M27W [2004-05-10 02:54:56 +0000 UTC]

Wow... very nice poem! I really like this one... the picture confuses me a bit, but I like the poem!

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marianb [2004-04-22 01:05:13 +0000 UTC]

hey! Very cool! I've felt like that before...

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starrysurrealism [2004-04-21 05:34:42 +0000 UTC]

i like it! I dont know why but I really do!

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11th-hour [2004-04-20 17:52:37 +0000 UTC]

its good. Paints a nice picture.

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philosophie-c [2004-04-20 11:36:00 +0000 UTC]

reminds me of when i was happy in the summer at the beach...

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crystalcage [2004-04-20 05:00:16 +0000 UTC]

Mmmm i love windy days- there is just such a sense of freedom
ahhh hehehe
and you definately captured that feeling here!
ahhhhhhh wonderfully done

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whymebeacause [2004-04-20 04:19:21 +0000 UTC]

simple complete and wonderful!! I love it!

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biesty [2004-04-20 03:57:24 +0000 UTC]

wow nice writing here, i really wish the wind would blow here really hard right now

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aerochimp1 [2004-04-20 02:49:23 +0000 UTC]

only thing i can see.. is that i think it should have

allowing the blanket of imagination to
pull me away

or you could put the 'to' in the next line instead

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StandingFailure [2004-04-20 02:36:06 +0000 UTC]

very cool piece

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equusrevelrous [2004-04-20 02:32:07 +0000 UTC]

windy is tasty.

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