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Published: 2016-11-09 16:42:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 252; Favourites: 36; Downloads: 2
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Third image of this challenge!

Would you want me to draw your oc's? Request in exchange of critique. Here for more info fav.me/danxu2k

Edit: Modified some parts in order to achieve a better understanding of the body
Edit: Darkened linework and some other adjustments.
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Comments: 17

SkaterGators [2016-11-12 13:28:43 +0000 UTC]

love the shape of this guys head, awesome design!

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Dragoreon In reply to SkaterGators [2016-11-12 15:43:23 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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zomister [2016-11-11 01:32:38 +0000 UTC]

alright, here's my critique:
(im not a professional artist, so this might be weird and confusing. so, sorry about that. )
everything is beautifully done in this. i love the scales and the position you chose. the only thing i would recommend is that the lines should be a tiny bit darker and the shading could use a little work. im confused about the back right leg's position. is it bending the wrong way? i don't know.
but this drawing is amazing and i love the colors and horns. good job, and keep up the good work!

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Dragoreon In reply to zomister [2016-11-11 10:19:55 +0000 UTC]

Oh, everything will help! I'm not a professional either x3
I'll darken the lines in a moment and correct some things.
Thank you for this

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zomister In reply to Dragoreon [2016-11-11 13:19:25 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome!

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Cookie-Brooke [2016-11-09 19:50:42 +0000 UTC]

Critique, I'd have to say I'm very impressed. I absolutely love the scale work that's been done here. There's a lot of variation in line as well. My recommendation would be that some area of interest could have darker outlines to indicate shadow, such as areas between the teeth, the upper eyelid, jawline, base of the horns, etc. All and all very nice job! Keep up the good work!

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Dragoreon In reply to Cookie-Brooke [2016-11-10 15:53:10 +0000 UTC]

That would add a nice effect! I will apply it asap! Thanks!

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Cookie-Brooke In reply to Dragoreon [2016-11-10 16:21:03 +0000 UTC]

Np I have an interesting character that would make for a cool Huevember pic

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Dragoreon In reply to Cookie-Brooke [2016-11-12 15:35:48 +0000 UTC]

Ok, tell me about it

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Cookie-Brooke In reply to Dragoreon [2016-11-13 01:13:48 +0000 UTC]

This is Otreus   I think his colors would fit a hue challenge very well considering certain areas are covered in gold.
However I have another character that I would love art of, and it's this RenFair girl here that I haven't named yet 

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Dragoreon In reply to Cookie-Brooke [2016-11-13 10:23:53 +0000 UTC]

The first one looks really awesome, but you have to consider that I'll be using purple this time, so the apearence will change. But if it doesn't matter to you I'd love to draw Annaraáha

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Cookie-Brooke In reply to Dragoreon [2016-11-13 21:06:30 +0000 UTC]

Lol of course it is a hue challenge after all xD also his name is Otreus, ignore the name on the red sheet xD 

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Ctzha [2016-11-09 17:21:16 +0000 UTC]

Huh, don't really have any OC's to draw, but I can still critique if you like.  Wanted to make sure you were open to getting feedback before giving it.

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Dragoreon In reply to Ctzha [2016-11-09 17:27:50 +0000 UTC]

Of course! I would like to hear everything you want to say.
Even if you don't have any OC I would also take request of any character you may like Like Toothless from How to train your dragon or any pokemon, whatever ^^

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Ctzha In reply to Dragoreon [2016-11-09 17:52:18 +0000 UTC]

Ok  ^_^

Love the colours and skin textures.  Having the eyes that grey colour with all that red really makes them pop without having them take over the whole page, and it's very cool how your eyes make them look a little green.

Composition-wise, it's a little confusing once you get off the head.  I think I'm looking at a back leg, and part of both front legs but...I can't really tell?  Especially with the way the line of the back is running, I'd expect it to look a little more like this:  sta.sh/01kbmsquhmdv

But that head is beautifully done on both the perspective and the way the scales blend upward a bit into the spikes.

Hope that helps!

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Dragoreon In reply to Ctzha [2016-11-09 18:39:39 +0000 UTC]

This is really revealing. I was too focused on colours that I messed it up a bit with the understanding of the image. I've already changed some stuff on the image thanks to your critique! Thank you so much

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Ctzha In reply to Dragoreon [2016-11-09 18:52:21 +0000 UTC]

No problem!

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