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pheeph [2020-02-18 03:19:23 +0000 UTC]
That chair does look elaborate... I think a lot of us had this drilled into our psyche that we shouldn't cause trouble... not even a tiny bit... I guess this mentality makes us think getting into trouble can be like a minefield... Can Jovian be trusted?
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dragondoodle In reply to TaintedTruffle [2020-02-18 06:16:55 +0000 UTC]
It was okay, but there is a reason she was determined to find a job off her home planet
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Kitty-Craftsy [2020-02-16 20:45:09 +0000 UTC]
ow sjees...I can imagine how harsh this fear is. All the time being afraid to do something wrong. Just walking on your toes all your life.
And not even for the government but for your mom? I hope she wil be able to face her fear. Because this is no way of living at all. People will walk over you when they know you are like this. I am sorry for Ioana. Though her fear is strong inside this one. Nice work c:
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Kitty-Craftsy In reply to dragondoodle [2020-02-16 21:02:59 +0000 UTC]
Jeah I understand in some way. Though I think the government can destroy your life ^^' your mom not so much if you keep a distance.
It's a tough thing to go true. Especially if you don't realise there are worse things than your mom who will become angry at you.
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AaronBrawnstone [2020-02-13 09:04:09 +0000 UTC]
I can't help but relate to Ioana on this one.
It dosen't help but make it worse if the mother is abusive to Ioana. I'm rooting for Jovian and The Lady. They can save her from this tragedy.
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KaijuusandKryptids [2020-02-09 19:10:25 +0000 UTC]
Ohh poor Ioana! She definitely looks like she's feeling small and vulnerable. She has such a relatable fear!
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UnaOwens [2020-02-04 14:22:40 +0000 UTC]
Wow, that's pretty scary that's for sure!
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AlleycatCY [2020-01-30 04:59:10 +0000 UTC]
Oh, wow, this emotion strikes hard.
Ioana is so fearful of her mother being angry with her, that her own freedom and happiness does not even register on her mind in this situation.
Masterful character building dragondoodle !
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AlleycatCY In reply to dragondoodle [2020-01-30 19:25:56 +0000 UTC]
Yikes!
Despite knowing that Jovian and The Lady would do anything for her in this situation, this is emotionally a terrible place to be.
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Parziivale [2020-01-28 08:13:16 +0000 UTC]
Oh man the idea of Ioana's fear being started by her mother and then extending to any body of authority feels very realistic, and having it all tied back to what her mother might think hits super hard. I adore hearing about characters' motivations about things, and I feel like I can really understand Ioana's fear driving certain actions of hers, and I really love how it all ties together!
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ItikDuck [2020-01-27 09:05:21 +0000 UTC]
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ethereal-dancer [2020-01-27 07:04:32 +0000 UTC]
Great job!! I like how you made Jovian a shadow! And that chair design is excellent!
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ArthurQF [2020-01-27 01:18:03 +0000 UTC]
Yes, you should be proud of that chair design! It's very unique and fitting for this storyline! Excellent work done on showing her fear. That is a legit fear to have and you did well showing that with her expression. Excellent work done!
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