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Sunrisebee [2018-10-25 02:54:14 +0000 UTC]
Hi!! I'm here from the ProjectComment
About the poses, I like the way you can fit the eyes, nose, and mouth in a good position on the face, the proportion of
them. I like the hair color, specifically the red one and the blue one. Maybe you could improve the lines a bit, the first face, for example, the neckline
is a bit harsh and together with the shadow makes it seem really deep... maybe the blending way could be worked out as well...
you did a really good work here, I like the proportions, and the way you draw hair is pretty nice, the chosen colors
to paint the hairs are great. You have a great potential drawing characters!! Keep doing it!!
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Ihaveapassion [2018-09-14 14:01:41 +0000 UTC]
I really like the variety of scull shapes and skin tones you used on this one! I would say that the highlights are the ones that give your characters some variated personality, as well as the make-up you used on the humans. When I look at the portraits and compare them, I feel like the line-art is fantastic, but the color-blending needs more work to be done. That's something I find hard to accomplish for myself too, and that's why I avoid drawing portraits very often because I believe that they don't look as realistic as they should be. Of course, I have no personal experience from digital art (although I really want to have) so I don't know how hart it must be to create something "alive". However, I believe your art in character portrait-creating is fantastic and you should keep up the good work!
(Came here from ProjectComment )
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CoattailsOfJustice In reply to Ihaveapassion [2018-09-15 01:24:28 +0000 UTC]
Thank you~! C:
I get what you mean about the blending. I've been trying to practice getting a more painterly style, where the brushstrokes are visible, but it's hard to hit that happy medium of looking "finished" while still being kind of messy looking.
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Ihaveapassion In reply to CoattailsOfJustice [2018-09-15 06:33:33 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, now I get what you mean I'm trying to do the same thing with watercolors. Still, as I see in your latest work
your blending is really good and you could experiment in it trying to find that "messy-artsy-brushstrokes-style" you're talking about . It's easier when you're working on one of your already finished works to alter it, in order to find new styles, trust me .
Kisses
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silif-art [2018-09-12 09:39:49 +0000 UTC]
Here from ProjectComment ~!
Very nicely depicted. A huge fan of tabletop gaming myself; I've been playing D&D for the last thirteen years or so myself, mostly as a DM but sometimes as a player.
She's half-orc half-elf, which if I recall correctly should be impossible according to the Book of Erotic Fantasy. But fuck you I wanted to make it happen. ouo
This made me snort a little, love it ><
Anyways, lovely names, neat backstories, and a nice variety of facial expressions - they're subtle, but each face portrays a different personality. Your shading and linework is excellent; if I were to give one constructive criticism, it would be working a bit more on the foreshortening for Sabel. You did a really great job with all the others, but the oblique angle on her face seems slightly off on the right (her left) side.
To add one more thing, on the other hand, you did a fantastic job with the blue-haired elf on the middle right - profiles can come across as very flat, but not only did you give it really nice depth, but the typical angular, elven facial structure is very visible.
Great work!!
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CoattailsOfJustice In reply to silif-art [2018-09-13 15:35:18 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! c: This campaign is my first time DMing! I've been playing about ten years now tho, but it's still new and exciting.
Ahh, looking at it again I see what you mean with Sabel. The angle of her face is sort of 3/4 but I made the facial features look a bit too straight-on. oops
Thanks again! I really love trying to practice profiles with that bit of depth there, so I'm glad it turned out well!
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LilyLikesToDraw [2018-09-06 22:43:25 +0000 UTC]
Hey there! Very nice pieces. The line work is very nice and very clean. It really makes the pieces look very structured and purposeful. However, the lines on the neck seem very harsh, almost like cuts. The muscles on the neck are usually not that harsh, and especially not that harsh on most women. I'd work just a bit more on anatomy, even if it's just the neck. Other than that, the faces are very well done and diverse. Very impressive! Keep it up!
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CoattailsOfJustice In reply to LilyLikesToDraw [2018-09-07 15:00:01 +0000 UTC]
Thank you~! c:
ahhh yea that's kind of a thing I tend to do. OTL Usually they're mostly in the sketch stage to get down the movement of the head/neck/body and I soften them at least a bit. (the lines for this are fairly rough which might be why I left them as is) But yea I've noticed I make the tendon there a lot more prominent than it is on most people, sometimes it works okay and sometimes it doesn't, even tho I know it's really unnecessary to do.
