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Published: 2013-03-10 16:34:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 41382; Favourites: 433; Downloads: 0
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I like the composition and balance here. I like the way the models are focused on one another, and there is no question about what's going on. It's very real and in the moment.
The orange seems to come right out of their skin tones and the lighting. One small improvement would be to color balance so that your light isn't quite so blue on the boys. (If you look at the highlights, there is a blue cast.)
Your mask and matte work isn't perfect yet. Look at the hair on the left model, for example. Compared to other aspects of his form against the back plate, it's muddled and not sharp. This suggests that you used the Photoshop tool for auto-finding the edges. Try roughening the lines in the hair to get a better blending effect.
My final comment will be about light balance. The background pops so much that it threatens to overwhelm the models. You might consider the shape of the light burst on the background, or how to adjust it. Perhaps adjusting the color balance on the models (as described above) will help.
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The lighting on the models and the background colors are great, looks like a print ad for an energy drink or something! David
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Probably two of my very fave now. Thank you for posting a few more
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Two fine looking guys in a tastefully done background!!!
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