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Published: 2020-04-12 04:06:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 744; Favourites: 52; Downloads: 0
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Edit: Redid my original doodle, decided it needed to be more symmetrical and proportional.Part two of my mlp pet series, with Twilight and owlowiscious. I'll eventually get to Rarity next after I draw a few other unrelated doodles!
Working on making my characters a little more round and proportional, hopefully it looks good.
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Hi! 
First of all: congratulations on such a great job 
I would like to highlight some notes with the intention that they will serve you in future works, although this is already very good in itself.
At the anatomical level of Twilight, a couple details (from the base that it is a chibi): I think that the wrist joint in the front legs would be better a little further back, to highlight that it is a horse leg. As they are now, they do not give that feeling and could lead to confusion; the other detail is the rear leg that appears under the belly. We all know what it is but... >_< Well... perhaps it would be convenient to separate it a little so that it could be seen that it is a leg and not something else. Tilting the line a little and showing the bent hoof could help reinforce the image you want to express; Lastly, I also think it would be nice to tilt the horn a bit so that it is projected forward. I have seen that in another drawing very similar to this the horn is in the position that I am telling you (the one from "Hello You", another adorable and beautiful work ^^)
At the anatomical level of the owl, just to say that perhaps the "ears" would be better if they were born from the eyebrows, because right now they look like a couple of additional little wings (fluffy and soft-looking, all told XD)
As for the shadows, they perfectly fulfill their function of giving volume to the elements of the drawing, but in certain areas they can be confusing regarding the light focus. Don't be afraid to completely cover a shaded area, if there is something hiding it but you want to keep the volume, add a darker shadow. This will help you achieve that effect for example on the back and the wings of Twilight, which should not be illuminated since the head is in front and would cast its shadow on them.
For the rest, I have to congratulate you for having done such a good job on the color, so smooth and accurate. I think that although your lines are certainly straight and angular, that does not collide with the drawing or make it less adorable. It is just another style of drawing chibis (but if it is something you want to change later, you have a lot of talent and skill, you will achieve it
In short: try to consider the location of the light source for certain areas and continue like this, because you have a prodigious hand capable of making great works of art ^^
Congratulations!
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