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cha29 In reply to caeria [2011-08-31 01:07:25 +0000 UTC]
Thank you ^^ Don't worry about me getting fired for sketching, as I only do it on my breaks ... as to the doe, I purposely made the lines more sketchier looking due to the fact I had no references to work off of and because it's a patronus as I see them as wispy looking. So I'm glad that came through (: Though I hope to fix it as some day I'd like to color some of these sketches...
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janach [2011-08-30 16:36:28 +0000 UTC]
I love Snape's astonished expression. We don't often see him looking that way.
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cha29 In reply to janach [2011-08-31 01:12:20 +0000 UTC]
It certainly gave me troubles to draw--next to the doe itself-- so I'm glad that you like it ^^
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janach In reply to cha29 [2011-08-31 01:42:07 +0000 UTC]
The doe does need reworking. Except for the legs, it seems almost more like a dog than a deer. But it's only roughly sketched at this point, so there's time for improvement. Maybe you need some new reference photos. It's such a good depiction of Sev that I would like to see the doe match in quality.
Intended as helpful critique, not a put-down.
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cha29 In reply to janach [2011-08-31 02:40:43 +0000 UTC]
Oh, certainly the doe needs work. As I mentioned in the description, I drew this while at work, so I hadn't had any photos to reference on drawing it (:
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