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cutofakiss — you began to push me down.
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Resubmission changed softness and a little of the hue.you began to push me down.
you lifted me back up.
you made tears fall down
but you wiped them off my face.
and im sorry for not doing whats right.
but dont let go of my hand.
please my love, dont push me away.
Words written by me.
© cutofakiss
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What did you search in google to find it?
I just wish that next time you ask before you use an image, but you may keep it up. thank you for crediting me.
- Lauren
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This is probably going to sound quite odd, but every so often while I was reading your work I had to take small brakes just to compose myself from the powerful yet very emotional feelings that not only come from reading the text but also from the images that get conjured up in your mind. After I read your work I found myself unable to hold a plausible thought as to what I was going to comment (though I never comment on prose because I’m not to good at it, I just knew this was going to have to be exception) (I’m still having trouble with writing my comment as for the words I’m using) also strangely enough feeling a sort of connection to the piece, though my family has never really been involved in drug of any sort.
Now I could use lots of fancy word to try and describe to you how this piece has touched and affected me but truth be told I am at a loss for words, there are no words in the English dictionary that can describe how I feel.
In spite of this, what I am going to try and say is;
To put it straight forward; the way you have used your abilities for writing to construct the wording of your piece as to capture the readers attention and draw them in to experience the great intensity of the feelings and emotions and then walk away holding somewhat of the same opinions yet having different feelings and being able to relate to your work differently, in my opinion is very unusually rare and is defiantly something to be proud of.
From reading this piece and experiencing troubles myself I can defiantly understand that it would have taken a tremendous amount courage and strength to write let alone thing about this piece – I am finding it very hard just to cope with life, I applaud you I think it has taken strength beyond measure to write such intense happenings.
Though in my life I have never taken drugs and have a firm policy of never taking the in the present or the future, this piece has certainly opened my eyes (even more) to the horrors of drug and alcohol taking, it has defiantly increased my awareness of drugs and ideals to never do drugs.
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it`s okay. I understand.
sometimes I accidently write under the wrong thing.
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Oh, thankyou so much, I still feel terrible for ruining your comments though (ugh I’m still doing it by writing another thing 
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haham it`s okay. you didn`t ruin my comments.
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READ THIS BEFORE THE OTHER COMMENT
oh shit lol, sorry forget that comment i had writewn it in word and had meant to paste it somewhere else
sorry agiain for wasting your time and spoiling your comments on the picture, i feel like such a fool
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This will probably sound weird but for awhile there after looking at your creation and absorbing the emotions and feelings from within the piece, I actually became speechless and found my self not being able to write anything legible.
Now I’m not going to say that you are beautiful, that your piece has a sad connotation etc… I am not going to say this because by looking at your piece it has become evident that you will have already received those comments (lol, reading back on what I wrote, I just said it - just in more of a veiled way).
In spite of this, what I am going to say is;
What I find breath taking about your creation is the way you have used your abilities as a photographer to capture such intense emotions and feelings and portray them in such a way as to draw the viewer in and speak to the person in a way that is different for each viewer.
Now by no means am I a photographer, so unfortunately I am not able to give you any technical constructive criticism, however I am a traditional artist and I mainly work with black and white (even if I’m just starting out) so I will try to comment on the tones.
I think the colours you have chosen for this piece are done very well; What I find to be absolutely stunning within your piece is your choice of using the darker and lighter tones to complement each other in a way that creates the certain feelings of despair and unhappiness etc… while yet still keeping a sense of beauty to the woman. The thought to create a colour opposite (forgot the word) effect on either side of the page I think has added to not only what I said earlier on but also to something of an effect of creating a broader range of feelings outside just depression, sadness etc…
The piece in itself I think has a very nice composition about it; I think the choice of having your head taking up slightly more then the top half while still having a small part of it cut of has been very effective as has your head leaning against the wall on the left side of the picture.
On more of a personal note, though your picture is of high standard and an excellent creation, when looking at your creations I cant help but feeling tremendously sad etc… (All the things that go with a severe depression and anxiety), I think these feelings and emotions are coming about because your creations remind me of the problems and certain events from both the past and the present.
Please do not take offence to anything I have said it is meant to be constructive – or as constructive as I could make it – I’m afraid I’m not a photographer and I am absolutely unaware of how to do a constructive comment.
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Wow, I REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY appreciate the long drawn out comment.
Thank you.
As for you feeling sad when looking at my pieces...I usually do not speak of my problems, I put them into my photography work. Not only do I want people to see the picture or see the emotions, but I try to get people to FEEL them and UNDERSTAND through my pictures.
Thank you again.
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This is so sad, the emotion seems more than the image itself but being portrayed through the image, of course the image is neccissary.
The blue tones and angle and I believe, most importantly the expression all contribute to the sad feeling, which I gather is the main idea of this photo.
One thing that I might have done is darken the wall on the left, as it is a tad too distracting as it's brighter than the rest of the photo as the flash illuminated the wall a lot.
Hope you're alright.
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thank you for the long comment. I really appreciate it.
i have no clue how to darken the wall, the burn too sucks.
Thanks.
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Maybe use a black brush in PS and put the opacity to 40% or so.
I will keep giving thoughtful comments as long as you keep submitting photography I can comment on.
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I like the emotion in this, its shows through well.. Nice work -Kia Lola
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This photo is very sad,even knowing that is not way you use to fell.It was gave from "deviation" today,very beautiful.But i like more the happy ones. (it's just me)
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I mean since i am a deviant watch yours,apears in my deviation post (if someone that i watch post a dceviation in that day).Sorry,i know my english is poor.
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Thank you.
What did you mean when you said It was gave from "deviation" today
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very strong message in both the lyrics and the photo, i like the colors and the lighting. very good.
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Ira(admin/group1)
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wow. of those of your photographs i've seen, i think this one holds the most emotion and meaning.... gorgeous.
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your subjects doesn't are too different each other.. the color is often toward blue..
but your pic are always very emotional...
really..
your face express very well that kind of melancholy...
pardon for my bad english
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Thank you very much.
and your english was not bad.
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Wow, you look so sad... *hug* You might be acting but I hug you anyway! You are gorgeuos too!
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it loks like you've just been crying. how sad. this made me feeel upset. lovely words.
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Nice poem, and the picture is really kewl, you look pretty even when your sad!
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Very saddening to look at, and the words add a lot of emotion to the image. Beautiful
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a great expression and very impressive words
perfect work
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you looks really sad in this one...
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oh, it's not your fault, it's his fault, the one's who beat you up 
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you're really getting into these tint thingys aren't you?
Good job, hun. Its beautiful. So are you.
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haha, yeah, i found that color shows a mood better, and some pictures just don`t look right in their normal color.
Also, my camera has been taking really dark looking pictures, and in order to make them look okay, i have to add color.
thanks alot hun.
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the title says it all
and by the way youre gorgeous
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