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Published: 2010-08-06 18:18:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 10112; Favourites: 31; Downloads: 327
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The first page of my comic submission for "Miss Doomsay". Fingers still crossed here.The Other pages:
The Slacker (Page 2): [link]
The Chameleon (Page 3): [link]
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Comments: 40
Hmmm! A very interesting way to open the story. Yes, it's quite disturbing, but there is no story without conflict.
Still, I look forward to seeing the rest of the story unfold. Several clues suggest that there is much more going on here than first meets the eye...
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Thanks! I wanted my comic to start in a memorable fashion, something that might grab the reader (not to mention the submission editor's) attention.
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crazy page, what makes it even crazier is the fact that she killed them all and must have Reloaded too!
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I love drawing comics. As you probably know producing your own comics, there's something about breathing life into your own world you create, watching your characters grow and develop and, most importantly, drawing hot babes with big boobs.
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hehe. I agree on all of those! 
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Ah, that remains to be seen.
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Noooooo you must teelllllllll meeeeeeeeeeeeee
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Thanks! This story will be much darker than "Opey the Warhead" (which is saying something, considering how some view Opey as something of a dark story). It's going to have a lot of humor as well. My comical side keeps coming out into my work.
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Nothing wrong with a dash of comedy.
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This really hooks me, I want to read more. Wonderful job Zac, I hope a publisher picks her up.
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Thanks, Larry. This story, Virginia, and Opey are three of my biggest passions right now. Its got horror, comedy, and a whole crapload of apocalypses. Plus a punk babe at the helm.
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I should take your example, and focus my efforts I am trying to my own take on a Universe with Mae, Mack, X, Earthman, Lolita Lightning, I am spreading myself to thin.
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I think your characters are wonderful, Larry. I enjoy reading your comics a great deal.
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Thanks man, I am glad you do. I hope to have something new up.
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Love the eyes in panel 1. The whole page is great, though.
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Thanks! I personally prefer the middle panel. I've done several versions of this page and this one was the first one where I liked the way Anne's face turned out.
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I realize now the middle panel is your avatar so it stands to reason that is a fav of yours!
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Thank you. 
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Love the highlights on the tears, it's a great touch.
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wooowwwww
Good page
We want read the following
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Thank you so much! I've got four other pages, maybe I'll show those in the near future.
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Much less grotesque than the other incarnation(s). I can handle this one.
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The comic will be quite gruesome at times but it'll have a lot of humor, as well. I guess you might call it a macabredy.
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Very well executed! Really like your style and this 3 panel just draws you in.
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The story is a tad on the dark side.
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