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DesmondWyght — The Void Within my Heart
Published: 2013-11-27 21:50:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 110; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description There is a void in the my heart.
A void I can't fill on my own.
I am in pain and I don't know why.
I need a cure that cannot be made.
A cure that I cannot find.
I must work for it, so I may earn it.
A cure for the void in my heart.
Half the cure lies within me.
Useless without the missing piece.
It cannot be stolen or bought.
It must be given by one who is willing to give.
The whole cure, when complete, is love.

There is a void in my heart.
It is filled with emptiness...
The void consumed all emotion.
It locks away my happiness.
It feeds on my loneliness.
Growing exponentially, it slowly darkens my spirit.
Seemingly endless, no light can penetrate its darkness.
A darkness that cannot be controlled.
A darkness that refuses to be vanquished.
Only one can save me...
The one I may never find...
My soul mate.
My better half.
My perfect match.
Only she can rescue me.
Rescue me from the void in my heart.

There is a void in my heart.
Growing bigger and more powerful every day.
As it does, my heart gets colder.
Soon to freeze over...
Never to feel warmth again.
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Comments: 7

Akatsuki-Neko-Slave [2013-11-28 08:00:59 +0000 UTC]

You are an amazing writer, you actually made me want to cry. If this is truly based off your feelings then I hope you find your soul mate and that void gets filled. ~RR

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DesmondWyght In reply to Akatsuki-Neko-Slave [2013-11-28 20:57:00 +0000 UTC]

If Fate will allow me to find my soul mate, then I hope I meet her soon. If it's not written in my starts to find her, well that's alright too As long I know she is out there somewhere, it helps.
And thank you I don't consider myself to be that great a writer though, and I can't understand why almost everyone who has read my work has enjoyed it.

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Akatsuki-Neko-Slave In reply to DesmondWyght [2013-11-28 21:30:42 +0000 UTC]

They enjoy it because you use enough detail so we can imagine it but not too much too make it completely obvious. You're very talented when it comes to writing and never doubt yourself of that fact. 

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DesmondWyght In reply to Akatsuki-Neko-Slave [2013-11-29 22:57:36 +0000 UTC]

You aren't the first to say I have talent, but I honestly don't feel like it's true. I've always kind of doubted my artistic abilities. I can't draw, so the written arts are the only way for me to really express myself, and I've never thought that I would be able to do much with it. I'm glad that there are people who really believe in me and my work though. Thank you ^-^

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Akatsuki-Neko-Slave In reply to DesmondWyght [2013-11-30 01:51:44 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome, but you are very good. The most critical person of your work is you. We all criticize ourselves more than others do so it's natural. But still, I believe in you and your work, you're very talented and I can't wait to read more.

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DesmondWyght In reply to Akatsuki-Neko-Slave [2013-11-30 21:39:05 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much ^-^ If you want, you can tell others about me, show them my stuff? I'd love more feedback if possible, and I might upload more soon

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Akatsuki-Neko-Slave In reply to DesmondWyght [2013-12-01 02:27:15 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I am haha ^_^ 

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