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CraftyMaelyss — Please Don't Leave Me (Spyro Creepypasta)

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Published: 2014-08-04 12:29:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 7142; Favourites: 71; Downloads: 0
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Hello random stranger reading this! If you've never read this before, then don't stress, this is more-so for readers who may be returning to this story.


This has been a long-time planned, but PDLM (Please Don't Leave Me) is getting a rewrite, so you'll notice that in every space this story exists, it will be edited to announce the rewrite with the old story being removed.


I know a lot of people like this story and while I'm still pretty happy with my first creepypasta, I know I can do better, so it's because of that that I want to write it properly and see how far my writing has come compared to the OG tale (or tail if you're into puns)


If you happen to have a copy of the original story, please don't repost it. I want to properly give PDLM a solid start without ties to the original. There may be some nods for old fans but this is how PDLM should have always been written and the same goes with the movie.


Since posting the update on other websites, I've been asked a lot of questions in private, so I'll answer them as best as I can:


-Will this version get a movie too?

Honestly I have no idea. I'm balancing a lot of projects and personal things right now (including game development) so I don't know. Especially since the OG VAs are off doing better things and I don't know if they'd be up for rehashing their lines or not after so many years.


-Why now?

I was going through some of my old stories I wrote forever ago and came across this one. What's important to remember is that the OG PDLM was my very first attempt at writing a creepypasta and while I'm happy with what my younger self done, I still find myself cringing at it now and I sincerely want to give it another go. 


-Why not write a sequel?

Because I sincerely want to rewrite this and do a better job. There was a lot of issues with the original, especially the classic "..." problem. I love writing, so I want to see how much I've improved, as well as change some major points of the story. Because I know I can do better, I want to do better.


-So when will the PDLM rewrite come out?

No idea. I don't even know if anyone remembers the story after so many years but after seeing it reposted on other websites, I wanted to post this update in case anyone goes looking for the story before the new version is ready.


This also means that the iconic image I created that everyone uses for any creepy Spyro stories will also change. I won't outright delete it, since people still love using it but I will be drawing a new design for PDLM Spyro.


The story may or may not be renamed as well, depending on the new plotline and characters added.


-I messaged you X time ago, why haven't you responded?

Because I mainly use discord for work and don't check certain websites like I used to, so it's a case of not being as active on certain websites as I was when I write this story 10 years ago.


When the rewrite is ready, I will post an announcement chapter, then remove this notices. So for those reading/following, you'll see a chapter update along with new cover art. I will leave the old art on the DeviantArt page but everywhere else will use Spyro's new design.

I sincerely hope you all look forward to the new PDLM Spyro and here's hoping that you enjoy it more than the original!

~CraftyMaelyss


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Comments: 152

CraftyMaelyss In reply to ??? [2019-10-12 10:48:00 +0000 UTC]

The emotional connection we have with our heroes from
childhood is something I wanted to use to really drive
home what it was like to lose everything and then turn
into something you once tried to stand against, driven
by fear and loneliness. 

I am working on a rewrite of the story, as I want to create
something even better with more fleshed out characters
and try to add something a bit different to this creepypasta,
as well as do artwork for Spyro.

I want to give all of you a creepypasta that can deliver the
story that I feel each and every one of you deserve, to give
something satisfying you can really sink your teeth into

And thank you so much for this, I didn't realise there was
young readers who read my story

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SpectralSupremist [2019-09-25 05:10:21 +0000 UTC]

I randomly discovered this and am interested in more of a prolonged story about this.

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CraftyMaelyss In reply to SpectralSupremist [2019-09-25 13:56:48 +0000 UTC]

I'm hoping to write something that actually suits the theme that I'm going for

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SpectralSupremist In reply to CraftyMaelyss [2019-09-26 02:49:19 +0000 UTC]

(In my personal taste) I can see this story as being like a quick 'These are the events that happened' As it's written like its already happened. Being that it's an audio recording of Hannah describing the events. A full-on story could have much larger effects on the lives around this established setting and you can easily crank the horror, despair and sorrow facts up.

But after reading and listening (took me some time to find the video and this page) I'd say a good solid 8/10. As there can definitely be more built on this foundation.

