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Dinky-Mew — Prologue Part Three
Published: 2013-01-15 11:45:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 1573; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 60
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Part three in the prologue - one more part should round it off and then I can start into the actual chapters of this little series, I feel kind of excited!Bioware own the franchise of Mass Effect and it's characters and world - Abigail Shepard is my own creation, inspired by the character of Jane Shepard created by Bioware.
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Yipes, you love cliff-hanger endings to these. Kaidan was so sweet and tender it brought tears to my eyes. Please don't have Abby lose the baby. PLEASE?!!!
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You know it never even crossed my mind........................until now
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No-------------------oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo! Don't let it cross your mind now because of something I said. I voted for a little girl by the way because she could be Daddy Kaidan's little girl and I can so see him bouncing her on his knee.
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I've never had a little girl - I have a neice, I suppose I could use her for a focus 
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meeeo! these three chapters have been awesome! Really very good!
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Thank you hun, the last is in third person... as much as I would love to... a labor scene from Kaidan's eyes just isn't going to work haha! I don't have enough metaphors and similies for that!
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haha I don't really know what men think when it comes to labor... I just don't know...
I understand why you're doing it in third person 
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I'll tell you what we think...
'Ohshitohshitohshitohshit' until baby arrives, followed swiftly by
'Well, that seemed relativel painless'
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haha you forget the broken fingers that the guys receive from the woman
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I love your writing. It so touching and just amazing honestly. I read this in English this morning and it made my seemingly bad day better.
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Aww thank you, that means a lot coming from a fellow writer
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Alright, I'm just going to go up and click that favorite button.
Wonderfully written! Definitely going to have to go back and read the first two parts to catch up! Eagerly waiting for your next post!
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Thank you 
A more detailed, third person, version of the ending of ME3 will be coming up later this week. From a 1st person perspective it is difficult to get across what actually happens - so bear with it. It will leave you with a lot of questions but all will be explained in the fuller version I am writing at the same time as this
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