pokemonpie [2009-12-12 00:04:53 +0000 UTC]
very well written story and it doesnt sound like an archetype
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draco1455 In reply to pokemonpie [2009-12-23 11:40:30 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much. still trying to get ch. 2 done
pokemonpie In reply to draco1455 [2009-12-25 15:46:11 +0000 UTC]
ok
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cameronjc [2009-09-25 12:13:46 +0000 UTC]
This is good. I would like to see the second chapter soon