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NintendoFan57 [2018-11-27 21:12:03 +0000 UTC]

 

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CraftyMaelyss In reply to NintendoFan57 [2018-11-29 01:52:54 +0000 UTC]

XD

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cynderules101 [2018-09-18 04:21:40 +0000 UTC]

It’s super duper creepy nice work 

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CraftyMaelyss In reply to cynderules101 [2018-09-18 14:11:21 +0000 UTC]

Cheers

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cynderules101 In reply to CraftyMaelyss [2018-09-18 22:58:35 +0000 UTC]

No problem 

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PSInfinite [2018-04-13 15:21:49 +0000 UTC]

Damn, pretty great creepypasta here. Almost makes you paranoid if video game characters are always watching...

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CraftyMaelyss In reply to PSInfinite [2018-04-28 00:40:46 +0000 UTC]

Aww thank you It's an old one and a first attempt but I aim
to make my nest one even more intense

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PSInfinite In reply to CraftyMaelyss [2018-04-28 00:41:46 +0000 UTC]

Well you put a lot of effort into it, and I love it.

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smartboy018 [2017-06-26 00:37:37 +0000 UTC]

Same with Cinder and Sparks the Dragonfly
RIP:Cinder
PS2 - Skylanders: Spyros adventure
RIP:Sparks
PS1-Skylanders:Spyros adventure

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smartboy018 [2017-06-26 00:35:07 +0000 UTC]

RIP
SPYRO
PS1 - Skylanders:Spyros adventure
Same will happen to Crash Bandicoot he's a imaginator skylander and a new game for crash is coming out mainly a reboot...Spyro been dead ever since Skylanders started...

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marinostyle In reply to smartboy018 [2019-02-17 23:09:24 +0000 UTC]

Good! 😀👍

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CraftyMaelyss In reply to smartboy018 [2017-06-26 04:11:13 +0000 UTC]

Honestly I don't consider Skylanders a Spyro game, more
of a guest-star spin off but the first game was ok P:

And who knows? Maybe Crash may experience his own....
situation....

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ultimateben1000 In reply to CraftyMaelyss [2017-07-19 06:49:27 +0000 UTC]

That's not scary at all

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CraftyMaelyss In reply to ultimateben1000 [2017-07-19 12:06:24 +0000 UTC]

You're pretty new around here aren't you?

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ultimateben1000 In reply to CraftyMaelyss [2017-07-20 19:49:47 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I am kind of not feeling jumpscared well that picture isn't scary show me something scary like that Loud house style like Lynn Loud or Leni Loud with that Red mist make me scared buddy looking forward

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CraftyMaelyss In reply to ultimateben1000 [2017-07-21 11:20:41 +0000 UTC]

Well that again would be scary. Creepy is a step down from
scary but I can certainly try drawing something scary next
time I have free time

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ultimateben1000 In reply to CraftyMaelyss [2017-07-21 14:56:50 +0000 UTC]

Oh your arts are incredible buddy keep up the good work I support you man

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ultimateben1000 In reply to CraftyMaelyss [2017-07-21 14:56:30 +0000 UTC]

I am ready for scary things right now show me the True horror version Of Lynn Loud

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ultimateben1000 In reply to CraftyMaelyss [2017-07-21 14:55:58 +0000 UTC]

Okay show me prove it A Red Mist Lynn Loud from The Loud House with real red eyes or something Athletic Girl Pinned you on the floor so it's like first person view looking at Lynn Loud staring at you with an evil smile Saying I I'll trained you to death

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CraftyMaelyss In reply to ultimateben1000 [2017-07-22 09:09:09 +0000 UTC]

Uh I don't know those characters or what show/movie/game they're
from, I just meant I would draw my own horror, since I haven't done
so in years

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ultimateben1000 In reply to CraftyMaelyss [2017-07-22 11:45:52 +0000 UTC]

It's from a Cartoon series by Nickelodeon call the Loud House a Story about a boy living with 10 sisters

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smartboy018 In reply to CraftyMaelyss [2017-06-26 14:31:57 +0000 UTC]

Nope guest star along with his arch nemesis

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Fuzzinator23 [2016-07-11 04:16:42 +0000 UTC]

If...if Hunter died, then why did the shell of him do it? Also, if this was ever true, I had Spyro a new beginning, loved it, and now I can't find it after several years, this scared me so much that I might want to find it

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CraftyMaelyss In reply to Fuzzinator23 [2016-07-13 01:06:21 +0000 UTC]

