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thesweetestsorrow [2008-08-03 00:14:27 +0000 UTC]
cool idea - nice composition :]
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Starting-Stats [2008-07-07 20:19:21 +0000 UTC]
I can't do that. (@* 0 *@)
What I can do is admire the idea of experimentation. It's important to reach out and try new ideas and styles. Sometimes it works, sometimes it doesn't. Either way, something can be learned. That's the good part, isn't it? Kudos to that.
And yes, it is very colorful. It's full of saturated colors. Alot of colors. And letters. It's alot of stuff. Although it provides some movement around the edge, it feels more chaotic than helpful. The colors add to the chaotic feel. They color choices are many and it can be a lot for the eyes.
My suggestion is to desaturate the letters that aren't part of the message. This can reduce the chaotic feel and add emphasis to the letters. Color wise, it'll be a good idea. What'll be left are the primary three: yellow, red and blue.
Whatever you decide to do, good luck.
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redvsblack [2008-07-07 10:21:58 +0000 UTC]
i sense.....a theme.....
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