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KaliannShevlin [2012-10-27 00:28:19 +0000 UTC]
What a great image.
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Acid-Reflux27 [2009-06-24 07:19:33 +0000 UTC]
I like this picture alot... If I saw her on the street, I would ask her to marry me, no introductions, just proposal. Any woman who can pull off that outfit, with little wingy shoes that well, deserves a proposal.
I see what everyone is talking about. The foreground not matching the background. There seems to be two major problems that I noticed. one is Your light source seems to be comming from direct noon, but the rock only has two small shadows. It should have larger shadows.
Second, There is no middle ground to tie the fore, and back ground together. It said this is digital art, so what I would do is put the rock she is standing on, on a seperate layer, and pay as much attention to detail to it as you did her... with both lines, and color... This will also give you a chance to add shading.
The smaller rock behind it can be a bit more blury since it is behind the rock, but it should still have an outline, and some detail, so it should also be on its own layer.
Then the back ground, should stay pretty much the way it is. kind of blury and wavy, almost like a heat marage.
Thanks for the info about hermaphrodite, I've been trying to figure out where that name came from for a long time.
Jer
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Acid-Reflux27 In reply to chronicdoodler [2009-07-14 00:49:22 +0000 UTC]
Backgrounds are very tough. Remember where your focal point is. Many Artists use a photo refrence for the background, to get more detail, (and I'm the worst at this, but end up putting so much detail in the background people lose sight of where the eye is SUPPOSED to go first.
Jer
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CindarellaPop [2009-02-14 06:32:07 +0000 UTC]
You did a really nice job with all the pretty shiny bits!
The only real critique I can offer is that she doesn't seem grounded to her rock platform, maybe bring out the rock more? More of a shadow? I'm not really sure how I'd fix it.
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Saintbirdy [2009-01-02 13:35:42 +0000 UTC]
OUTER GLOW!
See how you did the wings on the feets? Do that with the dress, I think it would look really nice. o_o
Good job with the shading!
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chronicdoodler In reply to Saintbirdy [2009-01-02 15:23:02 +0000 UTC]
like a wing pattern? I have no idea what your talking about oo
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Saintbirdy In reply to chronicdoodler [2009-01-02 17:21:08 +0000 UTC]
Not a pattern, the outline - iz yellow. Make the dress use yellow lines instead of black.
The background looks separate from the the chick. She's line art, and the background's like a painting. They both look nice alone...
Iz not unified.
It my head, you could add black lines to the background, making it look more like an illustration to match harmo, or you can loose the line art on her.
You gets my beef?
You know I critique to make this the best it can be, not to rag on you or anything.
You also can be like stfu, I like it my way. @,@ *huggles* YOU'S MUH FWIEHND!
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ZeriosGavilan [2008-12-31 05:38:18 +0000 UTC]
I look forward to seeing the complete version. So far as Nero said the foot is the only problem with the pic so far and I love the detail you did on the swan design along with the symbols on the shoulder plates. I remember you also did this character or one similar for one of your gaia page themes back in the days. I hope you have a good New Years with your family. ^^
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Saintbirdy [2008-12-30 14:59:15 +0000 UTC]
COPY PASTA! But it made a difference. I really like the swan armor.
Make it look more awesome! *cracks whip* O_O
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chronicdoodler In reply to Neroren [2008-12-29 21:30:17 +0000 UTC]
Thought so, I'll see if I can fix it.
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Theoutbound [2008-12-29 07:36:42 +0000 UTC]
i thought aphrodite's husband is Vulcan/hephaestus
the god of blacksmith
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Theoutbound In reply to chronicdoodler [2008-12-30 07:39:24 +0000 UTC]
????
did ya made that up?
cause i know about ares but hermes?
i have a book of greek mythologies but there's none
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chronicdoodler In reply to Theoutbound [2008-12-30 08:06:46 +0000 UTC]
If I made it up I would have told you I did. I have several books and some books mention her and some don't. She is only really noted for being the offspring of Ares and Aphrodite and marrying King Cadmus, also her necklace is cursed. So one can understand why some publishers will omit a bit Goddess like herself.
As for hermes and Aphrodite I thought that was a fairly common story :/
Harmonia [link]
Hermaphroditus [link]
Try to google this stuff yourself, its not hard to find.
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chronicdoodler In reply to Theoutbound [2008-12-29 18:12:57 +0000 UTC]
He is. But Aphrodite and Ares did have an affair that produced three children, and Hephaestus eventually wove a special net and caught them in their infidelity.
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