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DeltaSceptile In reply to cda95 [2015-07-25 18:21:38 +0000 UTC]

The focus wouldn't be on "energybending". It has a completely different central theme. Book Six would definitely go into some more details about the lion-turtles and the origins of bending, but it wouldn't take up the entire season. My focus would be more on the meanings and differences of light and darkness, good and evil, yin and yang, knowing true friends from foes, spirits and humans, etc. That is why my next season (should I ever do it) would be called, "Book Six: Light and Darkness".

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DeltaSceptile In reply to cda95 [2015-07-25 04:18:28 +0000 UTC]

If I ever do a Book Six (which is definitely a possibility), it would be titled something completely different from what you suggested. Also, sorry, I'm not the kind of person who is interested in pairing Korra and Asami. I think all the other romances are far more interesting like Bolin & Opal and Kai & Jinora. Those relationships needed proper resolution that they didn't get in Book Four.

That being said, I absolutely love writing these stories! It's so great when you have pre-established characters that fit into situations and they appear to just write themselves. This is my first attempt at fan-fiction, and this is honestly one of the most satisfying and enjoyable things I've ever done in my life. I'm glad that some people actually enjoy it. Even some fans like you who are Korrasami shippers. If you still like the direction I go in regardless of your shipping preference, I'm really happy for that. Thanks for being an awesome fan!!

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Makosharkman In reply to DeltaSceptile [2015-12-01 22:08:14 +0000 UTC]

now this would be cool.

also another story you could write is what happen with Jinora when she was trap in the Sprit world in season 2? I can give you some ideas if you want?

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DeltaSceptile In reply to Makosharkman [2015-12-02 20:24:06 +0000 UTC]

That sounds like it would be interesting to do a side story of what might have happened in the past seasons parallel to the story. The problem is, back in Book Two when Jinora was captured by Unalaq, she was taken immediately to the Fog of Lost Souls. So the only time I could write any story on her was after Tenzin saves her and she warped over to somewhere in the Spirit World and then warps to Republic City to help Korra revive Raava.

I agree with you, and I think that they should have done a lot more with Jinora in Book Two. What was great was that it made it seem as though she was going from being a side character to an actual main character important to the plot. In a sense she was, but she was mostly ignored and not focused on enough.

If you read through the next chapters of this season I wrote, I think you'll like where I take Jinora and what she goes through.

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Makosharkman In reply to DeltaSceptile [2015-12-03 05:23:00 +0000 UTC]

Well remember after Tenzin finds Jinora in the Spirit World and and rescue her she was out cold first then she when she wakes up she said the last thing she had remembered was dark spirits taking her away so Maybe you could make something up or add something in there.


You did what is the name if the Chapter?

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DeltaSceptile In reply to Makosharkman [2015-12-04 03:39:15 +0000 UTC]

Do you mean to say: "If you did, what would the name of the chapter be?"

If I were to write a story for Jinora's journey in the Spirit World during the finale of Book Two, I'd really have to think about the title. The title of the episode parallel to that was "Book Two: Spirits - Chapter Thirteen: Darkness Falls". Off the top of my head, I would title it something like "A Fading Light".

That's not to say I will do a chapter on that. The fact of the matter is that I can't. I would have to alter some aspects of the continuity in order to fit in something like that. I'd much rather look forward and take the characters to places they could go, rather than change what happened in the past.

That being said, if you wanted an episode on any character on the show, which one would you want to see, and where would you want them to go?

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Makosharkman In reply to DeltaSceptile [2015-12-04 22:44:26 +0000 UTC]

Well the name could be kidnap since Jinora had been kidnap when trap in spirit world since she said  last  thing I remember was dark spirits taking her away I was wondering if you could write  what happen to Jinora when was trap in spirit world.

Like was thinking you could  write this.


Like after Jinora was carried away buy that Spirit she called Furry Foot she brought to  other Dark Spirits and is handed to another and she carried around the spirit world which has become a dark place she obviously says Let Me Go You Big App Put Me Down and cry for help but no one comes to her rescue she carried away alot The Spirits stop for a second then continue to carry her off and one idea I got like when the Dark Spirits stop in one area and just stand there Jinora is standing     on her two feet and one of the dark spirits has his arms wrap around her chest and stomach and waist and she wiggles saying Let Me Go I Want To Go Home then the spirit that is holding her starts to tickle Her Jinora burst into Laughter and starts to Giggle then when she is carried away again then when they stop again Jinora is able to wiggle out of the arms of the dark spirit that is holding her then the kid makes a run for it and the dark spirits chase  after her growling in rage reaching there hug creepy arms out trying to grab Jinora she runs as fast as she could then comes to the cliff of lost souls and looses her balance and falls in before the Dark Spirits grab her. so what do you think?


And maybe you could draw the  gang going to the Fire Nation since we never saw it in the actual  show in The Legend of Korra.

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DeltaSceptile In reply to Makosharkman [2015-12-05 00:27:14 +0000 UTC]

Read Chapters 5 through 8. That has Team Avatar going to the Fire Nation.

There's no point in doing that story for Jinora because it doesn't give any in-depth looks into her journey. All she does is tickle a dark spirit and get away only to fall into the Fog of Lost Souls. Nothing substantial happens.

Check out this video. I think it will help you.
www.youtube.com/watch?v=8Gv0H-…

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Makosharkman In reply to DeltaSceptile [2015-12-18 05:03:11 +0000 UTC]

its just to show her side of the story.


like maybe you could write about Korra going into the land of lost souls and bring everyone out of there including Zhao.

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DeltaSceptile In reply to Makosharkman [2015-12-19 01:29:41 +0000 UTC]

Sorry, but the answer is no.

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Makosharkman In reply to DeltaSceptile [2015-12-19 06:34:23 +0000 UTC]

even bringing Zhao back?

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