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DorianHarper — The Sun and Moon
Published: 2009-06-02 21:58:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 1692; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 15
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Description “The sun and moon,
They sing a tune,
In the depths of the cold winter’s night.
Be still my sweet,
For in dreams we shall meet,
Until we both wander in the light.”

Spectre latched his porthole for the night, golden brown eyes growing heavy from the endurance his day had brought him. It had been yet another failed attempt of regaining his redemption, and being able to travel into the light to be with his beloved family. Far too long had he been stranded on this forsaken island, and by now, he frankly had witnessed enough.

Climbing into the hammock that had been set up for him to sleep in, Spectre allowed it to sway back and forth beneath his weight, eyes focused on the shifting shadows above him. There was no trace of light within his cabin now that darkness had crept upon the land.

“There is no light anywhere,” he thought to himself as he rolled over, eyes growing heavy as they closed, encompassing his world in an even greater darkness. “…not anymore…”

The dimness continued to glide across the walls of the cabin, leading Spectre into a deep slumber. He couldn’t remember ever feeling this tired. Nevertheless, the thoughts soon crept from his head as his own memoirs drifted in. Once he was deep in his slumber, he could have sworn he’d heard someone slipping across his room. Yet, since he had been heavily asleep, part of him began to deny it. It was only when he heard a soft woman’s voice did his body tingle as a chill was sent down his spine.

“Desi.”

Spectre grunted softly, attempting to open an eye, but nevertheless, he failed to do so. Something kept him dreaming…

“Desi,” the voice whispered again, this time, the captain beginning to see the image of a young woman before him, her long brunette hair flowing into her sapphire eyes.

“…Elizabeth?”

Spectre choked her name out softly, wanting to be able to reach out and touch her- to see if she were real. He had gone far too long without seeing his wife, that he began to feel that this was only a trick of the mind- a vision his tired mind had brought on to help him escape the day.

“Desi,” the woman repeated, this time looking him in the eyes with her piercing blue pair, “I’ve waited far too long now.”

“I’m trying, Elizabeth,” Spectre whispered, feeling a twinge of pain tug at his heart strings, “honest I am. I have longed for nothing else… to be with you again… that is all I have to keep dreaming.”

Spectre swore he felt her hand brush gently under his chin, raising his head up as she smiled down upon him. Her sapphire eyes glittered as he looked him over- the sight of them one that he had thought to never see again. Tenderly running a hand down the side of his face, Elizabeth smiled slightly from the corner of her mouth, tilting her head as she continued to stare down upon him.

“But we are together,” she whispered, Spectre raising an eyebrow to her slightly, her image in his mind almost beginning to glow. “Never once have we been apart. Though I may not physically be able to see you, or touch you… I am always here; in your dreams. I just wander in a different world than you now… we are like the sun and moon. I live in the light while you live in the dark- but one day- one day, Desi… we will both be part of the light.”

Spectre blinked slowly at that, feeling her lips gently press against his forehead, fingers tangling within his thick locks of raven hair as she stroked them back. He shuddered slightly, looking one final time into her eyes- now filled with tears- as she managed to whisper.

“…I love you…”

Spectre’s eyes popped open as he sat up swiftly in his hammock. Once more, darkness was all that surrounded him, no sign of Elizabeth to be found. Sighing heavily, he ran his fingers through his hair, leaning back as he gazed up to the ceiling, once more watching the shadows shift. Darkness appeared to be all that comforted him anymore… he had come so far from the light. Yet, in lying in his swaying hammock, he could have sworn that he heard humming somewhere- coming from the shoreline; and out his window, far down the beach, there was a faint light- the light of his hope.

“Elizabeth…,” he whispered with a choke, watching as it dimmed, fading into the heavens.

“The sun and moon,
They sing a tune,
In the depths of the cold winter’s night.
Be still my sweet,
For in dreams we shall meet,
Until we both wander in the light.”
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Comments: 35

Hohlushka-SUN [2009-12-22 08:27:21 +0000 UTC]

lovely!

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DorianHarper In reply to Hohlushka-SUN [2009-12-22 13:29:37 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much^^

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Drizzerey [2009-12-20 21:01:55 +0000 UTC]

Very well written and what a sad tale great job.

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DorianHarper In reply to Drizzerey [2009-12-20 22:34:53 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much^^

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Drizzerey In reply to DorianHarper [2009-12-21 02:12:40 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome ^^

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Glamrgrl104 [2009-09-28 20:58:52 +0000 UTC]

WOW i can see how this got the daily Dev lit artist award.
This is so descriptive and well written now I see what is missing in my stories, I need more description. AWESOME job on this.