I guess we'll have to find out in the sequel And don't panic
about it, as long as you love playing the game, you're safe

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Fuzzinator23 In reply to CraftyMaelyss [2016-07-13 01:19:08 +0000 UTC]

I do, and I'm scared since I don't know where it is, I loved that game

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CraftyMaelyss In reply to Fuzzinator23 [2016-07-13 01:27:25 +0000 UTC]

Don't worry, it'll pop up sooner or later P:

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Fuzzinator23 In reply to CraftyMaelyss [2016-07-13 01:33:25 +0000 UTC]

I guess

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SnuggleFactory [2016-01-21 02:56:44 +0000 UTC]

Very creepy story, though I'd say you've used ellipses where commas should have been used. Some websites don't accept written pieces if the grammar isn't perfect. That's the only reason I can think why it would have been rejected.

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CraftyMaelyss In reply to SnuggleFactory [2016-01-21 03:10:29 +0000 UTC]

Eh maybe but there's always next time I think I may rewrite the
story at some stage but it's been up for quite some time P: Though
that would definitely be an issue that needs correcting, thank you

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sockerboy129 [2015-12-23 21:37:54 +0000 UTC]

Why does this remind me of .exe

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CraftyMaelyss In reply to sockerboy129 [2015-12-24 11:17:17 +0000 UTC]

There's a lot of .exe creepypastas people have written,
so what you've said is a bit vague P: Though I do have plans
to write another, it's just taking longer to write something
decent P:

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sockerboy129 In reply to CraftyMaelyss [2015-12-24 15:56:42 +0000 UTC]

Just the pic reminds me of various .exe pastas including the awful sonic.exe game... But no .exe game is worse than smile.exe

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CraftyMaelyss In reply to sockerboy129 [2015-12-24 23:23:57 +0000 UTC]

smile...smile....was that the mlp one?

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sockerboy129 In reply to CraftyMaelyss [2015-12-24 23:53:04 +0000 UTC]

yes. Where pinkie killed everyone EVEN CELSTIA

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CraftyMaelyss In reply to sockerboy129 [2015-12-25 00:25:16 +0000 UTC]

OMG D:

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sockerboy129 In reply to CraftyMaelyss [2015-12-25 01:14:58 +0000 UTC]

ever seen it?

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CraftyMaelyss In reply to sockerboy129 [2015-12-25 06:34:12 +0000 UTC]

I think I've heard of it but I'll try watching it P:
Is it like a movie or a game? I've seen the "Luna" ones
and they were games P:

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sockerboy129 In reply to CraftyMaelyss [2015-12-25 18:11:57 +0000 UTC]

smile.exe is a game

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CraftyMaelyss In reply to sockerboy129 [2015-12-25 23:39:18 +0000 UTC]

Okay I'll check it out

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sockerboy129 In reply to CraftyMaelyss [2015-12-26 00:53:24 +0000 UTC]

alrughty

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purpIe-p-u-t-z [2015-06-11 01:35:47 +0000 UTC]

"I don't want to be left behind..."

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CraftyMaelyss In reply to purpIe-p-u-t-z [2015-06-11 02:06:11 +0000 UTC]

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Alexthewolf123 [2015-06-02 07:54:11 +0000 UTC]

don't get me wrong I love this Creepypasta hands down no doubt..but there's something that's confusing me...didn't Spyro know that Hannah asked John to take the games and the console? I mean..it looks to me like Spyro thought John just wanted to take them. like I said the story is great but When you think about it..a whole lot of bullshit to be mad about couldve been resolved if someone was like "Dude..I Asked him to take the games." you know?

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CraftyMaelyss In reply to Alexthewolf123 [2015-06-02 11:06:02 +0000 UTC]

He knew about it but didn't think she was serious but once he
realised she was, he lost it and couldn't think properly until he
saw her fear, that brought him back to his senses.

Being in a world by yourself with only one friend for so many 
years will break anyone's sanity, no matter who you are, the
same happened to Spyro.

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Alexthewolf123 In reply to CraftyMaelyss [2015-06-02 11:34:49 +0000 UTC]

is Spyro doing okay now a days? I hope so.

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CraftyMaelyss In reply to Alexthewolf123 [2015-06-02 14:39:03 +0000 UTC]

We won't know....unless there's a sequel...(I'm not saying anything)

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