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Description So, I decided to go ahead and try to write out Noonien's story in the whole TNG universe, and the crappy quickie sketches followed. It beautifully displays my inability to draw a person the same why twice.

So far we've got Noonien Soong, son of Iseul Soong who was well respected in robotics circles and pushed his son to follow in his footsteps. Noonien refers to Iseul as "ol' big-nosed bastard" and doesn't mention his mother at all.

While Noonien helped his father and became skilled with robots and AI at a young age, his first true work with actual androids was when he was 15 and got a job repairing what he called the "brothelbots." (top right sketch) From this he gained valuable knowlege that would later be applied to his fully-functional android sons.

Noonien entered the robotics department at the Daystrom institute at a relatively young age (center sketch) and immediately set to work with androids. (He would, of course, brush up before presenting his experiments (lower left sketch), always wearing gold rimmed frames with no lenses that had belonged to his father because they made him look "properly stuffy") He gained recognition with his improved body types and fame with the Soong Alpha Series AI. The pinnacle of this series, the A-3, known as Lucy, earned him a place as star cyberneticist of the Federation.

But Noonien was not satisfied, wanting to complete his family legacy and create true artificial intelligence. He made the public promise to create a positronic brain and immediately set to work on the Beta Series. After several years the institute declared his project, the B-1, a failure and a humiliated Doctor Soong vanished. Noonien went to Omicron Theta with a few fellow disgruntled colleagues to work in peace.

And the story goes to canon from there, plus the obnoxious add-ons. Noonien married Juliana, and together the two of them worked on the B-2 and the B-3 who were failures and died. They found semi-success in B-4 (whom Juliana named Isaac, though this was never placed into his program and was thus lost), but he was a primitive prototype and Noonien began anew on his first success with B-5, named Lore. We know how that turned out. And so work on B-6 began and thus Noonien completed his ULTIMATE CREATION...

A really confused android who never did get the knack of humor, did he?

Data in the simplified style I'd use if I ever decide to put together the short SoS comic series.


Who's still here after all that? Those sketches didn't deserve that infodump...
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Comments: 15

millylove1098 [2013-03-23 17:42:49 +0000 UTC]

Hah! I recognise that glasses shot!

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XyndnyAlpha [2012-10-16 17:46:46 +0000 UTC]

oh my gosh the large round rim glasses look FRIGGING SEXY!

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SenTalya [2010-11-29 07:42:59 +0000 UTC]

You are one of the biggest goof I've ever met. Always have been always will be.

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ukushtikil [2010-11-29 06:50:02 +0000 UTC]

The infodump rocks. I really love the way you expand the TNG canon with interesting, intelligent, plausible elements of your own. (Kudos for finding a non-ridiculous explanation for the name 'B4'. And also: I've looked so long for a third name in the 'Data' and 'Lore' style and 'Myth' is just...p erfect.)

O, and 'brothelbots'? XD I like that. Reminds me of something I'm writing.

You seem to have created an entire fictional world of your own that's so expansive that, honestly, I've been reluctant to dive into because I have so little time, but at the same time you've long got me fascinated, even by the drawings and comments to them alone. I hope I'll find the opportunity to check out your fic, maybe around Christmas, and I really hope you'll share some (more) of your thoughts at the comm.

BTW just because it had to be asked some time: do you do porn at all?

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chiauve In reply to ukushtikil [2010-12-04 02:09:27 +0000 UTC]

Eh, sorry about the slow reply. My web browser kept kerfritzing and I gave up, then haven't been on in a bit. I typed the reply in wordpad, so sorry if it gets a bit lengthy. ^^

Anyway, thank you! I'm glad the ideas come off that way as I often worry I work too often in the cliche. As for B4...what explanaitions have you heard? All I got was the pun off "Before" but that honestly implied to me that Doctor Soong planned that he was a prototype and purposefully abandoned him. That didn't bother me for the initial viewings (Nemesis was the first TNG film I ever saw, and I watched the movies before I saw the show), but after we got to know Noonien a bit, especially Juliana's memories of building the boys, that didn't seem like him at all! But on giving B4 a new name I basically worked backwards on their names, so to speak. Data is specified information, lore is general knowledge, and mythology is used to explain the world when lacking comprehension of it. Seemed to fit the poor guy XD

You have a story involving brothelbots? Please, do tell!

And don't worry, I tend to make my stories bigger than they are by babbling on with the drawings. Still, I'm glad you are interested and hope you find time to read it. And about the comm, can you not make original posts with open id? I can't figure it out and I've got a nice stupid Data fanmix I'd like to share (cause I got bored, har har).