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DorianHarper In reply to Glamrgrl104 [2009-09-29 01:37:16 +0000 UTC]

^^
Thank you so much!
I'm really glad that you enjoyed it

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ArchArad [2009-06-06 17:16:18 +0000 UTC]

It's great that you've been able to use the prompt with your own characters - it lets you get to know them that little bit better.

I really like this line: just wander in a different world than you now… we are like the sun and moon. Once I read your synopsis it made it even more striking.

Congratulations on the DLD as well!

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DorianHarper In reply to ArchArad [2009-06-06 23:50:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much

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DailyLitDeviations [2009-06-05 04:45:11 +0000 UTC]

Your wonderful literary work has been chosen to be featured by DLD (Daily Literature Deviations) in a news article here: [link] .

Be sure to check out the other artists featured and show your support by ing the News Article.

Keep writing and keep creating.

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DorianHarper In reply to DailyLitDeviations [2009-06-05 05:07:09 +0000 UTC]

^^
Thank you so very much! I really appreciate your support^^

I will definitely the article.

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DailyLitDeviations In reply to DorianHarper [2009-06-05 18:06:31 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

And we so appreciate yours as well!!

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julietcaesar [2009-06-03 08:32:36 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful, sweet tale.

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DorianHarper In reply to julietcaesar [2009-06-03 10:26:52 +0000 UTC]

Thank you^^

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julietcaesar In reply to DorianHarper [2009-06-03 10:30:35 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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Broodwitch [2009-06-03 01:25:20 +0000 UTC]

Wow, this is great

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DorianHarper In reply to Broodwitch [2009-06-03 01:34:22 +0000 UTC]

Thank you^^

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LateNightLady [2009-06-02 23:36:03 +0000 UTC]

Very nice I passed on that prompt.

V. excited about your book this month

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DorianHarper In reply to LateNightLady [2009-06-02 23:56:08 +0000 UTC]


Thank you so much-- and yes! Me too

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ToaAkatsuki [2009-06-02 22:43:36 +0000 UTC]

niiice. glad to see the prompts are working out for you. xD

cool idea.

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DorianHarper In reply to ToaAkatsuki [2009-06-02 23:04:50 +0000 UTC]


Thank you so much!!

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ToaAkatsuki In reply to DorianHarper [2009-06-02 23:17:09 +0000 UTC]

welcome ^^

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baings [2009-06-02 22:27:29 +0000 UTC]

so confusing.....must read book

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DorianHarper In reply to baings [2009-06-02 22:28:15 +0000 UTC]

Lol.
Yeah, I tried to explain it in the summary... but I don't think it worked out very well

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baings In reply to DorianHarper [2009-06-02 22:33:07 +0000 UTC]

no im just stupid

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DorianHarper In reply to baings [2009-06-02 22:35:28 +0000 UTC]

Aww. No-- I just rushed the quick synopsis.
Lol.
You're not stupid.

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baings In reply to DorianHarper [2009-06-02 22:46:11 +0000 UTC]

being smart and being noticed for its over rated
i prefure to be a secret genius -_-;

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drawfox5 [2009-06-02 22:05:03 +0000 UTC]

awww, i love-ed. poor spectre and elizabeth. should've had a make-out session to make them happy >=3. rofl. it is awesome

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DorianHarper In reply to drawfox5 [2009-06-02 22:07:08 +0000 UTC]


You're so bad. Lol.
I'm glad you liked it though
At first I didn't know what I was going to do with the prompt... but, tah-dah! It was perfect for Spectre and Elizabeth

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drawfox5 In reply to DorianHarper [2009-06-02 22:16:51 +0000 UTC]

I did. i love-ed. it was tres bien

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DorianHarper In reply to drawfox5 [2009-06-02 22:17:12 +0000 UTC]

Lol.
You mean, it was muy bien

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drawfox5 In reply to DorianHarper [2009-06-02 22:17:38 +0000 UTC]

i spraken z french. tres

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DorianHarper In reply to drawfox5 [2009-06-02 22:20:20 +0000 UTC]

Spectre spraken ze Spanish. MUY

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drawfox5 In reply to DorianHarper [2009-06-02 22:26:01 +0000 UTC]

ok, i'll make it easy... >.> very

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DorianHarper In reply to drawfox5 [2009-06-02 22:27:32 +0000 UTC]

Yes...
"very bien"
How nice.

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