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Published: 2008-09-01 00:51:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 13806; Favourites: 689; Downloads: 535
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Aryn. Ish. I'm not sure this was the best choice of outfit for her, but nothing else really seemed to work.I'm tired. Not sure if I like this or not, so I'm going to stick it up here. When I wake up tomorrow, one of two things will happen; either I'll grin and keep it, or scowl and throw it into Scraps (hint: option 2 seems more likely XD)
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The outfir tuits the pose perfectly if you ask me. Awesome pic.
(continues staring and drooling)
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I think the entire pic is perfect! but if there was something i'd have to nitpick,it might be the eyes. they seem too dark and my eyes seem to fix more there than on the entire pic itself. ( i'm an eyes man, so i might just be going there either way, lol) again, kick ass job on the entire sexy piece
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I guess you grinned and kept it, then xD And I'm glad you did!
Great work on the anatomy.
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brilliant character design, the body structure is perfect ~
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the way you've drawn her face, particularly the eyes, it is slightly different than what i'm used to seeing you produce; it feels a lot simpler, yet at the same time more refined.
heh, i'm also surprised you did not over proportion the bust as is your custom
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She's too much of a babe to throw her out! DON'T DU EET!
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well if I ever get to make a drawing like that I wouldnt throw it out (since I suck) but in my opinion istead of just throwing it away you should keep it.
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This is really great, the anatomy is perfect and then the perspective and pose are just plain cool.
Hmm, the waist looks a little slender, but that's just a preference thing.
I love her outfit though, it has lots of character without being overly complicated. Is that a bandage on her knee?
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She was supposed to be wearing leggings, and the thing on her knee was meant to be some kind of kneepad, but yeah, not the clearest thing in the world.
Still fumbling around a bit with anatomy. All of my people in the past have tended to be a bit vertically squished, so I'm trying to get that sorted out...
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Ooh I see now!
I also want to add. Your line arts are fantastic, so smooth and clean and bold.
She has amazing eyes too.
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Thank you :3
Having spent a while looking through my old arts, I've been trying a little harder to draw eyes that aren't painfully bad. Not quite sure they're as good as I'd like them to be, but it seems to be a start...
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Personally, I really like the outfit; not sure why, but I do like it.
Aryn's really cute...Does she have a phone number? [/loser] XP
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She's slightly crazy, maybe all communication would have to be conducted with walkie-talkies instead...
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Hey, whatever gets the job done, heh heh.
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Please grin and keep it. xDD I love your style.The outfit seems fine to me, although she is your character. You decide what works for her. Even so, it was beautifully done.
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I like it enough for both of us, but, her hair seems to "dissapear"? O=
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The way its proportioned along with the neatly done lines and supurb clothhing make the lineart look so Beautiful!
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the proportions on this are so nice *A*
the clothing wrinkles are stunning.
and the lines are so clean! X3
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i love ur line art...well proportioned and very neat lines....keep it up 
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nice pose.. nice jacket.. i dont understand whats so bad about her. wait.. color her.. yes thats it
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Looks pretty good, even without shading. Is she supposed to be Asian (judging by her somewhat slanted eyes)?
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Not really. To be honest, she doesn't usually look much like this at all; it was a bit of a goof around with a bit of a different face style, although the whole body was an attempt at something slightly different too X3
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the clothes look good, only thing it's hard to tell is if those are leggings she is wearing
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They were meant to be leggings, but I fiddled about with them a bit (changed the knee padding, since Yuko now seems to have identical leggings and that simply won't do) and now it's not so clear.
I guess a seam going up the side would help a bit, among other things.
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if you color it then there would be no problem, or even shading it darker would fix it
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Not bad at all! But the buckles--are you going Tetsuya Nomura on us?
Still love how you draw midriff areas and make clothing look like it's actually being worn, rather than simply overlaid on the character. Only problem I see is that her upper arms, especially her right/our left, look a little too big. At the very least, one appears larger than the other.
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I didn't think I put *that* many buckles on!
You're right about the arms though. What irritated me most was that I didn't even notice until I scanned the picture; my lack of observational prowess is quite worrying :/
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You are short a few dozen buckles, but I had to crack the joke. Its siren song called to me.
And don't worry, we're here to observe for you. Just keep putting stuff up, we'll gladly look at it all. It's good to see that you're starting to put stuff out on a regular basis again. For a while there you were the fastest artist on the interweb.
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love your girls as always, i love their beautiful looks and the way you draw them in perfect proportion !!!! XD
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