

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ArtistNumber3 [2014-09-26 12:08:15 +0000 UTC]

Great work! That spark could be better made but its great anyway

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Soundmetrotrip [2014-09-26 11:36:26 +0000 UTC]

nice work

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BigAssJay [2014-09-26 03:49:58 +0000 UTC]

This is great bro!!! Wow. Good job on the hands and shading.

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