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shinragod [2016-12-04 22:11:13 +0000 UTC]
You're right! To capture the look of despair and hopelessness as they fall isn't easy in the slightest. But you did well here on the look of sudden terror as Ice falls to her doom...so we think.
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ConnorDavidson In reply to shinragod [2016-12-04 23:23:32 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, the look of fear is tough, but I was more specifically referring to the motion of a body falling. Intentional imbalance is difficult - for me, at least - because we are so much more often trying to draw balanced and stable figures.
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YotsujiK [2016-11-21 14:28:30 +0000 UTC]
Oh, that's how you allowed your story to unfold!
Some mean people might say that this is convenient for the plot, but I think it's very dramatic and thoughtful.
Well done!
Now I know Sly is still holding on to Drake, otherwise, he would have gone to save her.
I wonder how Drake and Sly are feeling.
Of course, I did not notice the accident of Ice's hair until you pointed that out.
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Baghira27 [2016-11-19 08:59:02 +0000 UTC]
I think Ned will catch her with his Robot-Arm-Gloves-Thing ^^
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awesomefox02 [2016-11-18 23:38:13 +0000 UTC]
Oh dearπ£. Ice is going to die π£!
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Nightmate1997 [2016-11-18 23:00:18 +0000 UTC]
It'll be funny if Sly say "BYE!"
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moriak14 [2016-11-18 17:01:04 +0000 UTC]
She could jump out of a chopper and she's making drama when falling? She'll be fine. She's probably playing with "sentimental" Cooper's Β feelengs planning to pull him down too. Drake's hands are sweating and Sly can be easily fooled thanks to the thing she got in the eye, so what could go wrong? How much does she want to kill them? :-D
Surprise me, Ice!!!
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MSudmeijer1990 [2016-11-18 15:58:35 +0000 UTC]
To be honest, I kind of saw that coming, though to be honest, I thought it would be on the previous page and personally I find it much better that you didn't put this on the last page; it makes the whole thing seem much more realistic. Though to be honest, if I have to chose between Drake and Ice - sorry, but the choice is easy to make and I won't be picking my own gender, I can tell you that much.Β
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Beef--Wellington [2016-11-18 15:43:42 +0000 UTC]
Ice or Drake? Heads or tails?
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Malefic-Malafor In reply to Beef--Wellington [2016-11-19 02:08:13 +0000 UTC]
Drake. Drake all the way. Really, I cannot state enough how much I do not want Drake to die...
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ConfusaRainstorm [2016-11-18 15:13:58 +0000 UTC]
Wrong text, Sly ! what you wanted to say was this :
BYE! ~ Β
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Cambion-Hunter [2016-11-18 14:02:37 +0000 UTC]
That was unexpected........
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gizmo01 [2016-11-18 11:21:28 +0000 UTC]
Fate made there decitions once again.
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Toaofnight [2016-11-18 11:15:15 +0000 UTC]
I can't believe that I'm telling this, but... Catch her, Sly!
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Perithefox10 [2016-11-18 09:37:59 +0000 UTC]
she gonna die!
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CaTwdaesd [2016-11-18 08:08:49 +0000 UTC]
If she hits the ground I'm going to do a horrible pun
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CaTwdaesd In reply to GeneralsAlert [2016-11-18 21:00:25 +0000 UTC]
Β No but that's a good one know what i'm going to do it Β you might say she got shattered to Β pieces yyyyyyeeeeeeyyyyy yes I know that was a horrible oneΒ
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WielderOfBlueFlames In reply to EmilieSushi [2016-11-18 09:26:06 +0000 UTC]
Sheesh no kidding! Even I wasn't expecting something THIS dramatic or shocking!
Also I am REALLY seeing similarities from Elsa's death in the last crusade here! Call me crazy, but it pretty much sums up what happened here!
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Backjack-Kitsune [2016-11-18 07:24:44 +0000 UTC]
well sly here comes the choice your brother from another mother or a victim of circumstanceΒ choose wisely
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ndedwards224 [2016-11-18 07:24:24 +0000 UTC]
well that's anticlimactic. or is it?
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