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DanielDGriffithsI wanted to grow old with you
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Description I wanted to grow old with you:
turn grey and fade away, subdued.
To walk with you through all the years
and face, as one, our darkest fears.
We'd burn too brightly for this Earth
and share in sorrow and in mirth;
to each the other's soul would bare
and twice the love, at once, declare.
For each would know the other's mind
and there a perfect solace find;
we would be two, though as one known –
discrete though merged & mingled grown.
I wanted to grow old, it's true:
turn grey and fade to dust with you.
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Comments: 98

tommyboywood [2015-01-25 15:41:53 +0000 UTC]

wonderful and romantic

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artbyfieldsofsage [2014-03-24 04:32:18 +0000 UTC]

I want to upload some of my writings/poems.  Can't figure it out.  What format do I need to save my poems in?  I don't mean to trouble you but I could use some help if you have the time.  I wish DA had a HELP menu!

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DanielDGriffiths In reply to artbyfieldsofsage [2014-03-24 20:57:44 +0000 UTC]

I'm not sure how much I can help!  I choose 'Submit' > 'Submit Art', click on 'Enter text' and then type or paste my writing in - I've never tried uploading my files.

There are probably instructions somewhere here: help.deviantart.com/ but I can't find them at the moment!

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artbyfieldsofsage In reply to DanielDGriffiths [2014-03-25 15:09:26 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Daniel.  This really does help.

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artbyfieldsofsage [2014-03-20 16:31:43 +0000 UTC]

This poem touches home for me.   And I wonder what grief urged these words from the depths of your soul.  But I will never ask.  

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DanielDGriffiths In reply to artbyfieldsofsage [2014-03-21 22:19:06 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for reading - it's much appreciated! 

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InklingsOfOblivion [2014-03-04 12:33:18 +0000 UTC]

This is wonderful. 

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DanielDGriffiths In reply to InklingsOfOblivion [2014-03-04 21:24:41 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! 

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DailyLitDeviations [2014-03-04 05:24:54 +0000 UTC]

Your wonderful literary work has been chosen to be featured by DailyLitDeviations in a news article that can be found here: dailylitdeviations.deviantart.… Congratulations on your DD!

Be sure to check out the other artists featured and show your support by ing the News Article. Keep writing and keep creating.

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DanielDGriffiths In reply to DailyLitDeviations [2014-03-04 21:18:54 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the support!

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quixoticus [2014-02-14 23:43:06 +0000 UTC]

awesome! I just sent this to my sweetheart - thank you  

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DanielDGriffiths In reply to quixoticus [2014-02-17 23:03:54 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!  Glad you liked it! 

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wulleman7 [2014-02-10 22:18:43 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful, inspirational. Great piece

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DanielDGriffiths In reply to wulleman7 [2014-02-12 21:19:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!  I'm glad you liked it!

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thyneunholy1 [2014-02-10 07:45:02 +0000 UTC]

Amazing.

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DanielDGriffiths In reply to thyneunholy1 [2014-02-12 21:18:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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WordyDirdBird [2014-02-10 02:49:41 +0000 UTC]

Holy crap, this is absolutely beautiful. And it's very sad that I can relate this to my ex, but it's true. Very well done.

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DanielDGriffiths In reply to WordyDirdBird [2014-02-12 21:18:39 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for reading and commenting! 

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WordyDirdBird In reply to DanielDGriffiths [2014-02-12 21:45:04 +0000 UTC]

You are very welcome

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JormungandrsDaughter In reply to WordyDirdBird [2014-02-17 02:05:43 +0000 UTC]

Men are easy to read and figure out, we are too smart and think too much over complicating things, you can get him back if you really have feelings for him and without groveling or showing weakness, let him see you for who you really are, and not how you want to be seen, he will come back and love you for you if he is honest  

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WordyDirdBird In reply to JormungandrsDaughter [2014-02-17 02:26:09 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the advice, dear, but I am afraid that he was not as honest as I thought he was... But it will be okay, and thank you again, it was very sweet of you <3

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JormungandrsDaughter In reply to WordyDirdBird [2014-02-18 06:02:45 +0000 UTC]

He's not worth the time then, you can do way better  

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WordyDirdBird In reply to JormungandrsDaughter [2014-02-18 13:48:08 +0000 UTC]

Indeed...

