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Published: 2006-08-29 03:51:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 2782; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 24
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Ahem...Well this isn't anything new because it's basically from my devID. Since my iD was themed engulged in creativity and the design focused on creativty I thought it was perfect for Kre8tiva and it is MY design. So here I am applying art which the design was at first. Now, it's applied, serving a purpose with a bit of a greater message. It's being used in a more commerical form.
Anyways, all comments welcomed. This time I got more time to await critiques. Thanks in advance.
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thanks. that's the ad poster, this is the final:
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Looks great,
Only thing i'd say, nothing major but i would try and weather the images of them on the bus stop things, they look too clean and bright, just so they look like they belong in the picture.
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Nice. Are the mocks the actual size this is going to be printed on? There might be a problem with viewing the logo and the text in that case because of the background colour/size.
By the way, is that the final logo?
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actually, I think you're right about the logo as well. I took a look at it again. Maybe it's because I was sleepy last nite.
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Well, it would obviously be bigger at a higher resoloution but I see your point. The logo is viewable I believe bu the text you're right. i JUST don't wanna put in an outsider colour. I'll work on it.
man, i'm stuck with the logo. I don't have a choice. Like I said, sir is rushing us through this and already treatened to fail me if I change it again. So yea, final logo, like or no like.
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Well, you could tweak the text, but i'm talking reaally small typographic details, creating holes in the "t" and "k", changing one of the "a"s slightly etc. I doubt your lecturer will notice it. 
However, i'm suggesting the tweaks because you aren't happy with the amount of work you put in heh. Personally, I really like how the logo looks, but i keep thinking that the brush gives out the wrong message, especially after reading your journal. =\ Paint brushes are "hands on" objects, which totally conflicts with the voice recognition feature krea8iva has. Maybe you need to promote the product using a different feature as its unique selling point?
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this is why i should have enlightened everyone b4 posting the logos. To get such suggestions. That was one of my concern about the brush but when I showed my lecturer he didn't suggest anything of the sort. I do agree with you do and Ryan sorta said the same thing with the brush. I mean brush means creative, it's like the symbol for creativity because it represents traditional media. Ryan basically asked how many times do i need to say painted. lol.
My hands are tied on this.
The holes... interesting idea.
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i never see an add like that in france good work !
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well, I see ads like this in canada. Infact, coca cola had a cool one with some really creative shit and awesome vectors.
I'm glad u like this though. thanks.
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yes coca is very vecto style
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This poster is very effective, specially if its used for events like workshops, exibitions, etc. Very professional work.
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I'm thinking if youre a graphics designer or web designer, this must get your attention. Really can't miss something so vibrant in colour. lol. Thanks. I'm glad you like it.
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Yes it called a lot my attention, and the color balance its great, doesnΒ΄t hurt the eyes, very soft and clean.
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awesome, as others, i too thought it was really on the bus stop, great job
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yesssssss this is the finest design
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I'm working on CD Packaging and am using your design as a guide as to how it's done because I've never done CD Pacaging before. Hope you don't mind.
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i do mind . . . .
just kidding
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Nice eye catching design / concept! Love the digital mockups on street furniture too, nice touch.
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lol i almost thought that it was a real poster on a bus stop until i saw the second picture
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ahahaha...that's cool. I even put back the reflection on them. Reflection on the first one isn't perfect. Oh well, fooled you
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lol i like the images of the bus stop . . good work fitting them in so nice
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cooooool! thought it was really on the bus stop at first.
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lol, wouldn't that be cool?
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