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Published: 2015-04-02 05:08:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 1777; Favourites: 85; Downloads: 3
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Here, have another Cinderpaw-storyline drawing.This didn't turn out how I pictured it in my head and...meh, it's not my favorite piece. I need to get better at using color. >_>
Still love looming!Tigerclaw and horrified!Fireheart, though. And ded!Cinderpaw, for that matter. LOOK YOU CAN SEE THE BONE IN HER LEG. /morbidity
Drawn in Paint Tool SAI
characters not mine
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"LOOK YOU CAN SEE THE BONE IN HER LEG."
*squints* i don't see any bONE OH WAIT THERE IT IS
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BONE SURPRISE
Bone(the cat): *come out of cinder paw's leg* oh hello dere
Tigerclaw: o h
Fireheart: wtfu--
Cinderpaw: *SCREAMING
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hahahahahaha, you wouldn't think her injury could become even more traumatic, but spontaneously generating an ENTIRE CAT would probably do that
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yep
Fireheart: *gets out a saw* we're gonna have to cut off your leg
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Tigerclaw: star clan what have i done
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My senpai...
would you notice me?
Ur art is so good 0:
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consider yourself noticed ^-^
...and thank you!
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Thanks to the you :3
and Yours welcome XD
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This is gorgeous fan-art, I love your style ;w;
Its so unique and beautiful <33
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Can I suggest making Cinderpaw a little bigger? Most 6 month-old cats are almost as big as full grown cats c:
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In case you hadn't noticed from the weird triangular stuff in the background and the big expressive googly eyes on the adult cats, I don't draw super realistically. Rest assured that I thought about how large to draw her and made the artistic decision to exaggerate her smallness in comparison to Fireheart and Tigerclaw to make her seem more vulnerable, just like I exaggerated how big Tigerclaw actually is to make him look all threatening and grim-reaper-y as he looms over Fireheart in the background.
Also, this is a pretty detailed drawing. I think it took like 5-10 layers to draw everything on Cinderpaw alone. It's not as though I can just go in, use the scale tool, and "fix" everything - making Cinderpaw bigger would screw up the composition anyways.
When I draw, usually I plan out what I'm doing. I rarely just slap it down on the paper. So if a cat is smaller than you think they should be, or fatter than you think they should be, or has markings that you didn't imagine them having, or doesn't look "realistic" enough for you, or is drawn in a relationship that you hate, and that bothers you, you can go draw your own version of the picture, because ensue whiny toddler voice I draw what I want!
...so in conclusion, yeah, you can suggest that I change stuff in my drawing, feel free to do that, but be aware I'm prooooobably not gonna do it. Thanks for the critique.
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That's fine, I completely understand. I'm so sorry if I've offended you 
And don't worry, I don't draw that realistic either XD
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...and sorry if I came off harsh! Usually artists will request critique if they want it, and I also think it's important that people should be able to explore their own styles - which goes both ways! When I suggest that someone "go draw it themselves", I do sincerely mean that. It sucks when someone else won't draw the pairing/style/scene you like (I speak from experience), or make it look the way you think it should, but that just provides an opportunity to improve your own skills and figure out how you like to draw and how you see and depict the world: an opportunity for growth. Thanks for commenting! ^-^
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It's fine, I've had worse replies XD
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