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Published: 2012-07-30 06:27:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 2074; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 0
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Description my faults.fault lines.
writing down my fault lines in notebook paper cuts.
blood tastes like iron and salt. a penny. in my mouth.
we get in fights. i pushed you and you pushed me
and you hide and write words in your journal that i can't see

so i'm drawing out a plan to make myself a better person. to suit you
but even though i can't, i still split apart paper skin to make me new again and again and again
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noxious-melancholy [2012-08-04 00:29:32 +0000 UTC]

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WeAreSevenStudios [2012-07-31 00:55:14 +0000 UTC]

Supposedly, every seven years every cell in our body has been replaced. We're constantly becoming new people at the most fundamental level. That's hopeful to me, somehow.

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TastesLikeInsanity [2012-07-30 23:38:05 +0000 UTC]

we can never be perfect no matter how hard we try people will always find faults in us because it is just human nature.
stop trying to please others please yourself, find happiness for yourself because at the end of the day thats all that truly matters. other will call you selfish and you will feel guilt at times but if can find happiness and learn to love yourself i promise everything else will fall into place

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4mmoh [2012-07-30 17:28:04 +0000 UTC]

I don't know what to say since it's a bit confusing for me,
but I find you to be a good person just the way you are.
Whatever happens, sometimes it's nice and do what you want.
One things for sure, you have a amazing way of describing stuff.

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rioIu [2012-07-30 17:19:57 +0000 UTC]

Very poetic ... though I regret to say I don't understand.

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apricotmarmalade [2012-07-30 17:16:05 +0000 UTC]

Like a caterpillar in a cocoon.. I do the same thing.
But it makes me feel like poison. So I hide the fault lines, my fault lines, underneath lies of silk and smiles.

I hope you're alright Casey. I hope you're okay. Like storms pass, I hope this too will pass for you.

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axalendra [2012-07-30 14:02:38 +0000 UTC]

Am I interpreting this wrong or are you cutting yourself?

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ilyilaice [2012-07-30 11:13:47 +0000 UTC]

it sounds like a song.

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