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Here is the first page of the comic series, "Miss Doomsday".Next page: [link]
Cover: [link]
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Woah let me get this straight as I can, she has to keep pretending she's a little kid because her mother has the "50 first dates" syndrome and can't remember any new info.
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Great work and very intense, its also depressing but i think that's what you were going for.
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Thank you so much! That's what I was going for.
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Thanks. I may getting into full production of more pages quite soon.
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Thanks, James! I prefer this version, meself. I think the emotions are coming out more in this version than the previous one.
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Definitely, you felt something lacking in the original or you wouldn't have redone the page, I suspect. Good instincts there budday
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Thanks (and I truly appreciate the fave)! I'll be going with this version, actually.
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....I can only truly judge the face of the character,so i have to mention that this one looks (to me) quite more insane(maybe she has some psychological problems),while the first character appears(to me again) more "pathetic",what I mean is that i don't think of her neither having the guts nor the nerve to do it....here i pass the ball to you again
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I was going for a more intense, disturbed look in this version. I definitely wanted to make it look like she's on the verge of pulling that trigger.
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well i am sure that here you definitely succeded in creating the atmosphere that in any moment it's going to be pulled...therefore i believe that this creation one is quite better for the story
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Thanks! I think I'll be going with this version, actually.
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Thanks for your opinion. I do appreciate it.
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Thanks! I was going for a sexy but dangerous look.
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just a bit of tweaking of her clothes in the middle panel, that's all I have to offer. The shirt in the second doesn't seem anything similar to the school uniform (maybe?) in the third.
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I see what you're saying. I'll definitely keep your suggestion in mind.
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Thank you so much!
I think the eyes on this page connect more with the viewer than the previous version.
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Yeah they definitely do :3 I really like the detail you put in your eyes.
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I get the feeling that this isn't the solution to her problems, merely the beginning of them.
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I think this is the better. In terms of linework, composition and overall power, this just seems that bit more striking. It's excellent!
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Thank you, Kloob! I think I will use the newer version. It does seem to have more emotional impact than the previous version.
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Both are good but I like the newer one more
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Thanks, I prefer this version, too.
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I like the new version better, mostly. I'd have kept the old couch and left the lower left head a bit farther back. The main character's pose feels rather more plausible in this one. The first version had her crouched as though poised and ready to strike... which is a bit at odds with the gun barrel pointed at the temple. This version, posture looks a bit more defeated, which does mirror the character's emotional state in the other pages you've posted of this. I can't say which is ultimately more appropriate, given that it's really not clear what direction you're taking to bring the story around to this promised climax, so you get a lot of rambly theory out of me.
The reason for the couch preference is that, for a moment, I thought this version was taking place on a bus.
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I deeply appreciate the critique, Dannyboy. I prefer this version more than the original, meself. I think the emotions are resonating more on this page than in the previous page and, hopefully, draws you in more.
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Aye. And my only quibbles were... well, quibbles. ^_^ Good job, mate!
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This is definitely a boffo leap forward from the original in many subtle ways. From the increased intensity shown in her eyes complimented by the added stress lines to the heavier look of shock and madness and unkempt hair, you really show how much you've improved from then to now. Excellente!
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Thanks! I think I will be going with this newer version. I like the more intense, almost psychotic vibe she's giving off. It's much more raw. I also like the details in this version more than the previous one.
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I do like this one more, Zac! Bravo on the improvement. The dead people's expressions are much more convincing and the minor pose change is nice!
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Thanks,Tom! I will be using this version instead of the previous one. I like the emotions on this page better. It's more jagged and raw than the earlier version.
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This one is much more dramatic, seems to have more detail and for me, as more intriguing. Nice work!
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