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Description Failed art test for GamesWorkshop.
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Comments: 12

GaryPahls [2016-02-01 14:58:48 +0000 UTC]

I was just looking at your test entries and other artist who also tested with GW. What I noticed with your pieces compared to some of the others, that their compositions were more dynamic; they had more movement and interest in their images. It looks like you have the skills to render a very beautiful image but I would suggest altering the way you lay out your figures and how you frame the image. I might suggest looking into Donato Ginacola or Patrick J Jones and taking a look at how they set up their images. They are both oil painters, but they do paintings for sci-fi book covers and other media. They both do amazing work and their images are interesting in layout alone.

I really can't wait to see your next attempt

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Mineraleater [2016-01-23 18:12:24 +0000 UTC]

Failed?! Why the heck won't they add your stuff?! They could actually get some money by making some nice Artwork-book or two

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concubot In reply to Mineraleater [2016-01-25 01:09:53 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Beta-is-my-Name [2016-01-19 23:02:27 +0000 UTC]

To Add to Lost-on-60

Ork Head, Ork body, overall sense of composition, skin, visual clarity and something very very unforgiving error: wind direction is not (believable) coherent (topknot compare to purity seals)

But Your Art is good, especially other works in your gallery, you are 21, just google the 10.000 hours rule , you have potential as digital artist, but you have still some way to go to be a professional, so just continue your path, mastery is already in sight.

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concubot In reply to Beta-is-my-Name [2016-01-20 02:00:40 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the detailed critique dude.

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Skrumpgoblin In reply to Beta-is-my-Name [2016-01-19 23:06:49 +0000 UTC]

The "wind direction" could just as well be from movement, don't you think?

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Beta-is-my-Name In reply to Skrumpgoblin [2016-01-20 00:12:52 +0000 UTC]

could be (subjective for me It feels off, objective we need the evaluation of a professional), but this blends in the composition part I also mentioned.

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alithking [2016-01-19 17:03:55 +0000 UTC]

Awesome art work and great details dude, congratulations!

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concubot In reply to alithking [2016-01-20 01:29:40 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Lost-One-60 [2016-01-19 13:28:30 +0000 UTC]

Looks pretty solid. 
Only issue being the orks head.

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concubot In reply to Lost-One-60 [2016-01-20 01:29:27 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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Lost-One-60 In reply to concubot [2016-01-20 01:45:01 +0000 UTC]

That head though.
So goofy looking. In a good way.

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