Comments: 23
JocelynSamara [2011-01-08 02:57:34 +0000 UTC]
I like it. Good color scheme and everything. And I appreciate that you left her hair and eye colors in tact. (I had a friend a few years back whom I'd lent lineart to for him to color, and it seemed he was DETERMINED that all of characters needed to have blue hair).
Anywho, my only very minor issue is the socks - which is itself minor, because as it's an easy fact to overlook without color. You see, the costume in the original lineart for this piece is based off the outfit in this piece [link] which depicts that she's not actually wearing socks at all, but pants that stop just below the knees. But beyond that totally understandable mistake that I'd never personally clarified for anyone, I think you did a fine job. ^_^
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Vortsukoto [2011-01-06 09:59:47 +0000 UTC]
Just a note, but mouths aren't nearly so red they are much closer to pink, but are always heavily shaded even when open. You might instead want to try a shade of gray/black that's just faintly pinkish.
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Musicallover1234 In reply to Vortsukoto [2011-01-06 19:44:19 +0000 UTC]
She could be wearing lipstick. Making her mouth red.
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Vortsukoto In reply to Musicallover1234 [2011-01-07 06:20:43 +0000 UTC]
I figured I'd just point it out. He's still trying to improve as an artist and pointing these thing out to him will help him in the future.
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majorkerina [2011-01-06 05:04:09 +0000 UTC]
Cute work ^^.
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Nami214 [2011-01-06 03:24:15 +0000 UTC]
i think you did a good job with only those tools next time try using photoshop or correl painter those are two of the best for that
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Nami214 In reply to Dragon8Artist [2011-01-06 04:23:00 +0000 UTC]
well you can always use a keygen version
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Dragon8Artist In reply to Nami214 [2011-01-06 04:46:18 +0000 UTC]
?
I like manga studio, anyway.
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JonniLove [2011-01-06 03:18:56 +0000 UTC]
no eyedropper burn or dodge? D: I would diieee. but It looks nice so far!! Keep it up c: Just one thing about speech bubbles, a lot of the time they're not actually coming from the mouth...at least the ones I've seen orz I could be wrong.
and can you use layers in manga studio?
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