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LilyLikesToDraw In reply to CoattailsOfJustice [2018-09-07 23:57:39 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, we've all got or thing that we do that we shouldn't. Just keep up the good work!
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MartaPan99 [2018-09-06 21:36:09 +0000 UTC]
nice!
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CoattailsOfJustice In reply to shadowdroid677 [2018-09-05 19:51:44 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! :D Making different face types can be really hard, I've been trying to put a lot of focus on it for a while now and even sometimes I know I still have characters that look too similar. Looking at lots of different portraits of different people can really help, and just keep practicing~! c:
I see what you mean with her eyes/face. Honestly she didn't come out quite the way I had described/imagined her so I was thinking of redoing that portrait anyway, even tho I do kind of like how it came out. I'll keep your suggestions in mind if/when I do!
Thanks again~! c:
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CoattailsOfJustice In reply to yinyangswings [2018-01-28 21:25:37 +0000 UTC]
:D I know I showed you Hal's mom before already but I hope you still like her since I altered her a little bit.
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CoattailsOfJustice In reply to yinyangswings [2018-01-29 03:48:29 +0000 UTC]
Yaaaaay~ Even tho he prolly won't even ever show up in the campaign you should design Hal's dad~ Since I kinda just went ahead with the mom without asking if you had anything specific you wanted for her I would feel bad if I designed both of them xD You don't actually have to if you don't want to I just think it's neat to see the characters' parents~ ouo
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Nubbybub [2018-01-28 20:09:04 +0000 UTC]
maybe emily is part elf
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CoattailsOfJustice In reply to Nubbybub [2018-01-28 20:22:03 +0000 UTC]
Emily is part elf, Hal is part orc. Next thing we'll be finding out Tor is dragonblooded. This party is crazy.
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Nubbybub In reply to CoattailsOfJustice [2018-01-28 20:24:59 +0000 UTC]
... are we going to find out tor is dragon blooded
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CoattailsOfJustice In reply to Nubbybub [2018-01-28 20:42:01 +0000 UTC]
hmmmmmmmmm. sounds fake. I guess we'll just have to play more to find out.
do you like Hal's mom~? ouo I wanted her to be super pretty.
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Nubbybub In reply to CoattailsOfJustice [2018-01-28 20:43:14 +0000 UTC]
we will have to play more miss DM
and i do like hal's mom do you think she will give emily her blessing
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CoattailsOfJustice In reply to Nubbybub [2018-01-28 20:47:06 +0000 UTC]
we'll all have to be online at the same time in order to do that
who knows maybe she won't even get a chance to ask for it
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Nubbybub In reply to CoattailsOfJustice [2018-01-28 20:49:05 +0000 UTC]
well jess is on right now she just posted a picture
and katy stop blowing holes in my ship
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CoattailsOfJustice In reply to Nubbybub [2018-01-28 20:51:25 +0000 UTC]
but I have to go to work soon and also I dunno know where Emmy is.
I was mostly implying that Hal's mom might be dead already or die before before talking to either of them about who may or may not want to get with her daughter. xD
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Nubbybub In reply to CoattailsOfJustice [2018-01-28 21:00:39 +0000 UTC]
i called out of work today cause i sprained my ankle
and hal's mom cant die not until after her daughters lesbian wedding
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Nubbybub In reply to CoattailsOfJustice [2018-01-28 21:09:51 +0000 UTC]
yeah it sucks
also i promise to not kill hal's mom so long as she dosnt try top stop my OTP
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CoattailsOfJustice In reply to Nubbybub [2018-01-28 21:22:30 +0000 UTC]
well I mean obviously she wouldn't care about it being cross-species or lesbian but now you're just making me want to find her a reason to not want Hal with Emily just to see what happens. xD
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CoattailsOfJustice In reply to Nubbybub [2018-01-28 21:51:28 +0000 UTC]
I mean we don't know either of those things for certain.
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