Comments: 38
AlexRaccoonGlider [2014-03-05 00:16:53 +0000 UTC]
Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
Here we go, I think I could safely say that this deserves a little critique here, only because I had a good long laugh in this page =3
Vision) Since this is part of the art jam, you clearly understood the rules and you added your special rag-tag cast of chars here for a round of humor and attempts to destroy this pesky castle! The colors and details are bright, colorful, and easy to follow and easy on the eyes! I give this all 5 stars.
Originality) Since this jam allows you to unleash your creativity, you definitely show that in the world of Danbuster and company, each character has their unique way of destroying (or trying to) destroy an unwanted building, even if it has a mind of it's own here, Marquila with the lightning, Einspine with the steam machine, and the others that came before it, gave it their best but bad luck and misfortune befell the group.
Technique) Im giving it 4 stars, like i said in the vision, the use of flash and pre-rendered characters helps create a bright and colorful world as each character unleashes their own powers and abilities to try to destroy the castle before then, I have to give props to Einspine's little steam gizmo here, its probably the most unique machine ive seen in your world!
Overall Impact) A perfect 5 out of 5 stars! This is how I envisioned how you're able to do an art jam of this magnitude and you nailed it nicely! I look foreword to more wonderful works from your talents, Danbuster!
Congratulations =3
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AlexRaccoonGlider In reply to DCLeadboot [2014-03-05 00:37:04 +0000 UTC]
So far you're on the right track =3 I do apologize for not commenting on the previous pages ^^() But you know me dude, they all look flat out awesome =3
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Boodabear5 [2016-08-08 04:00:25 +0000 UTC]
Hmmm...riiiiiiiings.
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RTJDudek [2014-03-31 19:05:41 +0000 UTC]
Wonder if Einspine is related to Sonic the Hedgehog, since he's loosing golden rings when hurt.
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KosmoKOYOTE [2014-03-06 23:32:20 +0000 UTC]
Nikola Tesla would have loved the first part
of the comic!I would like to see if the castle will
play a game of tennis with me in the future.
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KosmoKOYOTE In reply to DCLeadboot [2014-03-08 06:09:35 +0000 UTC]
You're well come!
Oh yes!Tesla would have loved Einspine's steampunk devices!
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BaconBaka [2014-03-05 00:10:04 +0000 UTC]
Nice as usual...
Xylia: -Walks into the field- Okay, I'll bite. What you totally call me to come here for, Einspine?
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BaconBaka In reply to DCLeadboot [2014-03-05 18:09:15 +0000 UTC]
Xylia: Are you totally okay, Einspine?
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DCLeadboot In reply to BaconBaka [2014-03-05 18:14:55 +0000 UTC]
Einspine: A little injured from the fall, but I'll be all right... *getting a sling for his arm*
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BaconBaka In reply to DCLeadboot [2014-03-05 18:18:38 +0000 UTC]
Xylia: So... You're SOOOOO trying to destroy this castle, huh? I think I totally seen it before.
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BaconBaka In reply to DCLeadboot [2014-03-05 18:40:02 +0000 UTC]
Xylia: It's SOOOOO in one of those classic games I totally enjoy playing... Think if I kick out the owner, the castle will totally be easier to be destroyed?
(I would, but I can only do one strip at a time.)
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