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TruthisTruth [2014-02-09 21:05:03 +0000 UTC]

Congratulations on the Daily Deviation!

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DanielDGriffiths In reply to TruthisTruth [2014-02-12 21:17:47 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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TruthisTruth In reply to DanielDGriffiths [2014-02-13 16:34:48 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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squibblyquill [2014-02-09 17:57:47 +0000 UTC]

very lovely

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DanielDGriffiths In reply to squibblyquill [2014-02-12 21:17:36 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! 

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squibblyquill In reply to DanielDGriffiths [2014-02-12 21:22:29 +0000 UTC]

welcome

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Queen-of-Butterflies [2014-02-09 06:08:26 +0000 UTC]

this is very beautiful, especially at the end

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DanielDGriffiths In reply to Queen-of-Butterflies [2014-02-12 21:17:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!  I'm glad you liked it! 

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Pookabearpie [2014-02-09 03:13:29 +0000 UTC]

If I said I was near tears, I would be lying, but it defiantly is a beautiful piece of work. The rhythm and words give such meaning, and I was moved dearly by this poem. Wonderful work, keep it up! And Congrats on the DD. ;D

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DanielDGriffiths In reply to Pookabearpie [2014-02-12 21:17:01 +0000 UTC]

Thanks - I'm glad it moved you!

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Pookabearpie In reply to DanielDGriffiths [2014-02-13 06:31:25 +0000 UTC]

                                                  

It was just so touching! I couldn't /not/ love it!!





                 

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AyZeee [2014-02-09 01:21:08 +0000 UTC]

//applaud

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DanielDGriffiths In reply to AyZeee [2014-02-12 21:15:58 +0000 UTC]

*takes a bow*

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AyZeee In reply to DanielDGriffiths [2014-02-13 03:29:23 +0000 UTC]

**kisses feet**

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SuperSarcosmic [2014-02-08 21:11:10 +0000 UTC]

That past tense makes me sad. Beautiful work.
Congrats on the DD, and have a nice day~

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DanielDGriffiths In reply to SuperSarcosmic [2014-02-12 21:15:49 +0000 UTC]

Thanks - I'm glad you liked it!

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Amenarae [2014-02-08 20:57:13 +0000 UTC]

This is such a heartfelt piece! Wonderful, beautiful, stunning work! Sadness and hope mixed in one poem!

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DanielDGriffiths In reply to Amenarae [2014-02-12 21:07:49 +0000 UTC]

Thank you - I'm glad you found something in there for you!

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Pookabearpie In reply to Amenarae [2014-02-09 03:15:38 +0000 UTC]

It really is amazing. It made me feel sad, yet a twinkle of hope shone brightly throughout this poem. That's what poems do though, they make you feel like you've never felt before. Truly beautiful! :'D

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Idrilian [2014-02-08 20:19:38 +0000 UTC]

This is so beautiful. And yet sad. "I wanted" implies that it's in the past. It might be some of the best poems I've read in a while. (It doesn't hurt that it completely reminded me of Amy and Rory from Doctor Who.) Congratulations!

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DanielDGriffiths In reply to Idrilian [2014-02-12 21:07:04 +0000 UTC]

You're far too kind - thank you!

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I-am-His-artist [2014-02-08 20:17:04 +0000 UTC]

Wow! Beautifully written! Moving

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DanielDGriffiths In reply to I-am-His-artist [2014-02-12 21:06:27 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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I-am-His-artist In reply to DanielDGriffiths [2014-02-12 21:35:45 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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KittyClawss [2014-02-08 19:56:11 +0000 UTC]

  I love it   

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DanielDGriffiths In reply to KittyClawss [2014-02-12 21:05:19 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad!

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KittyClawss In reply to DanielDGriffiths [2014-02-13 01:03:02 +0000 UTC]

^~^ good job btw c;

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