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demoniacalchild — Grimoire 2 Mangapage
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Hi thereHere you can see one of my mangapage for my manga project I work on. ^^
This page belongs to Grimoire Vol 2. The release date will at the Leipziger Book fair next year >/////>
@japanese text
I´m really sorry I know the grammar is fatal and wrong but I can´t japanese that good =_______=
If anyone find any failure please help me ;O;
It would be really nice ;_;
PSS: The whole manga and this pages ia made by hand and REAL screentone xD
only the text was made by photoshop ^^°
PSS: and Sorry, at present I have nearly no time to answer all of ur comments ;_;
But I´m really happy about them when i see them, THX ♥
At present I start to donate some point to become a super Group.
Our Goal is to get 9600 points :3
Here you can find the link:
I try to made som advertisement for this project ^^
[link]
here you can read the Preview of Grimoire Vol 2
Promocover of Grimoire Vol 2 and other stuff
WIP Collection
Hope you have fun ^^
Grimoire© Marika Herzog /Comic Culture Company / ComicWerk
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Comments: 50
It feels strange for your characters to use 私 and あなた. In manga that's polite speech for the more quiet types. The boys should use 俺 or 僕 to refer to themselves (darker haired one is definitely an 俺) and 君 or お前 or similar to refer to the listener. And the girl is a bit too tomboyish for the polite speech too. I suggest using あたし for "I" and あんた for "you".
Grammar is not bad at all, but the way the sentences are formulated are unnatural. Especially in their context and character. For example, I would replace あなたはまだ生きている、少なくとも with お前にはまだ命ぐらいはあるんだな, or something else depending on the exact context. And マイケあなたは私をつぶす is very awkward. I would make it something like マ、マイケ・・・息が苦しいっ, which means "Ma, Maik... I can't breathe". Even then I would ask some people for a second opinion, because I'm not confident about my Japanese skills when it comes to this.
But the illustrations are very good! They are pretty much indistinguishable from professional Japanese stuff. If someone would tell me this was actually printed in Japan, I would have believed it (before reading the text 
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thanks xD
@grammar
uhh I know the grammar is not that good... *stares on the google translator*
So thanks for the correction ♥
Hope I find time to write the right grammar in that pages ;O;
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I am only intermediate in Japanese but if you need help in translation with English, I can help you. Also, I think it's better to write it in one-format then submit it to editor. Your art is good so you will be submitted; what you will need is the accurate story writing.
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thanks >///>
and i´ll try my best ;O;
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Rather than asking to correct the already wrong Japanese sentence. I think you should write it in English and then, have someone who uses Japanese translate it. That's better I think.
[Note - Your Kanji fonts are too thick and small to read, by the way.]
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yeahh google translator isn´t the best choice xD
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late aber thx so much ;O;
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late but thx so much ;O;
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no but it´s one of my dream
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also, wenn ich das sehe, merke ich einfach wie viel ich noch lernen muss!
ich hab größten respekt dir gegenüber!
bin begeistert! *_*
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Kann kaum warten. Leipzig, ne? Hast du dan auch vol. 1 dabei? Ich habe deine wunderschöne bilder nur dieses jahr erkant, und dan hatte ich die Kon schon verpasst.
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jaaa bin auch fast fertig *_*
cover muss ich warten bis es gescannt is und nur noch nen paar seiten rastern ♥'
hofe dir wirds gefallen ;O;
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aaaaa. T-T Ich hasse mein job. Dieses jahr werde ich es nicht schaffen. Aber vieleich kannst du mir 'ne kopie über pay-pal verkaufen? *hündchen gesicht*
Auf jeden fall wünche ich dir viel erfolg und auch viel spaß auf der Kon!!
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xD der manga wird ja erst in März zur leioziger Buchmesse verkauft vom Verlag ^^
ergo man kanns dnan auch über amazon bzw über nen comic-fachhandel kaufen xD
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Wooo- Hoooooo! heh. Das ist 'ne gute nachricht. Danke sehr! Und ich frue mich schon auf den nächsten Teil der Geschichte. >w<
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das das mit japanisch nen juks oder wird auch dahin inportiert ? xDDD
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ist nur junk, leider ;O;
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I speak Japanese... but I have no idea what you are trying to say 
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it was just a junk so it was not important to have the right grammar^^
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she use an translator ^^
i think, it was only a test page with the japan language
The problem in german is:
The Germans like Japanese manga more than mangas from their one nationality. That´s realy sad.
No matter how bad is the japanese manga, the german people would buy it. But only from a Japanese, not from a German.
PS: sorry for my bad english T_T
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Using a translator for Japanese is a baaaaaad idea, haha.
I think that's what it was like in America back when I lived there, but I think now it's not too uncommon to see American manga on the racks. And yeah, it is sad that people would judge a story before they read it. I say, as long as the quality is there, who cares where it is from? I love an American manga called "Peach Fuzz", because even if it wasn't made in Japan it's still very well written and very amusing.
Hopefully demoniacalchild will consider publishing on the web-- maybe in English (if she can find someone to help with her English). Everything is moving digital anyway (even here in Japan, there are lots of digital manga).
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I agree with Teppo.
I can see this printed in the future!!!!
I cant read it, so I hope it comes in English too lol.
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Wieso japanisch? *meep* ich wills lesen können!? xDDD Mensch klasse! Da freut man sich um so mehr auf die LBM! Ich hoffe du bist auf der NiCon da? ^0^ Würde mich freuen dich da zu sehen 
*lieb knuddl*
PS: Hast du ne Idee bei wem ich unterkommen könnte während der AniMaCo? x_____x Ich hatte bisher 0 Zeit herum zu fragen *hust* Zu viel zu tun >_< Vielleicht kennst du da ja wen? Kaorie oder so? x_x
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Irgendwie ist die Message leer? oô
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Du zeichnest so geil ÖuÖ kann man das auch irgendwann in Buchläden kaufen?
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ja ab nächstes Jahr LBM ^^
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geil, hast du dann nen stand? Wenn ja muss ich da mal vorbei schaun *__*
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werd mit dem Verlag da sein^^
www.comic-culture-verlag.de
Werd nur noch auf der connichi am manga markt sitzen xDDDD
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dann ist ja meine chance groß dass ich vorbei komme XD YAY Muss sagen, von allem was ich bisher mangamäßig gesehen habe, von deutschen Zeichnern, stichst du echt gewaltig raus. So hübsche Zeichungen ;__; Weiter so ^O^
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danke ;O;
naja erwarte aber net zu viel von dem band >___>
hab da noch ne menge zu lernen ;_;
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ach was XD was ich da so sehe ists schon voll pro *u* lernen kann man immer denk ich ^^
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I wish I could do panelling like you *___*
awesomness!
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das ist einfach nur liebe pur T_T
ich depp würd auch gern sowas können, hoffentlich reiss ich mich mal nach der lbm zusammen und mach paar seiten mit tusche <_<;
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Wow... Looks amazing! 
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