Porn? Oh, it runs rampant through my head, but rarely makes into the paper (or screen, these days...) simply because my experiences in such matters is extremely limited. I do have a few little stories in my head called the "guilty stories," but they usually involve ridiculous storylines, non-con, and are DRENCHED in angst. I use them to keep the angst in my real stories toned down. Doesn't always work. For drawing porn...I always end up giggling. But I could give it a shot, I had a funny Lore/Data comic in mind...

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ukushtikil In reply to chiauve [2010-12-04 09:47:26 +0000 UTC]

Haven't actually heard any 'B4' explanations, but like you say the word is taken in 'Nemesis' to mean 'before' which is just absurd for different reasons.

mythology is used to explain the world when lacking comprehension of it
Ooh, that's just one interpretation, of course... Sorry, couldn't resist. (Just spent a whole year studying theory of religion...) It does seem fitting for the 'hierarchy of understanding' in the three androids that you describe, though.

The story, well, I friended you on LJ so if I'm not mistaken you can read my f-locked posts. (Reminds me I'll have to do the same on DW or it'll still be pointless.) Just browse around the journal, I posted a WIP there called 'Night City'. (Usually I don't post unfinished stories, but for this one I really needed some feedback.)

You're right, you need a DW account in you want to make your own posts at the comm. I'll send you a PM with an invite code.

Non-con? Angst? Man, now you've *really* made me curious... I love that kind of stuff. As for ridiculous storylines, who cares, that's what porn is for!

At least draw the comic...? Please...? ^_^

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chiauve In reply to ukushtikil [2010-12-09 05:38:10 +0000 UTC]

Oh yes, I know there's far more to mythology than that, not even to include the religious aspect of it, but that was more or less the summed up anthropological view.

Yay! Thank you, I’m in need of some more TNG fic. I’ll hopefully have some feedback to offer you once I’ve read them. And thanks for the DW code, I’ll try to be a little more active in your community (and to get that comic whipped up, but don’t expect much, it’s not that funny ^^)

Yes, well, the “guilty” part of those stories isn’t the porn, which can, for a few of them, not be that prominent, but the schmoopy angst stuff (and ridiculous plotlines) themselves. Most of these I come up with when I sleep in on weekends and my brain isn’t fully awake. Or at work, where it’s the same thing XD
So far the only fully planned sex scene is some messed up waking daymare thing Data has involving a creepy non-con threesome with the Borg Queen and Locutus which is supposed to be more disturbing than hot. Because Data’s my favorite so I enjoy tormenting him. But even something like that I probably couldn’t pull off and would have to hand off to someone else. ‘Cause if I’m laughing when I write it, I’m sure the audience will too when they read it.

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ukushtikil In reply to chiauve [2010-12-09 08:48:59 +0000 UTC]

Data’s my favorite so I enjoy tormenting him
Heh. Let's just say I recognize the sentiment.

Anyway, I really don't mean to pressure you into publishing stories you feel uncomfortable about. I'm selfish and greedy. And, though I almost only write porn, I know how you feel. I've been struggling on and off lately with something that I think is pretty hot when I'm not thinking clearly, and most of the times just find too absurd and too nasty. (Although on the other hand, I looked at it yesterday and thought: if you see those warnings it's actually not nearly as nasty as you would expect... Another reason to rewrite it... again.)

Of course I'd be really happy to hear anything you have to say about my stuff. As you know, in fan fic (and fan art) feedback is the only reward... Like I said 'Night City' is still a WIP. You might also like 'Veils Falling' and 'I Have A Complete Memory Record...' and possibly also 'A Game For Two'. The rest is old and stupid. I'm working on more but it goes slowly. And let me mention again that it's all porn... And slash! Gosh, that is starting to get so self-evident to me. But it's not.

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SenTalya In reply to ukushtikil [2010-11-29 07:44:15 +0000 UTC]

Her...porn.... does not compute! (you know I'm poking fun ol' friend)

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chiauve In reply to SenTalya [2010-11-29 22:25:58 +0000 UTC]

I would prefer you don't reply to others for me, please.

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ukushtikil In reply to chiauve [2010-12-02 21:35:13 +0000 UTC]

Oh dear... does that mean *you* won't reply anymore? ^_^

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chiauve In reply to ukushtikil [2010-12-04 02:11:38 +0000 UTC]

Sorry, replied above (finally)

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SenTalya In reply to chiauve [2010-11-29 23:13:01 +0000 UTC]

sure. Sorry bout that. so coming back home for the holidays?

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chiauve In reply to SenTalya [2010-12-04 02:12:07 +0000 UTC]

Yep. I'll have to see if I can get me car fixed.

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SenTalya In reply to chiauve [2010-12-04 02:19:31 +0000 UTC]

Squeeeeeee hope i'll be able to see you at some point. Damn it's been a while.... Not since high school I think that was what... 10 years now? (waaa I'm old)

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